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SA_nimk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

masam..plzzz plzzz pm me the season 2 of if only link...plzzz😭

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0082016nit

@0082016nit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

read 22 chaps...superb

going to read rest😃

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metitaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

masam ,please pm me the part 2 link yaar...

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

For Chapter 3 :

Masam, can you break a heart that is already broken ? Yes. This heart of mine breaks over and over again with each update, why are you doing this to me ?

Khushi, I know she is trying to muster as much strength as she can to go through with this and fight, I don't know whether she is right or wrong. Arnav is just miserable, but I think he too is responsible for this mess as much as Khushi. He'd better not blame Khushi in all this, there is a lot he has done in the past he has to make up for. Though I hope the accident gets Khushi to come back, but thats too much to hope for. I am glad he at least has Tina and Ali by his side.

But what really saddens me is that it is Aryan, that innocent child suffers the most in all this mess. Why ? There is no place for innocence in this world - Arnav's "jasmine", or this little darling.

And Masam, I have heard that there is beauty in sadness and thats how it inspires poetry; I have seen that come true with your updates. As the updates become more and more heartbreaking, your writing seems to get more poignant, and almost divine. And this time even STB gave no relief.

Please, make things better ? I want to see Shashi's blood. And Aryan's smile. Give me that, please ?

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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800734

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Hi I just got this FF...I read 1 chapter before then lost the link...its awesome...
Can I follow you in blog???
Please let me know your blog...It will be very nice of you...😊

Edited by Luv_isnt_classy - 12 years ago

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Masam,

I have this fist sized lump lodged in my throat and it is hurting like crazy. Each time, I want to write to you, telling you I hate this story and I want give up on it and I cannot; just bloody cannot. The optimist in me wants to cling on to anything in hope something good may happen in the next update but you are wearing me out.

Aryan is just four years old, just FOUR and he has to go through that and my favourite boy has to be subject to something he is no way bloody responsible for, how is it fair? That innocent child has to bear the brunt of the decisions his parents have taken and both are at fault here.

My heart cracks more with each update can someone like Khushi who is as innocent as Aryan not have a beautiful life. She is trying her best to do what she thinks will soften the blows for Arnav and Aryan in future, the soundness of that decision is subject to endless argument but she is right in her place. She is also right to ask Arnav about the six year clause, he had told her about it had he not?

Arnav is a broken man there have been too many things that have happened to him in life and he is breaking a bit by bit. The sooner he clears the mess he created in the first place the better it is for all concerned. He needs to take stock of his life and then act; he has to stop blaming Khushi. He cannot treat her going back to her father as betrayal, when he had shut her out of his heart all the time. Soul search Arnav, it is about time.

Tina and Ali are god sent for this tortured family, hope they have their peace too. In times like this we forget how helpful friends can actually be.

I want Shashi to be tortured and kept alive, Chinese torture to be specific, please grant me that in some way.

PS – I hate that you write this well, had to get that off my chest.

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meradil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

masam you still haven't emailed me the link to unbound :(

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

PM me your email ID's.

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someoneipk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

I was really not in India forum in three months that much;;;;;;;;;;;;;;when I returned I got to read your story up to 16 chapter;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;Is it possible to pm me the link of your blog?;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;your story is one of the most amazing, emotional one I have come across this time...really wonderful;;;;;;;;; I really don't want to finish my journey to this ff uncompleted...please...