ARIYA FF: Yeh pyar maine kyun jaana? Pg139

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abjeya

@abjeya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

the update was too good. u described really well the way riya was trying to hold herself back but failed miserably. please let arjun heal her soon.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

superb update as usual..!!!👏

lvd it..!!!

the song suited the situation perfectly..!!

poor riya..!!! feeling bad fr her..!!!

lvd hw arjun is tryng to bring old riya back..!!!

cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!

continue soon..!!

thx fr d pm..!!

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shibz24

@shibz24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

superb update as usual..!!!👏

lvd it..!!!

the song suited the situation perfectly..!!

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Love Choree.

Love Ariya's dance ... you perfectly describe their steps & emotions.

Lovely song.

Each line is perfect for them.

Finally she lost in him for a minutes .

Now is too difficult to handle 4 Rawte.

hmm, now waiting 4 nxt update ,

how Arjun tackle her , help her to come out with her past.

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Di fab update loved it..
emotional hmm..
turmoil of ariya...
superb song di..
chotu n starters rofl...
do continue soon di..
amazing..!!

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fasiha

@fasiha_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

wow u r just a fab writer

while reading just got flowed along with the song

loved arjun's decision for asking to dance

atleast he took the 1st step towards riya

hope riya breaks soon with that suraj

loved rathode for understanding ariya

hope arjun handles riya

waiting for next part

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

@tani23:

had a tough time penning it down yaar...isiliye itne din postpone karthi rahi...

i am happy that u liked it

next one is going to be even more intense...face off between Ariya...may be a little of the tortures she faced would come out too!

thanks to all those likes and comments...based on the comments, i will quicken my updates...😉😆

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

it was a superb update...
Loved it..

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

WOW Vidya didi!!

Superb..!!

It was realy very nice,,.!!

Aapne bhi yeh gaana use kiya... NICE!!!

Continue soon!!

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

OMG That Was Too. Uff.. You Know.. You Took My Heart aWays By Your Writing Skills..😭 Thanks You So Much Vidya.. 😃

Edited by Santhu.The.King - 12 years ago

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