Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

can't wait to read what Arnav reaction will be.

as always your amazing writer.

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Simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Beautifully written!!!

That was so good:)

I wonder what Arnav's reaction will be. Maybe he will apologize for all the stuff has happened in the past and put his hand forward for friendship!!

I really liked how you are showing Khushi, her strong and vulnerable side. You do justice to all of the characters in all of your works:)

I know that what you have planned for this story will be beyond brilliant!! I cannot wait to read it!

Keep up the awesome work:)

Thank you very much for the pm! (I did a little dance when I saw that you had updated this)

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Why do you even need to ask if you should continue this story? no was never an option where you are concerned.

loved both the chapters. i agree with you on the damage they have done to khushi's character. i like your approach so much more. i agree she should have depth and that comes through in your story.

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toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wow i love this concept, i liked how you described both of their point of views!! 👍🏼khushi's diary is really interesting. she wrote down some important things which arnav definitely should know..hmm..now after reading her diary, what will arnav do?

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Swetyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Its just beautiful...
Emotional...loved her resolutions...
Can't wait to see arnav reactions to this

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Absolutely brilliant update. Loved it. Waiting to read more.

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mkd4020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

loved it... Wow arnav read her diary... Wonder what her reactions are going to be????? Also beautifully described emotions... Keep up the good work girl...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Absolutely wonderful writing...i too see kushi the same way...continue soon..

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

How come I didnt get a PM. Offended, like really offended.

I am liking the story and the seriousness underlying it in Khushi's xase and the slightly funny yet reflective underlining of Arnav's thoughts...its like a role reversal of sorts and hence makes the whole thong very interesting.

Khushi's diary entries as you said made more sense in their seriousness because one can't expect her to be jovial everywhere and one place she can let go of herself and worry is her personal diary.

Good job. Continue soon.

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Reem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

WOW I was not expecting such an emotional 2nd chapter. You are right, she does hide her emotions & sensitivity with her smile and comical acts. Reading her new year's resolution makes me admire her more & it also breaks my heart a little but. She has been supporting her family for the past year yet she still feels that she is not doing enough. Her confusion about Arnav & his actions are well reflected in your writing. 👏

Arnav will soon be reading this & I can;t wait to see his reaction. You surprised me with this update so I am not even going to guess what's coming next. 👍🏼

Do continue soon! 😃