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Thanks for the PM and blog invitation.
I like Anjali and Shyam in ur story...
I understand the way u explained Arnav expressing his feelings to Kushi through action, but is Kushi content with that ? As u mentioned She is a girl with modern perspective but she accepted the contract cause she didn't had any other option. Arnav used to remind her the name of their relationship often so for her this relationship is just a temporary one which completely depends on Arnav's decision. In many FF Kushi was tolerating Arnav's rude behavior because she loves Arnav but in this FF Kushi accepted the contract of a person to escape from a worst situation and even if Arnav is providing everything she needed she knows that her each and every move is observed by Arnav, so basically she is living a life with less freedom .I am aware that she cannot show any sort of hesitation in front of Arnav but I would like to read Kushi's POV regarding her situation .
In part 12 I missed my favorite character Aman .
Altogether it was an interesting chapter which gave an idea of Arnav's family, his attachment to DI and some idea about his temperament .
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