Oh i love N.K. The way u described his relationship with Arnav , that too from the past was hillarious . This is what i love about ur writing , u take ur own required time to explore a character or a relationship and it clearly makes an impact on our minds !
"Their relationship was an odd one. While there was some competition and rivalry
present, there was also a deeper bond - one of family - and that was something
that both of them cherished. If either one was in a problem, both were assured
that the other would drop everything and rush to each other's aid."
U said it Krani ! Just in these 3 lines . This is what we call family , no matter how much we fight or pretend to hate each other , in tough times , we will stand by each other , providing support and help .
"It irritated him further that during the entire time he had been with her, he had never seen her laugh or smile so openly, and for the first time, Arnav realised that there was this other side to the woman that he did not know about."
Typical men's trait , they don't care about u but the moment u are happy with someone else , they get irritated ! Idiots ! Oh Arnav , she has a lot more to her personality than u think u know . Just open ur prejudiced mind and let it explore her character , u would know what a gem she is .
"Arnav smirked and took a step forward, ready to accept the gushing of tears as she would throw herself at him, thanking him profusely for the gift, and forgiving
him."
Yeah sure ! Like i said earlier , you need to open ur mind and explore her character . Dude , you cannot buy her apology by a mere gift . And she would surely not throw herself at u just because of some diamonds ! Duhh!
"She lifted the card attached with it, and Arnav knew what was written on it, the
printed card that was attached to all his gifts,
From Arnav Singh Raizada
Founder of AR Company "
Aur gayi bhains pani mai ! Couldn't you just write a simple ' I'm sorry Khushi , plz forgive me' , Mr. Raizada ? Here too u want to show ur power , authority , being the founder of ARC . She is ur wife not an associate ! How could u !
"You didn't like the present?"
And here it goes again ! He still doesn't understand it , does he ? ITS NOT ABOUT THE PRESENT ! Huh ! This man would be the end of me oh ! i mean khushi !
"I don't need anybody's forgiveness, least of all yours"
Arghhh ! Even after so much drama , this arrogance didn't go away ! Go to hell ! Just remember , it would be you who would come back to her and apologize in the near future ! Right Krani ?
"If you want my forgiveness, then earn it" She said quietly, "whatever you have
done for the past month; blaming me for everything is not something that a piece
of jewellery is going to make me forget. If you want me to forgive you for
yesterday, then earn it Mr. Raizada"
Oh i so love this Khushi ! Good going girl ! Love ur spirit , u have self respect and i know Krani would keep it intact till the end of the story !
Amazing Krani ! Two updates together ! And one more coming up ! Yess !
Sorry for the late comment , i didn't know that u updates this .
Waiting for the next one !
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It has crossed 150 pages ! New thread ! New thread ! New thread !
Edited by shai95 - 12 years ago
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