TANHA wala swaron~ff*love saga*part 5:updated~pg.12

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Preethi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys iam gono update my 1st ff hope u will like it.its abt TanHA wala swaron love story how tey are going to fall in love & get married and abt there married life. Itz not a love story itz going to be a *love saga* .there is dil there is dosti and also dance .il update this soon

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Preethi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX

CHARACTERS

CHAPTER1:PART~1

part~2

part~3

part~4

PART~5

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Preethi1

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INTRODUCTION

CHARACTERS:

1ST let me introduse the hero & heroine .then we can see rest cast😊

swayam shekhawat:

Smart,dashing,choclate boy jispay ladkiya marti hai par tannu nay aj tak kisi ladki ko ak utakar b nahi deka expecpt one girl(ill tell who is that in later story)

He is an awsome dancer,his dance moves are just attrack others ,which made every girl fall in love(his looks also😳)he is role model to her friends.everyone wants to dance like him .

friens call him"LITTLE RITHIK ROSHAN"😳

though he is silent in nature he funloving boy.expert in takling the problems!a PEACE MAKER

SHARON RAI PRAKASH:

A DIVA,stylish but deep inside has family values spoiled bart papa's princess. she is fun loving girl but has lot of attitude in her.she is just opposite to swayam a problem creater! syren sharon.but does everything for her best friends.stands for them when they need her

she is also an awsome dancer .she is also role model to her friends.everyone wants to dance like her .friends call her "DANCING DIXIT" (she dances like maduri dixit)& "DANCING DIVA"

so how did destiny made them fall in love? lets see in nxt chapter

ps:this is my first ff so forgive me if any mistakes & as i dono knw hindi ill update everyting in english,sorry if i make any mistake

next update will be at pg.3😊

Edited by preethi_shamya - 12 years ago

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Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wowww:-) do pm me:-) waiting:-)

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx for starting this Preeti😊😊😊😊 and thanx a ton for the PM

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Preethi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha
Thanx for starting this Preeti😊😊😊😊 and thanx a ton for the PM

iam glad u liked it😃😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow nd thanx for the Pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow nice post

pls do pm me

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jasleen

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice and interesting do continue with it

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Preethi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ok guys thank you for your comments😊 glad that you like it😃
ok iam changing from TANha to swaron on a request hope you guys will not mind.hope you guys will find TANha wala love through this swaron ff😊😳

CHAPTER 1:

PART~1

AT THE MALL

DELHI

SO,our charming hero of the story swayam is from kolkata but he comes to Delhi to give his entrance exams for joining college.

Here the story begins... someone is writing the beautiful memories of their life,so lets see what's there on the store..

so begings writing

That was Winter,A beautiful fogy sunday at Delhi.i was so lazy and tierd after studying long hours till late saturday night i was not even able to open my eyes .There came my chachi and opened the screen, winters sun half hot and cold sun race galred on my eyes and i opened my eyes showing my palms to sun race to avoid the glaring of sunlight..eyes half closed and opened yawned softly.My chachi told me tat you have came to Delhi after a long time so lets go out for shopping..how about mall?i gave a no sign and told her tat i have to study for my exam.chachi started tat studies will go on nothing will happen if you come out for one day. saying so i again yawned softly pulled away my bedspread put my legs down,wore my slippers went to take bath

8:30AM:

Breakfast was ready chachi made my favourite dish Aloo parata.so After finishing my breakfast @ 9:00 all got ready to go to nehibouring mall. @ 10:00 evryone was ready to go to mall.

now ill not refer I but he,she

So,he & his 2 cousin brother and a sister & his chachi went to mall everyone went forward swayam stopped to check message in his phone.so,he carries a diet coke in his hand as he moves front seeing his phone without knowing some one is coming towards him.By mistake without seeing the one who standing in front of him (by just loking @ phone) dashes at the person who comes towards him & just spills the cock in the dress now he says "ouch!" the one's dress cocke been spilled says in a very sweet cuckoo voice "what the hell!" now swayam slowly raises his chin to see who is that so as he could see a girl about 19yearswith white colour & woring a short white colour frock (itz just an inch above the knees) As he again raises little higher to see her face he obseves she is a beautiful brown skin complextion beautiful dark black curly hair which is upto her shoulers(her hair dressed free hair woring two clips to the left of her hair) wide rosy lips not thick nor thin a small black moutain carved eyebrows with black fish like eyes down applied kajal. had a not chubby nor small cheeks." A girl stood before me i was just shocked & she was beautiful like angel . she again started tat cant you see! & was scolding me i was admiring her that i dont even know what she is saying.. then she called"excuse me" then i came back from the dream land & raised my hands & said" iam realy sorry i dint see you coming" she told me the you should keep your front & walk "i mummered:i will" 😳she asked what? i said; nothing iam sorry .. then passed me and was walking away i turned back & saw her " wow!! her walking also has some magic yar" saying so i was abt to fall one of my cousin came there & catched me.. asked me what happened i said nothing & he said lets go i again turned to see wether she is around but by that time she vanished among the crowd.

"That was the magic day which turned everything upside down"

enough for today.ill update nxt part tomorrow.sorry if any mistake. ive expalained each & evry thing which made this very big if u dont want big do tell me ill make it presise.do press like buttoun & give your valube comment.😊

~preethi

Edited by preethi_shamya - 12 years ago