FF: Destiny (Ch. 7 Updated on Pg. 36!)

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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

superb update
loved the case
ariya sence were amazing loved them
waiting to read more ariya sence
update soon

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Aukview

@Aukview

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Brilliant as usual!!

Now waiting to see how Riya and Arjun's

relationship progresses...

Please don't make us wait too long...continue soon :)

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

it was amazing

fantastic

and waiting for ariya seen

and tnx for pm

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

sorry 4 late comment dear!
realy wonderful update!
waitting 4 more ARIYA!

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Superb update dear.
Love Riya's bonding with the other two.
Waiting for more.
Pls continue soon.
Thanx for pm.
Sorry for late reply.
Was out for over the past month.

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..pink..

@..pink..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Its good...infact awesome...finally the case is over and we have some new plot coming up...😊
U r a gud writer...but I wanted to say something being a loyal reader and follower of this fiction..
I hope u dont mind and plz ignore if u find something wrong in it...

I know u must b busy with ur daily schedules but plz try to make frequent updates...
Actually I wait for ur fiction for the whole week desperately...there are so many characters in ur fiction that I always got confused and once I begin to remember them...the gap between the updates results in making me forget them or they get jumbled in my mind...

Still if ur work pressure is an issue, I'll try to read the fiction with more concentration and focus...next tym...

But Great Work...👏👏
Plz update soon

Edited by pink_fairy123 - 12 years ago

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Read all the 3 parts in one go...and they were superb..

Have to say you are simply the best when it comes to cases...It was so well written...👏

Ariya was again at their best...
Karan seems to be a shady guy...and what was the smirk thing between Arjun and him...any past link kya???

Eagerly waiting to read more...do continue soon..

Thanks for the PM!

Edited by rajvi20 - 12 years ago

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: pink_fairy123
Its good...infact awesome...finally the case is over and we have some new plot coming up...😊
U r a gud writer...but I wanted to say something being a loyal reader and follower of this fiction..
I hope u dont mind and plz ignore if u find something wrong in it...

I know u must b busy with ur daily schedules but plz try to make frequent updates...
Actually I wait for ur fiction for the whole week desperately...there are so many characters in ur fiction that I always got confused and once I begin to remember them...the gap between the updates results in making me forget them or they get jumbled in my mind...

Still if ur work pressure is an issue, I'll try to read the fiction with more concentration and focus...next tym...

But Great Work...👏👏
Plz update soon

Thank you so much!!!

The gap worries me too..! I know how difficult it is..

I'll try to give frequent updates from now on.. even though they are smaller..

But you the work pressure is indeed an issue for me..! Thanks a lot for understanding.. I'll try to update sooner dear.. for sure! 😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

sorry for late comment, just read your part c😳

hmmm again i can only compliment you on your writing and imaginative skills for thrillers

The story in general is very good, brilliant plot and everything👏

The case was a very good one, and unfortunately people do a lot of damage in jealousy, but killing Rohan was a bit too much evil😡

I'm happy that the criminals have been arrested😊

And now for Arjun and Riya's story, you have created a web of miscommunication and misunderstanding between these two, but they both do care a lot for each other

N if i'm not wrong, Riya only went away because she realised her love for Arjun and couldnt see him being with someone else, so she ran away and tried somehow to survive, and hence she concentrated a lot on her job i guess

N now she's back and soon getting engaged with Karan

Waiting patiently to know how the story will unfold, and what exactly happened to Riya in those 3 years...

Please update soon

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

rose :

commenting on your three updates together, i just love the way you explain the case details ..it makes them look so real. the entire conspiracy of rita and aniketh to humiliate nisha and ruin her career for their own selfish reasons reminded me a similar scene from the movie Fashion, but i think samar was the most disgusting of all ..how could he help them in their crime when he knew what they were up to😡 ? and i hate it when people stoop to such low levels if they are jealous or their ego is hurt ... i mean, how could such people even think that they are worthy of being loved and appreciated 😡? disgusting😡 ! and i'm really feeling bad for nisha and rohan ..more for rohan at the way he was brutally murdered for trying to get justice for his love. i'm so happy that they were finally caught by the ETF ..may they rot forever in jail😡 !

loved shree-riya-chottu interactions, hoping to get more of them in future😃. riya is right , time and circumstances often changes, or rather forces a person to change. arjun has lost his roshni, we know that. but riya😲 ? how and why did she change 😕? and now karan too has come into the picture .. things are getting interesting. update soon.😊