FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Liked it Meera. Only complain. It ended too soon. Now waiting for Saiyu on 21st Dec.

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madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

I absolutely loved this Meera special. Quintessential ASR and KKG in action here. You've captured her sanka quotient and his "ASR" ness so well here, including the struggle to understand why his heart beats for this crazy chick! Wonderful stuff.

I am so looking forward to what happens in the bathroom! Rasgulla...the baton is yours! 😊

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Lovely stuff Meera, what a cracking first encounter. You have brought out the essence of Kushi Gotewali Gupta and Arnav Khadoos Raizada, very well.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Bookmarking this ff

I have to run...(WORK -INTERNSHIP -STUDIES..and i m dying...)

will be back...errr..soon i guess😉

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maana

@maana

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Nice update.. I must say u guys have some real talent..
Waiting 4 the next part now.

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lovespell

@lovespell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Nice one! ASR was so smitten. Yet resisting his urge. I love this IPK2. He is not believing khushi that she designed the Gota bikinis for AR. This is going to be fun if khushi escape

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

nice to read most of my favourite writers in one place!

a lovely beginning... really nice to see khushi's pride in her work... her accidental entry on stage, followed by her trip and fall into arnav's arms brought back memories! this arnav's quip, though mocking, was somehow different... the clash begins! depends now on how things progress...

with that kind of attitude none of the girls deserve to be Miss Indias in the true sense of the word! aman really needs to be kicked where it hurts!

don't understand this looking down on people from small town India when they seem to be go-getters willing toput in the hardwork to fulfil their dreams... they at least don't try to pretend to be what they aren't!

loved the second part by meera... arnav smitten by khushi but unwilling to admit to it... the gall of the man not to give her her due... someone in the know better enlighten him fast... so looks like once more khushi's reputation is going to be besmirched... kudos to her for not taking the 'easy' way out and 'admitting' her guilt... hopefully she'll manage to escape without hurting herself and without drawing further attention, especially from the media, to herself!

eager for the next update

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Great stuff Meera.

Thank you guys for coming up with this FF, it keeps on getting better and better .

This is sheer delight to read.

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Great follow up update Meera to Maxine's chapter.👍🏼

N d fall n catch from where d epicness called IPKKND started is back n how...loved it Meera.So Arnav is angry with her but still noticed d tiniest thing dat is her nose pin...hmmm...n d spell has been cast 😊

Arnav not didi n nani but even we were stumped when U used d right proverb on d right time n dat too in hindi😆(ohh sorry ...in accented hindi...as per Khushi)😉Hahahaha Khushi n her inner monologues n her imagination🤣

So waiting now for her next crazy antic.

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Ooh!

The confrontation and the tension!

Meera,

You are brilliant!

I love this chapter! What I love is, that you gave her a chance to explain herself. She wasn't the non taking, not able to express herself person. Here she is still a firecracker, intent on getting to her goals. While being polite and slightly crazy.

And ASR, well, he hasnt believed her. True to character. But doesn't the fact that she furnished her name readily and details, would influence his judgment? May be it will. Or since this is doing it right, he would investigate and realize his mistake.

Also, the part about not getting the pictures released! Well done!

Thanh you!