Arshi FF: Cubicles...Part 11 pg 41updated

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lilgirl19

@lilgirl19

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: kamtokdin
This is one hilarious story, seriously. The interaction between the two sounds so real, funny, tender, touching. Can't wait for you to reveal more of Arnav. And for Kushi to find her real prince.

Why are u always apologizing for your story? You are one heck of a writer. Much better than many other writers here. You are new, it will take time for people to notice new writer n story. Take heart n go on.

I really enjoy your story. It's different. Would be a great shame if you stop.

Thanx for lending me ur support...ya now i realize i m a new writer and writing about a protagonist who's not at all hot, rich or arrogant...
I will write no matter what now...
Maybe in d future I will write about someone who's rich/arrogant/conceited/...and the list goes on...😆

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lilgirl19

@lilgirl19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: the_breeze
hey am so glad you updated!!

and the romantic scene was well written dear, it was an apt description of a moment between our sizzling pair! 😳

and please dont get too disheartened, we LOVE your story and are gonna stick with it till the end!

so take care and update soon 😉

Thank u the_breeze(sry don't know ur name) for pledging 2 stick wid me till d end

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Hey yaar continue for sure.. I like dis ff a lot:)..

This update was supercool.. Both can feel weid sensations being close to each other;)..

I loved the the way Arnav openly flirted wid khushi n then khushi stuck to him wen it was dark!..

But chp was rlly small.. Nxt tym write a bigg chp.. N write it soon:)

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bunnylovessunny

@bunnylovessunny

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

awesome update!! the part where it gets dark was just soo cute!! :D

I just Love Arnav in this story yaar! You do such an awesome job with this fic :D

Please update the next one fast, looking forward to it :)

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

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Thanx Disha di, ur a grt support for me...nw don't worry i will surely end it in a gud way although not 2 soon as i had planned earlier😉
Ya they obviously can't start making out...reading dose scenes make me blush...imagine wat will happen if i write😳
of course i will make it logical...a lil bit cheesy perhaps😆

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3 Cheers for you !!! Hip Hip Hurray !!

Oh please whether you blush or whatever drown in pool of water i want my romaanchik updates for future ... Cheesy ho to aur bhi acha !!!🤣

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

love it awesome update and plzzz update soon and not discontinue it anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Adorable update...Loved it...Arnav's dialogues are hillarious...

Plz update soon...

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Nice update . Please don't stop writing this story, you really write it very well.

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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

awesome update😊😊...loved it❤️...waiting for them to confess their feelings...continue soon...and thanks for the pm😃

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lilgirl19

@lilgirl19

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny
awesome update!! the part where it gets dark was just soo cute!! :D

I just Love Arnav in this story yaar! You do such an awesome job with this fic :D

Please update the next one fast, looking forward to it :)

yaa thinkin of updatin 2morrow