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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. the concept is really really good... cont soon... waiting eagerly!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice start.really eager to read the nxt part.update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Taani- I don't care how you do it?! I want it to be done and perfect till the end of the day..
With aasma nearing taani was very hyper. Every detail had to be just perfect and she didn't take no as an answer.


Listening to loud noises her mom came upstairs and stood at the door smiling at her daughter. Taani was her mother's gem.. and she reminded her of herself in younger days.

Meghna- Taanu, calm down.
Taani- (keeping her phone down) ma, you know we have a new instructor coming today. God knows how will he be! And to add to my troubles these people can't handle stage decoration also!
Meghna- Relax beta! You know it will be alright at the end. And if you want to actually give your best then you just have to keep calm. Or else you'll waste your energy in shouting.
Taani- Yes ma( smiling )

Soon she left for her institute.On the way she was praying that the instructor should be good enough.
After reaching there she started her work for the day.She called divya to check upon this new guy.
Taani- Divya, has the instructor arrived?
Divya- yes ma'am. He has started choreographing also. He is in studio two.
Taani- Ok! Continue your work and keep me updated.
Divya- Yes ma'am.

With the workload being so immense Taani didn't leave her cabin at all the entire day. Her intention to go check the guy failed. Being the workaholic she is she left last.
Around 11:30 pm

Taani finished her work and was about to leave when suddenly her cell rang
Taani- Ha ma I am sorry.. I am just leaving.
Meghna- I am waiting. Come soon.
Taani- Yes ma.

She closed her cabin door and started walking towards the exit. She paused after watching some lights coming from the far end of the hall. She wondered who is sitting so late she walked upto the lights. She saw it was studio two.
She wondered who is their and went in. Walking two three steps she stopped.

A guy was dancing to the beats of the song "addicted". He moved so fluidly that it amazed Taani. His emotions were so pure and he danced as if it was his life. Then the song shifted to "Apologize" and suddenly the calm expression changed into anger and pain. Tears flowed from his eyes and he moved with equaly fluidness and aggresion. At last he paused and breathed heavily.
All this while Taani just stood still watching him move. At last finishing his dance the guy moved back.. Quickly put on his shirt and was about to leave. Suddenly he stopped watching Taani.
He could not take his eyes of her face. Her expression's said it all, that she had seen his dance. All her questions were clear just like her heart felt.

Taani- Hi, you danced amazingly. Your change in dance styles was exceptionally good.
Guy- thank you! (he could see how hard she was trying not to comment upon the last bit of the song).
Guy- You don't have to judge me just beacuse of the song I danced on.
Taani- (a bit shocked replied) listen I am not judging you.Its.
Guy-(cut her mid way) Then why do you have that look on your face?
Taani- Well because this is my studio and I don't know who you are.
Guy- (Shocked) oh! I am sorry. I didn't..
Taani- (irritated) Its ok. I don't have time for this.You better leave early. Bye
Guy- huh?! you are so weird. Even I don't have time. bye.

This way both irritated start to leave. Bam! They get themselves hurt on their heads since both were trying to go before the other.. Without saying sorry they went away riding in their cars.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar Riya.. this was amazing... but one request.. could you plz make ur updates longer..??!!!! u write so well.. i just want to keep on reading n reading.. plss.. its a request!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome encounter dear...i liked the way u described HIM dancing...and the encounter ...cute...but ended in a negative note
Plz update soon ..😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome... think rey has a painful past..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Beautiful start dear...
generally i don't read Taarey ...
this one i am reading because you have written this one...
i liked the start...Taani's characterization is nice...
nice surroundings...
I know that person is Rey...

waiting for the story to get unfolded...😳

deep di.. aww thank you soo much for reading it for me..:) loved your comment.. as you have encouraged me to start writing..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghasingh

it was awesome... think rey has a painful past..

thanks megha:) and for knowing if the guy is rey or not you'll have to wait! :p Cuz you never know..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 3

As taani took out her care and started driving she remembered few things her mom had told her to pick up on the way! She stopped by at the grocery store, ran in quickly as it was raining and started to buy things that she recalled! Finishing quickly she went and groaned after watching the long que at the biling counter.She joined the list of people who were equally irritated by the receptonist's slow work. Finally after waiting for few minutes her number came. Greeting the receptionist with a smile she took her belongings with her and ran to her car. As she drove away from the grocery store she noticed a car standing on the side of the road which had its indicators on. She thought of asking what the matter was. So, she paused next t the car and pressed the horn loud enogh to hear.
(Hearing the sound) A guy came out from behnd the car's bonnet and walked up to the passenger side window and peeped in.
Taani- Hey, what happened? It seems your car broke!
Guy2- Yea I guess some problem with the engine.
Taani- You need some help? I can give you the garage owner's no.
Guy2- Uh..no thanks. I guess its very dark and its also raining so it wouldn't be nice to call a guy down here at this time. But there is something else you can do to help.
Taani- yea say.
Guy2- maybe if you are going to queensway park can you drop me there?
Taani- Yes sure come in. I live in queensway park.
Guy2- Oh nice. Thanks I'll just brng my bags.
After bringing his bags he hopped on to the front seat.
Taani- I am Taani btw. Taani Shikawat.
Guy2- Oh hi Taani. I am Rey, Reyaansh Singhania.
Taani- (smiles) hi rey! So you here in lonavala on business?
Rey- No I just shifted here. I am working on a development project for my company so they have posted me here.
Taani- That's nice.
Rey- yes.. and you? you a native over here?
Taani- No! me and my family shifted here ten years ago. Earlier we were in US.
Rey- oh now we have two things in comman! *hi fi*
Taani- two?
Rey- yea one we both live in queensway park and two we both were living in US earlier.
Taani- (laughs)
Rey- (staring at her) blurts out- you look beautiful!
Taani- (shocked) sorry? did u say something?
Rey-(coming back to his senses) uh no.. nothing.
Taani thinks ( wierd guy) and Rey thinks (control dude, its not US that you start flirting at one go)
For rest of the ride they discuss the famous places in lonavala and other things.
Taani- So here we are at queensway park. Which house do you stay at?
Rey- I don't knw. Wait i'll just check. (He takes out his phone and reads the address out loud)
C-4, plot 52, queensway park,lonavala,India
Taani- (Smiles) Now we have three things in comman.
Rey- Wait! Don't tell me you have the same address. Because then we would be roommates or housemates.
Taani- (laughing) no I meant that my house is just next door to you.
Rey- Woah. now we are neighbour's!
Taani- yes! So here you go. That's your house.
Rey- And that's your.
Taani- Ok then goodnight!
Rey- Yea goodnight and thanks for dropping me.
Taani- Anytime!
Rey- sweet..
Rey starts to walk towards hs door and taani parks her car in the driveway. She gets out and due to the rain falls down. Watching her fall Rey rushes over to her help.
Rey- Omg, are u ok Taani?
Taani- Yes its my fav passtime to fall down. I do this daily.
Rey- Huh?
Taani- dumbo ofcourse I am NOT ok! I fell down you see.
Rey- oh.. yea I thought for a second you wre serious about the passtime thing!
Taani- Now would you help me up atleast?
Rey- Oh! Yea I am sorry I totally forgot.
He forwards his hand towards Taani to help her get up. But since she hit a stone her ankle is sprained and she can't get up.
Rey- Hey, do you plan to get up or not?
Taani- I can't. My leg.. its paining.
Rey- Oh.. umm. Wait.
He bends down and picks her up in his arms. Taani is shocked by this action of his ut as she needed the help, she agrees.
Rey carries her to her doorstep all the while staring down at the beauty in his arms he puts her down gently as if he is scared she'll break.
Taani rings her doorbell and this brings Rey back to his senses. He leaves her alone,goes to her car and carries her bags to her.
After this he walks of even before Taani can say thank you.

He rushes into her door and draws the curtains. He turns off the lights and peeps out checking if she has gone in safely. I f she fell or did it pain her much. As soon as Taani is out of his sighthe put on the lights and rests in his new house.
Meanwhile, here Taani is thinking about this new chemistry she had with Rey.
Taani- wait why am I thinking it as chemistry?! He was just helping me.
She thinks she is overthinking and changes and goes for dinner.

Now how did these two turn into enemies? How did love happen? Stay tuned to know more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooops...Bang on update swthrt...i mean so much at one go...the meeting..the flirting..the commeon things...awww...i loved the way he was admiring her ...and the meetcute was just PERFECT...but a little confusion here..who is the guy in academy ...m already looking forward for next part...plz plz update soon dear ...m loving the pace of this SS...u r doing a gr8 job...nice flow in the update...

PS-really sorry for commenting so late dear ...i missed the link ...SORRYYY...maaf kar dena plz

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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