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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter One


"Widow!! at such a young age!!!"

"aree woh manhus hai...usko pati ka beti ne kaha!!! varna shadi ke sirf che mahine baad pati mar gaya"

"aisa kyun kehrahe hon aap log... uski umar kitna tha aur yeh to bechari bacchi hai"

This was the talk that was doing circles in a small village of Lucknow where Khushi sat as a stone.

Not probably because her husband died but thinking she'd have to go back to her step mom. She shuddered even thinking of it.

She'd miss her husband... he was a kind man... he treated her like very kindly. His first wife died two years ago leaving him with five children and a large household. He needed someone to manage his house since his daughter got married so thus he married a 19 year old girl.His eldest daughter didn't like her much but now that her father died she is probably worried Khushi will ask for a share in the property thus bad mouthing her.

Khushi couldn't care less about the family.

She'd love to be on her own and earn her own living but alas a widow working outside house and earning is quite unheard of in this part of the country.

Widows now-a-days don't require shaving their heads and such formalities, her step mom didn't shave her head when her father died but now she insists that khushi has to do it. She saw in her dream a wise man telling her and now she insisted.

Bullshit!!! She knew it was her scheme so that she runs away and doesn't claim a share in the almost non existant property.

Just then Devyani Raizada entered the place. She'd come to visit her ancestrarial place after almost ten years. Last she came here Khushi's mother had died. She's wanted to take her to Delhi with herself but neither Khushi nor her father wanted to let go of each other. She didn't force.

As soon as she entered sheesh mahal she asked the caretaker there how is Khushi?? When she heard her woes she immediately rushed over.

She wanted to take Khushi with her to Delhi. She lives all alone with her grandson who stays outside more than at home. How long does a person like staying alone? If Khushi is there atleast she'll get company and also save her from the evilness that is her step mom.

so she told Khushi's bua that she'd like to take Khushi with her and she readily agreed.

...


In one night she was shifted to Sheesh Mahal and within two days she found herself in Delhi.

"Hello Manorama"

"namsate sasuma aap Lucknow se thik se wapas aa gayi?"

"haan I am fine"

"How is everything there"

"what to say sasuma... the whole house is so gloomy"

"did he go to office"

"yes I sent him to office... he is slowly turning back to normal"

"I wanted to share some news with you"

"what news!!"

"you remember Khushi?"

"Garima's Ladki? who was married off to a fifty year old guy by her step mother"

"yes!! her husband died suddenly'

"I can't say I am sorry for him but I am really sorry for Khushi!!! such a lovely child and so young"

"I brought her with me to Delhi... "

"very good sasuma!! I don't want her to live with her step mom"

"Manorama I was wondering how would Khushi look with NK? He got divorced she is a widow!! She is so pretty!! If she arrives in NK's life NK will get over Saiyu soon and start his life afresh with Khushi... and you can come back here"

"but she is from village and he is so modern ... how will we matchmake"

"she studied till 12th standard... I'll enroll her in a college here and see that she slowly understands our lifestyle... aur waise bhi khushi ko dekh kar he'll forget that nalayak Saiyu soon"

"you've given me a great news sasuma... plz send me the pic so I can see... I want NK to settle down with a sanskari ladki like Khushiii..."

...

Knock knock

"come in"

"are nani did you need anything?"

"haan chotte, can you do one thing for me? scan this pic and send it to manorama"

"sure nani...give it to me"

Arnav without even looking at the pic scanned and sent it to mami

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Regarding PMS

I have not decided if I'll send pms so PLZ DON"T SEND ME FRIEND REQUEST

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Before you guys get angry on me I'll say myself I'll update A,L or W tomorrow 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can we get a round of applause for Fari,please??????YESSS!

Unres'd

First thing first...'NK to get over Saiyu'?????🤣
First of all, NK or Ahsaan...None can get over our Saiyyu that easily, samjhi tum?😡
Second of all, why is there no character named after me????😭😭😭😭😭

& I like the story, because, it's just the first chapter, but you already forked their paths in as opposing directions as you could! I mean, I don't think her being a widow would be a problem for Arnav or any of the Raizada's...But her being married to a 50year old man might set off Arnav's gold-digger-sensors, which almost always send of the outrageously wrong signals!!

& plus, she's already being handed to NK on a silver platter, & the platter being Arnav here..& on top of that, no one asked Khushi anything!!

& she being a widow is all set to have all kind of reserves, & confusions, & turmoils...!!!

Intriguing, Sammy!!!Very intriguing!!!!👏
Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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There's Saiyu in this story !!!!
And you're going to make her evil ?? She was the bad wife who divorced a gem like NK ?

Khushi a widow ! This the first story I think I'm reading about a widowed Khushi ...
Her condition is so pathetic..Evil step mom, married to a 50 yr old man whose family hates her and now widowed :(

Why fear when Nani is there ?? She came to the rescue !

Khushi deserves a chance at happiness and lets see how she gets it !
Now Arnav and Khushi are under the same roof... He hasn't even seen her and they're planning to get married to a divorced NK ... Of course it isn't going to happen..
But what will she do when she comes to know of it ? She'd probably think they're taking her for granted since she doesn't have anyone ??

Waiting for Arnav-Khushi meeting :D


Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ji

Sorry for unresing late..

Anyhoo.. finally read the first chapter..
Brilliant start..
I love deviyani and mami, they seem soo down to earth and want best for khushi..
<3 .. ahah love how she's straight to fixing Nk and khushi.. LOL..

Love will hopefully find its way and hopefully bump into Mr right!!!

Off to read the next two chapters (:
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sami, I am already loving this SS :D

This has a widowed Khushi who will be taken away by Devyani to her house i.e. Shantivan :D Aur Shantivan mein kaun rehta hai? No points for guessing. It is Arnav! Meko ArHi chahiye bas.

This Saiyu is so bad 😆 Bichara NK. Chalo koi nahi bach gaya woh Saiyu ke changul se :D

Off to read the next chapter :)
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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R

I read Saiyu and I went all

I make an appearance in the story?! 😲

And I am nalayak and I divorced NK???? 😲 Why would I let go off anyone as good looking as him??? Did I have eyes for Arnav after marriage? 😉


Poor Khushi... But as long as the Raizadas are here I am sure she is in good hands.

And I feel for Khushi. Pre-marriage a step mom, marriage to a 50 yr old, post-marriage a widow...

I hope she finally gets love 😊
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh ho Samiya, another captivating talewa huh?
A poor fatherless heroine being forced by her vamp of a step mom to marry an old man, a god-mother in the form of Nani, a brooding (I am imagining) and unwilling hero, a sad second lead...haye, I am in dream land.
Darruuun...
I am hooked, like always.
A proud phanwa.
Edited by sun_shine_girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
oh and wen will u update 'arranged, love whatever...'?
Edited by Dynamix215 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start, update soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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khushi widow

Step mother

NK divorced

Khushi brought to raizada mansion by nani

khusgi is going to join to college also
arnav yet not meet her

Here's story start

just love it

update soon

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