Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

This is really really genius! The detail with which u have penned down Khushi's emotions and thoughts- beautiful! And ur play with words- fantastic! This update is a reader's delight! Wonder what Arnav thinks now?

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Oh I love the way Khushi has so meticulously written down her new year resolution. That girl has a heart of gold.

And great that she has finally written down on paper her confusion with regard to her relationship with Arnav Singh Raizada. I am so glad that Arnav got to read the diary.

The ball is in his court now...

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Okay, after that roller-coaster ride through Khushi's innermost thoughts, several things -

- I really wanted a redemption track on the show because I honestly believe that Arnav never realized or atoned for most of the sins he committed, and almost all the pain he caused. That one tiny sorry and going to temple are just not enough. So, I loved the plot you have come up with. For someone who has seen poverty in the past, Arnav's insensitivity is unpardonable. At least this way, he is practically getting a first hand view of all the anguish, the hardships and the struggles hidden behind the smiles of that unbelievably young morsel of a woman. Reality check, and how!

- That whole experience of pouring one's heart out on paper on impulse was beautifully described. My heart went out to Khushi, but I also found myself relating to her thought process. When you write it down, muddled things start to clear up even in your own head.

- Letters and diary entries are my favorite narrative devices. It allows the whole truth, the complete unabashed truth to come out. Methinks you nailed it :)

- But Khushi was not one to wallow in self-pity. She was not a martyr. She was born fighter, bred from an early age to meet difficulty face up, head held high, to battle tooth and nail for what she believed in, and have the courage to get up again when she fell. - I think that line goes out to all those women out there - embodiment-s of strength and endurance. I'll share a secret, it reminded me of my late grandmother :)

- Now that you have been very wicked and left it at that point, please update soon. I cannot wait to see how Arnav responds/reacts to this. I'm sure you have planned something wonderful.

PS - Thanks for the PM. I want the next PM super-soon :)

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Beautiful! I wonder how Arnav will react to these revelations...can't wait...pretty please!😆

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choochootrain

@choochootrain

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Tat diary telling wat kushi's plans n how she felt...v good...ur story is good tat i cant stop reading it again...hope it shed some light for arnav coz he can b dense at times...

Cant wait for nex chaptr...hope u cont...

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

awesome... i always felt there was something more to Arnav coming to Akash's help.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Loved it..

This Khushi in her diary is a real sensitive girl whose glances we got rarely in the show. I totally agree that behind the kiddish, always upto some mischief is a girl who is a thinker, giver, fighter..

Amazing update..

Now waiting for Arnav's reaction to it..

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Awesome update! Cant wait to read next part..

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

This was beautiful in every sense. Arnav's curious, confused thoughts and the human tendency, here since it was Khushi's diary, I don't think he could ever stop himself from prying. But, I am thrilled that the man will understand exactly the amount of hurt he has bestowed Khushi with.

And I was left teary-eyed, whilst Khushi was crying. Amazing Nafisa, as ever!:)