#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: Kasurbest
Will just say,
my fav. part in the whole update has to be
"Haan. Shalon tya tahegi."
Amar is so sweet. Hmm Rey and Kriya meeting again isn't it when Kriya comes back for the Footloose? All I remember is your OS 'Dramatic Return of' that was like a sneak peak to this fiction ryt?

Aha! Thanks.

And yes, Kriya does officially come back on FootLoose. And that is why there are things in between that need to be added. I cannot skip through that phase to post their meeting when it's New years for us..

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Awesome Update😃
Loved the boys teasing Swayam and the chotu sa SwaRon moment😉
Taani's character seems fresh and bubbly😊

Thank you so much dearie!

Hha Boys will be boys. Happy you liked that.

Yes.. Taani's character..

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
Me late 😔

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Ok so me 2nd 😃

Well u updated ?

Really ?

Kithe ?

Menu dikha hi nai

Yeh toh Shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho Gaya

Kya yaar hb
rofl! I was about to say.. andhi ho gai? Phir sarcasm dekha 🤣
**pout**

Well I liking this tani woohoo

Overall nice update

Abrupt ending

Liked kriya n smriti's part

Still unsatisfied with short update ya kuch aur..? 😕

Waiting fr next badly it will be soon :D

Update soon

P. S. hwz u ? getting better..

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Misha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Pata nai Tera soon kabaayega

Pout

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
Pata nai Tera soon kabaayega

Pout

See it's 3 55 pm right now.. Another update will be when it's 9 pm here.. so do the counting😉

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Misha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Mat lab when I wake up m getting a update ??

Yaaayyy !

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arshafever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

awesome update.. i liked taani's chracter and also how the swaron story is moving ahead.. i guess happy times r comin soon 4 them 😉
bt eagerly waiting 4 KR meet..!! pls pls update fast fast and give the meet..!! 😛
awesome work..!!
thanks 4 the pm..
happy new year in advance and keep writing..!! 😊

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
Mat lab when I wake up m getting a update ??

Yaaayyy !

Yupp! Aab jaldi jaake so jaiyo 🤗

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: arshafever
awesome update.. i liked taani's chracter and also how the swaron story is moving ahead.. i guess happy times r comin soon 4 them 😉
bt eagerly waiting 4 KR meet..!! pls pls update fast fast and give the meet..!! 😛
awesome work..!!
thanks 4 the pm..
happy new year in advance and keep writing..!! 😊

Thank you dear! I'm glad you liked Taani's Character. Yup, happy times are surely coming.

KR meet... Lets see when that happens 😳

Happy NY in advance to you as well 🤗