FF: Destiny (Ch. 7 Updated on Pg. 36!)

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Awesum dear...!!!
loved it...
waiting fr more..
I m gng on a vacation today,...
able to read at after one week..!!

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

hi dear🤗 it was such a brillant n amazing update...the case was intresting n mysterious from starting to ending ...loved riya's action scenes...asusual arjun's lectures tooo...i hope ki arjun n riya ki misunderstanding door ho jaaye...update soon

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

OMG riya getting married and wat id goin on between ariya is i can't understand but still the going is great

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daisydee425

@daisydee425

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

awesome update
loved the trio's bond on first day

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Superb as usual.The case +Ariya's nok jhok.U know what i feel by reading your FF is that Arjun & riya did had feelings for each other from beginning itself although arjun misinterpreted as mere friendship & Riyabeing aware of here feelings towards arjun left for london after arjun's marraige.Is it correct?But anyways whatever be the case 1 thing is for sure that I love ur writings.

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

WOW...loved this new ARIYA and their new equations...

So Riya is getting engaged to Karan...

And looks like Karan is already a bit insecure about ARIYA...could be wrong too...the way he said "riya ka hone wala pathi!" put that thought into me...

cont soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Awesum dear..
loved it..
pls let me knw when u r gng to update f&W
eagerly waiting..
i knw u r busy wid clg n work..
bt still wanna knw!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

the case intersting
and riya ki hone vale pati???
and intersting updates
continue soon

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

very nice part...

the investigation part was well executd.

ariya part also good.

continue soon

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Hi! I just read the three new parts and later went back and read the whole story from the beginning.

It was such a pleasure to observe the changing dynamic that you have painstakingly portrayed between Arjun and Riya from the first chapter and how it has built up till now.

I think the silence between Arjun and Riya is very interesting because clearly there are a lot of unresolved issues and differences between them and this adds to the interest of the story.

I am waiting for you to update the next chapter so that I can have more of this well-wrought tale...now that a third person Karan has been brought into the equation things are bound to get spicier:D Well done, and hope you post the next one soon:)