Arshi FF: Cubicles...Part 11 pg 41updated

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Oh God you need a serious pep talk i think !!!

I love this FF and have enjoyed reading all the updates immensely!!

They always have an edge to them and are diff from the run of the mill with arrogant ASR and docile Khushi kinda stories which is the best part of this story for me. Both are on equal parameters.

I would be disheartened to see this story hung in the air so i really request you that if in future you do decide to not continue further (sincerely hope u do though ,but its not my call you are the one who has to write 😆) i would urge you to at least give it a logical end.

I hope all's well otherwise at your end !!😃

Coming to the update !!

I loved it , I dont think Arnav can get any cuter , he is sooo adorable !! As time progresses i am sure Khushi will find it more difficult to stay away from him and his charming ways!!😳

You added just the right amount of flirting and romance since obviously they cannot just start making out. It will all happen gradually!!😉

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

This is one hilarious story, seriously. The interaction between the two sounds so real, funny, tender, touching. Can't wait for you to reveal more of Arnav. And for Kushi to find her real prince.

Why are u always apologizing for your story? You are one heck of a writer. Much better than many other writers here. You are new, it will take time for people to notice new writer n story. Take heart n go on.

I really enjoy your story. It's different. Would be a great shame if you stop.

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

hey am so glad you updated!!

and the romantic scene was well written dear, it was an apt description of a moment between our sizzling pair! 😳

and please dont get too disheartened, we LOVE your story and are gonna stick with it till the end!

so take care and update soon 😉

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

So happy to read this update.. its very cute.. continue soon

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

nice update, both of them are starting to feel..., it was good a start of the realization.

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Yup,me too, like this story very much n it has potential,only u must believe it. we r n will always look forward to ur updates :)

Dear Arnav, daar ke age pyaar hai. chance pe dance karlo. Khushi falling under his charm. also love their talks n bantering.

thnx 4 pm.

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Lovely update.

The budding romance b/n arshi is so well written dear.

this romantic stuff is perfect. Dn't be dishearten you are a new writer but you write flawlessly.I loved it.

And the update is really nice.and light heartenEd. I loved it.
And I am waiting when these two will confess their love.

Thnx for the pm.

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Aww.nice update.
I like this arnav."daro mat.darr ke agey bado.darr ke agey jeet hai".lol,that was hilarious.
Yot were thinking of discontinuing this story.common yaar,dont do that.take all the time you want and give it a perfect ending it deserves.