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Madhu aaj type karne ka mood nahi hai...bt bahot jaldi update karungi next part...not today...so sry dear ...

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Nahi bolungi 😛 ...coz tumhi ne kaha tha no sry no thanks... 😉
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Bt,mujhe update chahiye woh bhi bahut jald. . . . . . . . . .:-D:-D. . .
And thank god tujhe sorry nahi kaha werna i would have literaly eaten u up. . . .hehehe.:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot guys for long comments...n liking my ss...actually I was thinking to change it as ff instead of ss...bcoz this story has few more updates left...will see..n yeah whoever commented initially on my last update, I thanked them individually but later on I could not continue it...sorry for that...thanks once again for whom I missed out...now I am going to update the next part...within an hr or so...hope u guys will like it...enjoy...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 10 :

Rey n kriya in reys car comes to sh house...

Rey : okay kr tum jao main todi der mein aata hu...
Kr : q ?? Aap kaha ja rahe ho..?? Aap nahi aaoge andar...? ?
Rey : baatcutter main bas ghar jaake change karke aata hoon...jaldi aunga dnt wry ( smiles)
Kr : nahi wo mein bas...(pause for few secs) okay bye jaldi aana aap...
Rey : yeah bye...

Then kr was abt to press the door bell, tani n aashi open the door..

Kr : hai...aap dono kahi ja rahe ho??

Tani : haan wo hum log bas aashi ke ghar ja rahe the isse kuch cheese lane the apne ghar se night out ke lie n change bhi karna hai isse...so..

Kr : ohhh...bt kaise jayenge aap dono...iss waqt tho yaha par auto milna bhi mushkil hai...

Aashi : will manage...todi der wait karenge tho koi na koi auto mil jayega...

Kr : nahi nahi...aap plz wait...main kuch karti hoon..

Tani : nai kr dats ok..

Kr : no...aap logo ko wapas aane mein bhi prob hojayegi fir...plz...den she calls some1..

The person on the other end : hey ...itni jaldi miss karne lagi muje...

Kr : nahi woo...( pause for few secs...then blushing) clearing her throat...nahi rey muje aapse ek help chahie thi actually..

Rey :han bolo...tumhare lie tho kuch bhi karne ke lie tayyar hoon...

Kr : smiles...actually rey aap agar jada door nahi gaye ho tho wapas aasakte ho kya ??

Rey : han han abhi aata hoon...tum bulao aur main na aaun aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya..?? Change karne ka idea drop then...

Kr : rey rey...kitna bolte ho aap...pehle meri puri baat tho sunlo...

Rey : bits his tongue...yeah sry bolo...moving his right hand on his hair..

Kr : smiles again...wo actually tani n aashi ko ashi ke ghar jana hai kuch lane tho aap plz unhe drop kijie n then aathe waqt pick karenge unhe...bcoz unhe abhi iss waqt auto nahi milega...plz

Rey : by hearing tanis name, rey becomes serious but then he remembers that he had already told everything to kria so no need to worry...

Kr : rey aap sun rahe ho na..?? Rey

Rey : yeah...han maine suna...yeah ok I vl come back now...

Kr : thanks bye...

Kr : rey aarahe hai...aap dono unhi ke sath jao n badme aapko pick up karne bhi aajayenge wo..

Aashi : thanks

Tani pov : koi shaq nahi ki sab log kriya ko itna q pyar karte hai...specially bhai aur ...

Rey comes back n tani aashi goes with him in his car...

In sh house...:(kitchen)

Sh is surfing something on her laptop...she was wearing apron , chief hat...sw goes n stands next to her..

Sw : madam kitchen mein khana banate hai...surfing nahi...

Sh : glares at him...main bhi ussi ke related surf kar rahi hoon

Sw : oh u mean recipe..? Waise ur bf knows cooking...if u want u can take advantage of his cooking skills..

Sh : smiles...bluffmaster...tum aur cooking ..?? Again starts surfing...

Sw : arre...dont underestimate ur bf sh...he z a very good cook...tum pehle batao tho sahi kya bana na hai tumhe...I vl prepare it for u...

Sh : no...jo bhi banana hai main khud banaungi...bcoz itz for kiddo...so I want to do it for her..

Sw : smiles...okay...fine atleast kya prepare karna hai ye tho batao...vl tell u how to prepare n tum banalo...simple..

Sh : good idea ( smiling widely)...actually I heard from dad that bachpan mein kr ko chocolate cake bahot pasand tha...so I was thinking to prepare chocolate cake for her...u know the recipe??

Sw : offcourse...vl tell u the ingredients 1st...tum sab ready rakho den vl tell u how to prepare...okay??

Sh : excited...haan...done...

Sw : tells her ingredients..she keeps aside all of them...but sw was busy in adoring his lady love's this new avtaar...she was looking more hot in chief hat n apron...on top off that her enthusiastic expression...it was giving more shine on her face...he forgots what he was telling...all ingredients...everthing...n started saying in dreamy tone - toda sa innocent smile, thoda sa attitude, full enthusiasm, more glittering eyes ...

Sh : who was busy in checking all the ingredient sw has told got confused that what is he saying now...she looks at him n finds sws lost state...she goes lil bit more close to him n says " aur ?"

Sw : aur ye cute si chief hat...

Sh : "aur? " (folding her hands on chest)

Sw : aur ye apron...

Sh : "aur"??

Sw : he was done with all compliments ...he could not get what to say...then he comes to his senses n finds sh standing infront of him crossing her hands on her front...

Sh : done ??

Sw : scratching back of his head ...sorry..

Sh : burst out laughing...sw u r so sweet...look at ur face...kabhi tho apne dreams se bhar raha karo...ab tho hum couple bhi ban chuke hai officially...I mean heights sw...tumhe main iss apron aur ye hat mein bhi adorable Lag rahi hoon..huh

Sw : han ab lag rahi hAi tho lag rahi ho...aaccha chodo cake banate hai abb...sare ingredient ready hai na..??

Sh : glares at him

Sw : accha baba sry...this tym without distraction recipe bataunga okay..??

Sh : shakes her head...lets c...

Sw : with full concentration he tells each steps to prepare cake this tym...they keep it in oven to set...

Sh : huh...finally its almost done...I hope acchha ban jaye...

Sw : banega banega...dont wry...

Sh : shakes her head again...n keeps on looking at oven...

Sw : sh aise oven ko ghoorne se oven fast nahi chalne lage ga...it vl take the same tym...wo tumhare AGS todi na hai ki tumhare ghoorne se fast work karega...(not looking at her...looking at oven like her)

Sh : glares at him...oh really...?? Mere Ags mere ghoorne se fast fast work karta hai?? Haa?? Jahan tak mujhe pata hai, mere ags mere ghoorne se aur relaxed kaam karta hai taki he can irritate me more...

Sw : smiles ...attention madam...i mean atleast attention tho deti ho ghoorne ke bahaane...n iss attention ke lie tumhare ags lifelong tumhe irritate karne ke lie tayyar hai...afterall he z ur diehard fan..

Sh : smiles widely...sw now stop ur dlg baazi...muje tho cake ki tension ho rahi hai...accha bana hoga na sw..?

Sw : looks at her...hmmm abhi check karke bata tha hoon..

Sh : nahi...wo abhi nahi bana hoga...dnt open..let it finish..

Sw : aur agar main bina oven open kie check karu tho...??

Sh : confused...hows that possible..??

Sw : everything is possible mam..saying this he moves towards her...

Sh did not understand what z he going to do...the way sw was staring at her makes sh blush n also makes her worried that what he meant...sw goes very close to her...cups her face...sh closes her eyes...sw slowly licks the cake dough which was thr on sh right cheek...then he was about to peck at the same place from where he tasted bt

Kr : didZzz...enters the kitchen...as soon as she looks at the scene thr, closes her eyes with her hand n turns back...n says - sry sry sry...maine kuch nahi dekha...bye bye...carry on...saying this she runs from thr without looking back again...sw n sh moves away lil bit...they both are still not in thr senses...they could not understand what just happened...after a min..

Sw : itz tasty...(smirking)

Sh : gulps ...wha...what...what do u mean ..??

Sw : I mean...goes again close to her...wiping the dough from her forehead...- cake...cake acchha bana hai...

Sh : still she doesn't looks at him...n says - thanks..

Sw : understanding her state...thanks tho muje kehna chahie...

Sh : this time she looks at him n says - why ?? Tumne muje cake banane mein help kia hai...

Sw : smiles...haan bt taste karne allow kia uske lie I would like to thank u...

Sh : blushes...its ur ryt so no need to say thanks to me for that...

Sw : smiles...tho kya main kuch aur bhi taste kar sakta hoon den..?? Goes very close to her face aiming at her lips...

Sh : blushes...bt pushes him slightly n says...its not ready till now...u have to wait for that...saying this she runs out of kitchen...1ce she z far away from kitchen she shouts...oven off kardena once its done...plz...main change karke aati hoon..




Done...its swaron update totally bcoz till now I had hardly written on them..
Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Kria calling rey part was cute.Finally some swaron scene in this ss.I was really missing their scenes
Lol loved the way swayam told her receipe n then lost in his sharon dreamland.Cake taste part was romantic.Hehe inhe pata hi nahi pada kab kria aake bhag bhi gayi 😆
Waiting for next part
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