*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: Making Decisions - Page 53

What was that, I thot I will get some peace after reading the 2nd chapter, but u made me more restless zehra... I Want the entire story right now, now, now... Can't wait for all the updates coming one by one esp for this one, really can't...

U didn't write how he actually was with her - mean, rude (definitely he must not have been accommodating, patient, considerate)... but seeing him the next day, he was so indifferent and the way he asked payal if she wanted loan too, Yuks... now I dunno if I want to know about it. Right now he doesn't seem to be the hero at all... And I don't like him... He called khushi by that name??? How dare he? So worried for khushi. Poor girl. Payal, such a caring sis, she is a lioness trying to protect her cub. Intelligent too...
What happens to khushi?? And how and where does the story progress, I am dying to know more... Pls update soon...

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😊 Love the way u write. It keeps me on the edge of the seat waiting for ur update.

Okay... Where the hell did khushi go?????
And arnav doesnt care where she went?? Sick, twisted... Okay stop there...
You write so well...lived the chapter... But hell you left it a biiiggg cliffhanger... And that is not nice...
And thank you for the email... You asked which story i read... Would it be creepy if i told you i stalk all of them???
So yeah, i read them all

what kind of asss is arnav!!!!!!!!!! god he is hateful, why did he do this!

Okay...in terms of writing, you're brilliant in all genres. But this story, where the hell is it going? I'm a little confused too! :-P Hopefully things will get clear in the next few chapters.

I'm very curious to see how you will develop this coz this not a story that we haven't heard before. Given that you are known for surprising your readers, I have high expectations! (no pressure, though ;-) ) :-P

Sore? With a bruised neck? And all that she could remember was his voice taunting him? Damn ASR! Bloody excuse for a man. Ugh! Appi, you always make me hate him! :-P

Jaldi jaldi likhiye. I can't bear the wait in this story! It'll keep tormenting me.



To answer your email, I wanted your blog link to read all your upcoming stories and also the previous ones, sometimes...whenever I feel like it! :-) I hope that you are aware of my existence? Lol! Jk! ;-)


Edit - Just got the blog link. Thanks. Will not share it; you can be assured! ;-)

give me your blog link.. im pretty much waiting to read your works.., which i missed due to my exams.. please

Firstly thank you for the mail !!!! I love your writing and would love to read more !! Have read your FF's and all the OS's but cldnt read most of them cx they were on the blog !!! Plxx mail me the blog link !!!
The update was simply amazing !!!!!!
The way you described khushi's condition and feelings was superb !! Her pain could be felt !!!!
Loved payals concern for khushi and how she took it on herself to find khushi !!!
Love your Payal !!! The way she spoke to sim and asr !!!! Brilliant !!!! Her parting line was superb !!!!
Wonder what anjali saw !!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!!

i am happy that payal shows arnav his right way arrr