FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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oceanssea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

It was an awesome update,Meeraji.
The best part being when Arnav asked if Khushi was being paid and she said yes.😆
Waiting for next update.😃

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Reading something from Meeraji after so long! And it was amazing just as i remembered it! And I absolutely loved Khushi's inner monologue and getting ahead of herself when she started with her blabbering and the little character specifics you noted like ASR's accented Hindi. And the last part...Lol! Great job! :)

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anumadduri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

An awesome start by Madmaxine and another wonderful 2nd chapter by meera . And as per the story title you guys are " Doing It Fabulously Right :) . Seriously a superb thought by you guys for this collaboration and guys it is totally worth it. Am already captivated . The Gota wala Bikini start was innovative ;) As usual love this khushi who thinks that Arnav might be an alien and is gleeful at that the thought of an imminent escape . And what to say about Arnav *SIGH* . Missed this Arnav & Khushi and their chemistry towards the end of the show .

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Great update..loving IPK 2...havign a great time imagining new stoy with Sarun :-))

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

at least ASR acknowledges the initial attraction! I hope he does more research on her.. and she was working for him!

Ohh khushi is going to try to escape through a window..

awesome second part!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Creature from outer space n head wit antenna 🤣 i cant stop imagng n laughng abt it . . Arnav n hs Asr mode hayyye hw he thougt to smile n shiftd to asr mode . .hahaha i love him . . Nd Khushi the beauty admired by Arnav is 'Paagal hai par cute hai' wud love to read nxt part ! Thnks to stalking . .😊

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Oh i love this khushi...the girl has the spunk and gall to stand in front THE ASR ...loved it that she didn't cry and stood her ground...and now she is heading towards a run!!!! Awesome👏

Thank god ASR atleast acknowledged that he is attracted😳...

The "gota-seamstress" convo was just hilarious...

Loved it

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Arnav's dry humor and Khushi's incessant chatter. A perfect combo.
It ended soon, that made me click my tongue.
The attraction is there but unacknowledged.
Gotas on bikini, still can't get over it!
Fantastic update, Meera!

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Meera, fabulous update!

I love, love, love Arnav's sense of humour. And Khushi with her usual sanki-ness, picturing him with antennas atop his head! This story just keeps getting better..😆