ARIYA FF: Yeh pyar maine kyun jaana? Pg139

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

That was an absolutely beautiful update..!

The choice of song.. "Mere Haath mein Tera Haath ho.. Sari Jannate mere Saath ho.." the perfect words!

I really love the way you choose those songs! I mean.. how do you even get that idea?? 😃

Riya has been emotionally destroyed by what happened in her life.

Of course she would not want to trust her eyes.. They speak volumes!

It wouldn't be difficult for Arjun to bring that Riya out if he can get her to speak, talk about her pain. But is it really that easy?

Riya is right now, very much like Arjun himself..

Will be looking forward to the next update! 😊

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

It was amazing di

i like that line "mujhe meri Riya waapas chahiye"

di janleve update

and song selection is fantastic and it is also my favorite

song di so tnx for song

pls keep writing

and tnx for pm

update soon👏👍🏼🤗

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Hey Vidya.. Thanks for the Pm!

Girl, you've left me speechless.. Whoever said, words are needed for an honest confession.. If this wasn't one, I don't know what is.. Beautiful to the core..

Brilliant choice of song, yet again.. It is one of my eternal favorites.. And the way, you've built the dance sequence around it, deserves applause.. 👏

I'm so glad that Arjun has finally decided to let go of his inhibitions and take the first step.. Now, it's over to Riya to either cover the distance or walk away..

Needless, to say, I'll be rooting for the former.. As always, thank you for an 'Ariyalicious' update..

Awaiting more.. Thanks..

P.S.: Choree are indeed adorable! 😃

Edited by mohabbatgirl - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

hi vidya di🤗 lovely update...although riya was lost but thanax to arjun... shree chotu...they tried really hard ... but in end riya ters flown out because she knew well he cant hide her pain from arjun...their eye convo was beautiful di...hope evrything will get perfect soon

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Awesome part... led the way Ariya's emmotions r potrayed... hope they figure out things soon... waiting for nxt part

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Hey ...

That was brilliant :)

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

amazing vidya😊...i really like how the story is progressing😊
riya's turmoil when her heart wanted to bridge the gap between her n arjun but her mind refused to let that happen was superbly described!😊...i loved the dance part...for me trust me it was the most expressive part of this update...their eyes did all the talking n never did they have to open their mouths to voice their emotions!
the last part where riya realized that she was so close to arjun n that they had been literally lost in each other was lovely...cant wait to see them together...i hope she opens up to him once n shares her distress with him soon😲
update soon vidya...will be waiting for it😊

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beatrice_89

@beatrice_89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Update was a treat indeed. Thanks for the pm. Song was apt selection and described the situation perfectly. Hope arjun sorts out every thing and things become perfect btw ariya. Waiting for your next update eagerly

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Disha

@.Brok3nSoul.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Chapter 5B: Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan…..hokhe tera aasmaan

Totally apt title..he was there the whole time, but at that time he was in denial and now she is..Finally, we got the glimpses of the past, Suraj's "Perfect Proposal"..and the Irony in Riya's life- joh pyaar karta hain woh bata ta nahi hain, joh nahi karta woh!

How long this repentance phase will carry on? 😕

BTW…Whhhaaattt??

Sonali?? >.<

The pretty lady in peach desginer saree!! : P

Kya Di!!! : (...Aapko pata hain na how much I like him!

The hot chief is back…Yayy!! *Happy Dance*

Nice Update! 😊

Chapter 6A: Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho

Dance kar rahi hain 😲……mere sameer ke sath 😵….oh no!! 🥺

Too late now…the green-eyed monster has crept in now!..lol 🤣

Loved it..how the duo reminded her that they are there any time, any place…awhh..friends to die for!! 😳

I'm Glad that Arjun is taking the first step and firmly putting every effort to resolve the differences…When I read the precap I though you would create such situation that they have dance together…but he came and asked her for a dance..I was surprised!! 😊

Kab taki bhaagegi bach-bach ke? 😆

I guess now…Arjun will try to mano-ify her! 😉

I'm really excited for the next chapter now…please make it soon!!

Propsal milega kya?

See you in ZMD now! 🤣