Arshi FF~~'Mine' Part12[Pg117]&Thread#2 Link Pg150 - Page 65

The concept of this story is really interesting. I feel like even after 11 parts there is still a lot to discover between the characters.
And u definitly established khushi as a equal to arnav. Which I feel is really hard to do by writing.
Looking forward to the next part :)

u protray nicely about aman's side of story

i just got through ur ff.its truly amazing.i loved it.hope u update soon .waiting for ur update.

Its awesome ff yaar pls do pm me...

Nice FF.. pls pm me too! 😳

Loved it
My id is mani-6@hotmail.co.uk

Wow...A great storyline...

Came across this story today and I've just finished reading the entire 11 chapters. I love the story and your writing style. The story is a bit complicated but your writing has made it quite simple and beautiful even though most may shun a living- in relationship. I loved how you took time to explore the nature of these relations the connection between the main 3; Arnav, Khushi and Aman. I know you've said that love have not been discussed between them but I'm sure both or one must have felt something remotely close to the term or feeling of love for the other. Arnav wondering how he stayed with her for one year so far when he was mainly interested in flings and one nightstands was a sign of how complicated things can become or maybe how uncomplicated his life can be if he wants it to be. I felt a pinch in my heart when Khushi more or less considered herself only as Arnav's property. I sure wish she can see things changing soon and maybe her perspective will change. Anyway I love your Khushi, a tad bit strong and independent. Please continue writing and I hope I can continue reading this to the end.