Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!* - Page 27

this is such an interesting read...just read all the 4 chapters...wonderful!

I so wanted to read Arnav's thoughts on what he read in the diary that actually I skimmed through Akash's part. Sorry! But knowing the contents of that diary was quite heart-wrenching and I was desperately waiting for Arnav's response!
At the end I know that Arnav's denial makes sense but as updates come after a long time, I as a reader become impatient! I literally had no interest left in Akash's part which I otherwise might have had! Sorry..
Eagerly waiting for next update!!

Nice chapter..so typical of ASR to convince himself to believe some lame excuse rather than accept the fact that he can actually feel something for khushi other than annoyance n contempt. Waiting to read how he comes around! 😉 thanks for the update hope you get some time out of your busy schedule for the next one too 😃

You were probably thinking that the second half of the chapter - showing Arnav is denial would be more commented on, which I'm guessing that would have been the case too...because yes, it's about Arnav. And that part was brilliantly described and deserves appreciation because you handled ASR's 'koi fark nahi padta' mode/phase brilliantly. But for me, the first half of the chapter came across as the work of a sheer genius. Akash had always been one of my favourite characters in the show. Partly because I always felt that there was a lot of scope to develop the character in a fine manner (and partly because Akshay Dogra played it real well 😉). Very few people write about Akash and even out of those who write about him...I haven't come across anyone who has managed to bring out details about the character so beautifully as if we had always known all those things; as if they were always meant to be. That's another feather attached to your cap, I must say. I'll give you a standing ovation for that! 👏

Every single detail in the chapter was, as always, so precise. After finishing every paragraph (yes, paragraph) I couldn't help but take a pause and wonder how you ever managed to put thoughts so perfectly in to words, without compromising on the beauty of the choice and flow of words. And the thing that I liked best was the humour - not the kind that makes you double with laughter but the one that is funny even without trying to; one that spreads a warm and lingering smile on your face. (see, that's another mark of a genius 😉).

Bass, sab toh bol diya. Aur kuch kehne ko he nahi hai. I used words to show appreciation for you. Now I'll use actions. Here's one of my bone crashing hugs for you (which is reserved for a very few, special people 😉) for not only being the awesome writer you are but also the adorable person you are! 🤗

love this story

Very nice. Pls update soon

awesome update.

love it

really nice update 😊 so khushi left before he could see her..hmm..what will arnav do??