TANHA wala swaron~ff*love saga*part 5:updated~pg.12

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Mellifluous.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Loved it to the core!!! Udescribed it so well!!! Very nice! Continue soon and do pm me!!!!

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@silver6strings

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome update...😊😊

i did not get pm for this update...😭

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Preethi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hey guys do u guys want me to continue this ss? no one gving proper response lso 😭😭 but if will contine ill contine it as only tanha wala swaron ss wat say?

Edited by preethi_shamya - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Yes, please please please continue it!! 😃

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Preethi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

hey guys ok iam finally back with ss.. this os of swaron is only TANha wala swaron

so,swayam works all day in the istitution teaches dace then he comes back home in the evening.he rings the calling bell sharon opens the door swayam kisses her chicks and says i love you.. sharon blushes pushes him away as she goes inside the house swayam slowly close the door and holds sharons hand from behind and pull her close from behind

swayam: i told i love you but you are not saying anything

sharon:say wat?

swayam pulling her more close and says: you dont know?

sharon: no

swayam: arey wat kind of wife are you? you dont even want to say back i love you

sharon:(pushes him away) leave me swayam i have work to do.. your dinner is ready go refresh youself till then ill arrange the table

swayam obeyed and he went insde to change his dress he pulled out a white colour t-shirt and seeing that he could rember something

that he saw sharon for the 1st time when he was wearing this t-shirt only

he was keeping the shirt in his hand & is off to dreamland again

after he was sitting in exam hall he was very surprised to she the same girl whome she saw in mall sitting next to him in skin colour frock .. he couldnt control his happiness before he could call her bell rang and itz time for examination

queston papers where distributed and every one starterd writting exept him he was again off to dreamland just admiring her the way she was sitting the way her eyes moved ehen she was writting the eyebrow movement the way she was chewing the pen cap when she was thinking..he could observe each and evry moment of her clearly ..he dint write anything then again bell rang and he realised that he had'nt started yet so in hurry burry he looks into question paper now he picks his pen to write but suddenly he was just 1ly able to see the girl in white frok whome he crashed in the mall is visible in that plain white paper everything seemed blank atlast he madeup his mind to start writting ..time passed and last bell rang it was as if like siron sound calling him swayam to his years then he came back to the presnt and realise tat it was his wife siron sharon who was calling him exactlly when he was thinking abt exams last bell😆

tats all for today .. i knw its small but ill update next tomo hope you liked it.. please do leave your valuable comments 😊 thank for all of your sweeet comments iam glad you liked it😊

Edited by preethi_shamya - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Wow, that was such a nice update. I really liked it though the length was ahem ahem very short but still i liked it.

Haha Swayam kahi paper main fail na ho jaye.. but ho bhi gaya tu kya.. love main ti pass ho jayega na!! 😆

It seems like there is something that is why Sharon is blushing and all.. is it?

Well will update for tom's update and Pm me.

Thanx fr updating, as i asked you for!

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Hey in first paragraph you have written that e rang the bell and Sneha opened the door.. jab kai likhna Sharon tha.. correct it yaar.

Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 12 years ago