SS kriyaansh swaron important check pg112(09/2) - Page 10

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Kya ppt de rahi hai voh,
m so happy 4 it. . . . .
Vicky ne quiz compition jeeta,nw tats interesting. . . . . . . .
Lets c wat hapns nxt. .
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and our kriyansh. . .
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awesum part

Originally posted by: smileysmi

heya guys..this is my 1st writing in this forum..hope u guys like my concept..i am a huge fan of kriyansh and swaron...i miss these 2 couples..i wish kriya could come back in d show..anyways here is my story...it starts from 2days epi scene when AVP calls the gang to her cabin..

In AVP cabin:

Every1 entered the cabin..

Vicky: aapne bulaya hume mam..??

AVP: yes...aapse direct qun puchungi..aaj jo seminar me jo performance hua, usme kaun kaun shaamil the aapme se?? ya whose idea was that??

Rey: how do we know?? hum sab tho aapke saamne hi the uss waqt..

AVP: dont act smart..muje pata hai wo sab kiska idea hoga but i want to hear it from u guys..so tell me..otherwise uske consequences sabko face karne padenge..so its better jisne kia hai wo khud accept kare..(n gives deadly look to rey)

Vicky: hum mein se kisi ne b nahi kia mam..hum sab tho wahi pe the..

Every1 says: yes mam hum sab aapke samne hi the..

AVP: ok then jo b main action lungi uss performance ke against, usse sabko face karna padega..

(again looking towards rey) i know aap sab involved nahi the usme..only couple of u were did that but kya kare apne dosto ke waje se sabko consequences jelna padega..

Rey: maine kiya tha wo...i mean wo sab mera idea tha n i did it...jo b action lenge aap mere against le sakte hai..isme inmese kisi ki b koi hath nahi hai..

Swayum: nahi mam wo

Rey: stop it swayum..meri galti thi tho saja b muje hi milegi..inmese kisi ka koi galti nahi hai isme..inhe tho pata b nahi tha ki me aise kuc karne wala hu..so plz inko chod dijie..

AVP smiles at him: i knew it..soo Reyansh aapka punishment aapko kuch hi der bata diya jayega..u may all leave now..

The whole gang is worried now..

swayum: rey tu pagal hogaya hai..sari galti apne upar lelia..humme baat hui thi na ki hum sab ye risk lenge..tho phir q rey??

Nil: haan rey..galti hum chaaron ne kiya hai tho iska saja b hum sab bhugtenge..tum akele nahi..

Aashi: exactly..rey i know aap dosti ko imp dene types ho..bt itna bada risk aap akele nahi utha sakte..we 4 all r responsible tho sab ..

swayum: consequences face karenge..

rey: guys shut up plz..maine already AVP ko kehdia hai jo kehna hai so plz shut up..dont argue now..

AVP n VP comes on the stares to anounce the decision infront of the whole clg..

Rey closes his eyes n feels something on which wide smile appears on his face..all gets confused..bcoz every1s eyes are on rey.. he opens his eyes suddenly n says BAATCUTTER...again all are confused except swayum..bcoz except swayum no1 knows that rey used to call kriya by Baatcutter name..

swayum: r u mad...yahan pe hum sab itna pareshan hai..VP n AVP wait aye hai anounce karne n u r smiling like a mad..aur tumhare baatcutter kahan se aayi bich me?? wo jaachuki hai rey..bhuil ja usse..itne mahine hogye hai..hosh me aa rey..

Rey: i am sorry..wo just i felt .(confused wat to say n how to say that he felt her presence after so long) chodo..huh

VP : so students we have decided that..

Sw: excuse me sir..before u announce ur decision i want to say that rey akele nahi main b usme shamil tha...

nil: main bhi sir..

Aashi: main bhi sir..

sw: exactly hum chaaro ne milke wo perform kie the..tho punshiment jo b hoga, hum chaaro ko milna chahie sir..

Originally posted by: smileysmi

thank u guys for lovely comments n likes..i am updating the next part..

Part 2

Vp is confused now..he did not expect this kind of reaction..he knew that along with rey, few of his frnds are also involved in that performance bt never thot that they will accept infront of the whole clg like this..which made him difficult to announce his decision..

avp senses vp's confusion so without wasting the tym she takes d initiative n says

Avp: impressive..we knew that few of u were involved with reyaansh but never thot u guys will accept it..good..so abb jo humne reyansh ke against decision liya tha, that will apply to u 3 also..

Vp: so without wasting our tym will announce our decision..n humne ye decision liya hai ki...

All r tensed..swayam holds reys hand,nil holds reys other hand..aashi holds swayams hand..all others just crossed their fingers n praying to god to save their frnds..

Avp: humne decide kiya hai ki we will suspend all 4 of u till d next term..n u are not allowed to attend this term exams also..

listening to this rey nil swayam n aashi closes der eyes..they expected something serious action against them bt not to this extent..all other gang members are hell shocked..for the 1st tym vicky decide to speak up for his best buddy ..

vicky: but sir foreign delegates n our clg higher authorities ne tho performance n unke dance as career idea se impress hue the..

taani: n sir evry student ka ye haq hota hai ke wo apne ideas apne opinions express kare..n these guys did the same thing..

neha: exactly..wat z wrong in that??

bharat: agar aap logone khud hammare baate ek baar sunli hoti tho aaj inko ye kadam na utana padta..

avp: so u guys think ye hammari galti hai??

vp: u all r ryt bt har chees execute karne ka ek tareeka hota hai..ek discipline hoti hai jo aap logo ne follow nahi kia..so this z d outcome..n no more arguments on this..u all go back to classes..

Avp: n u 4 plz clg premises me enter mat karna till next term..u guys are not allowed..hum nahi chahte baki ke students b aapko dekh kar aisa kuch...

Vp cuts off avpz sentence : u all may leave now..

all other students left except the gang..they r unable to digest whatever happened just now..they left the place thot of going to basketball court..before leaving the main door of the clg rey again suddenly stops n sees here n der..swayam notices this n takes him to bb court..

all r sad..does not know how to react..after few mins of silence

rey: swayam tum kuch jante ho uske bare mein??

sw: kiske bare mein?

rey: tumare bestfrnd..r u sure she z not back in d city??

sw: u mean kriya??

all looks at rey..shocked, confused or may b sad..

rey: exactly...ur frnd...ur frnd kriya

sw: r u mad rey..??hum sab yahan pe suspension ko lekar tensed hai n tumhe lagta hai kriya wapas aagayi hai..??btw how do i know..??rey plz bhool ja usse..wo jaa chuki hai..for god sake rey...plz move on..

rey: i can feel her(with teary eyes)..

all: wat??

rey: yes i can feel her presence..itne din nai bt aaj hi q muje aise lag raha hai ki wo yahi kahi pe hai..mere aas paas hi..guys plz trust me i have a strong feeling that wo yahin kahin pe hai aaj..

sw: shut up rey..just shut up..bahar nikal uske duniya se..i knw u still miss her bt it doesnt mean u go crazy talking like this..atleast i dnt expect something like this from u..

vicky: swayam plz relax..rey b hammari tarah ek normal insaan hai yar..usne aaj tak apne aur kriya ke bare mein kuch baat nai kia, it doest mean that he z nt hurt ya he miss her still..aaj pehli baar wo kuch express kar raha hai let him..

sw: i knw vicky bt i cant c him like this..i am helpless..i was d the only person who knew abt them frm beginning bt i could not do anything to stop her...muje nahi pata chala kab ye sab hogaya unke beech mein..jab pata chala tho wo jaa chuki thi..sabko chod kar..(by now every1 has tears in their eyes)

rey: wiping his tears: tumhari kya galti hai isme swayam..actually galti kisi ki b nahi hai..i am sure kriya ki b nahi thi..

all: wat??

rey: yes..maine hammesha se uske aankhein pade hai(read) n hammesha uske dil ki baat jaana hai uske aankein dekh kar hi..chahe uske jubaan kuch aur hi bole..bt dat day when she was telling all those bitter words to me, she has tears in her eyes..jinhe wo rokh ne ki bahot try kar rahi thi..so agar usne muje kushi kushi wo sab kaha hota tho wo aansu nai hote uske aankon me..n usse muje use hi karna hota tho, kab ka wo hamare relationship ko initiate karke muje use kar sakti thi bt...she took hell lot of tym to accept her feelings..n agar uss din me force nahi karta bar bar tho shayad wo kabhi apne feelings express b nahi karti..kuch tho missing hai meri love story mein jo usne apne sath lekar gayi..

all r unable to hold their tears..vicky hugs rey tytly..followed by all other gang members..within no tym they were in group hug..except 1 person taani..

there comes another voice.."guys muje itni jaldi bhool gaye..even i deserve this hug"

all r surprised...

to b continued(continuation of 2nd part)...keep guessing😉

Originally posted by: smileysmi

hey frnds..thank u for comments n likes😊😊..n good guessing😉..many of u have guessed it rite but few failed😛😛..here is the continuation of Part 2..enjoy..

Part2 (continued)

all are surprised to c sharon(👏😉 who guessed it ryt)..

sharon straight away goes to rey n hugs him..1ce again all are in group hug..

Sw: tum tho 1 week baad aane wali thi na??

sh: jaun wapas??

all: oohhh

sw: guys shut up..no sharon mera wo matlab nahi tha..n smiles..

all: ahem ahem...

sh: guys seriously shut up..n ya rey i was really happy ke tumne jo b express kia kria ke bare me..apne pyar ke bare me..seriously u understood her so well..

All r shocked n confused..

rinni: sharon ye tum keh rahe ho..?? wo b kria ke side le rahe ho??

sh: anyway guys leave it..mere paas jyada waqt nahi hai actually..i have some personal work..i need to go..swayam kya hum short mein announce kare.???

sw: kya?? r u serious sharon?? i mean tum khud ye chahte ho ki hum announce karde abb??

sh: haan swayam..we took really lot of tym..its tym for some seriousness ..so lets just announce it n make it official..

sw:ok ok(he is so happy..his facial expression was enough for any 1 to guess how excited he was)

sh: shall we??

sw: sure..?(facing d gang) guys we want to tell u all that me n sharon r couple now..

sh blushing looking at d gang..sw z exited like a kid to c his frnds reaction..

vicky: seriously?? yaar inka ye patch up n break up ka process kab tak jhelna padega hume??

nil: exactly..aaj aise sharmate hai jaise newly married couple ho n nxt day start..sh ka how dare u blah blah blah n sw ka devdas wala avtaar..

neha: neha becoming tired to c this..

sw n sh r shocked : sh: guys we thot u ppl will congratulate us..

sw: han maine tho ek aur group hug expect kia tha bt..

sh: bt ye log tho hume seriously hi nahi le rahe hai..

simmi: dekte hai..iss baar kitna serious ho aap dono..

rey: anyways jokes apart...sh tume tho pata chal gaya hoga hammare suspension ke bare me..

sh:haan..bt dnt wry aap jald clg wapas join karoge..

all : wat??

sw: mtlb??

sh: aaa..haa.. i mean..c..mera mtlb hai will find a way to get back to guys in clg..ya..haan

sw: r u ok sharon??

rey: exactly..itna confused..

sh: guys guys leave it..i have lot to chat wid u guys..i missed u all a (sharon;s ph rings)

sh:(with wide smile) 1 min guys..picks d call..

(below lines are sh part of conversation on ph)

sh: hellooo..kahan ho??

sh: accha..

sh: haan me abhi pure gang ke sath hi bb court me hu

sh: no no dnt wry

sh: han tho kuch socha hai tumne??

sh: tho muje kya karna hoga??

sh: sure me papa ko pata lungi u dnt wry abt dat..n aur kya kya info chahie batao i will mail it to u asap..

sh: shut up kiddo..mere lie b tho ye karna imp hai..u knw dat..

sh: ok den tell me the tym, i will meet u at ur place..

sh: ok fyn call me back den..n dnt wry i m wid u always now..hum dono mil ke iska face karenge.,

sh: ok..take care..

sh: bye(end of d conversation)

all r confused..

sw: sharon ye kiss se bat kar rahi thi?? wo b itni kushi kushi se pyar se..

sh: hai koi spl..jisne meri life complete kardi wapas mere lyf me aakar..

rey: wait a min..wat did u say on ph..kiddoo..u mean sharon..sharon kiddo tho tum apne sis ko bulate ho na?? mtlb wo mil gayi(rey is super excited)

sh: with teary eyes n with wide smile : yup wo muje mil gayi rey..my sis..my kiddo..wapas aagayi mere life me..

rey hugs sharon tytly..

rey: tumne muje bataya q nai..i am so happy for u sharon..i still rem tum kitna miss karti thi usse n roya karti thi usse yad karke..ur baby sis..my god..i cant blive this..finally u got her back in ur lyf..bt kaise??kahan hai wo??kab mili tum usse..

all understood the matter..bt thot they will give space to childhood buddies(rey sh) to share some precious moments wid each other..they just decided to watch them n feel their happiness..

sh: easy easy rey..exactly aise hi happy hoon me iss waqt..aise lag raha hai i got everything in my life now..no need to pretend anything..she z angel for me..guys agar aap log usse dekhoge na tho hosh udh jayega aapka..i mean not in dat sense bt ya aap logo ko itna bada jatka lage ga na..seriously..

vicky: hosh jatka n all han??wow sh tumhare tho style hi badal gaya hai abb..

sh: haha..ye sab mere kiddo ka asar hai..u guys dnt think dat maine usse kitne bade bade filmy dlgs seeke hai..wo b bollywood ke..😃

sw: seriously..

sh: haan..i mean itne saalo baad mile bt kabhi nahi laga ki kabhi hum door the ek dusre se..bt..(makes sad face)

rey: bt wat sh??

sh: i cant tell u anything now..bcoz she is on some personal prob..not prob bt

sw: kya bat hai sh??

sh: me abhi aapko uske bare me kuch nahi bata sakti n naahi mila sakti..kuch cheese hai jinko hume sort out karna hai..tho she wants ke uske baad hi me aap sabko sab batau..tab tak nai..

rey: ok bt ghar pe tho koi prob??

sh: no no rey..uske lyf me bahot kuch hua hai recently tho she just wants to sort it out first..

rey: tho teek hai..hume batao..hum sab tumhare sath hai..milke sort out karenge..

sh thinks kaash batasakti tumhe rey..bt end me tho sab tumpe hi depend karta hai..i hope tum sort out karo asap..

sw: sh kya soch rahe ho??rey tumse kuch keh raha hai..

sh: haan..sry..no rey..jab waqt aayege aap sabko pata chal jayega..abhi me kuch nahi bata sakti tume..i mean aap sab ko..maine usse promise kia hai ke nahi bataungi kisi ko..she wants to sort it out by herself..bt ek prob hai jisse solve karne mein main uski help kar rahi hu abhi usse..ussi ke bare me baat kar rahi thi me abhi ph pe usse..

rey: lagta hai tumhari sis b jiddi hai tumari tarah n smiles😊😛

sh: ofcourse behan kiski hai??😉

rinni: atleast uske naam tho batao sh hume..

sh: sry guys as i said..i cant tell u all anything ryt now..bt dnt wry sbko bahot jald usse milaungi..bas pray karo ki jald uske prob solve hojaye..

sh: actually u r ryt rey..she z too much stubborn..i can solve her prob so easily..bt no..she said "ye meri prob hai didz..isse me hi sort out karungi..ye meri zindagi aur maut ka sawal hai"..can u belive it..wo apne kud ke di ki help nai lena chahti..i am worried..i knw her story..so i cant c her suffer anymore..kash kash sab teek hojaye jald hi..n uski kushi usse wapas mil jaye..

rey n sw sensed d seriousness of the matter..to cheer her..

sw: lagta hai tumhare sis bahot hi interesting hai..no i mean seriously " zindagi aur maut ka sawal hai n all"

every1 smiles..sh too

sh: haan wo hai hi stupid..bt jaise be hai meri baby sis hai wo..uske aane ka baad meri lyf fully change hua hai..i can make out..everyday fyt karte rehte hai..bt end of the day miss karke roye nahi tho din katham nahi hota hamara..uski filmy dlgs..god..mere mood 1 min me change karti hai apne drame bazi se, apne shayari se filmy dlg se..she z such a...i dnt knw..i mean..pata nai kya kahu usko..(then her ph rings)

sh: ussi ka call hai..excuse me guys..

after talking to her sis, sh goes away n calls some1 n talks seriously for 10-15 mins..n comes back msgng sm1 happily..

sw: kisko msg kar rahi ho??

sh: pressing on send button..ya done..haan sw wo kiddo ko..wahi maine apne papa ko pata lia hai..i hope papa unke frnds ko pata de kisi b tarah se tho kri..i mean kiddo ka ek bada prob solve hojayega..den wo apne personal issue aram se sort out kar sakti hai..

rey: pata na?? sh such me tumhare kiddo ke aane se tum puri tarah se cange ho gaye ho..

rinni: bt yehi tho original sh hai..ab tak tho most of the tyms she just used to pretend n hide her original innocence so that no 1 can hurt her..

simmi: exactly..we r very thankful to ur sis ki usne sh ke sare insecurities ko itni jaldi uske lyf se the end kardia..

sh : i told u..she z my angel..uske paas mere har prob ka soln hota hai..

rey sw are happy seeing sh so happy n relieved..they never saw her in such a piece of mind..infact all were happy..n eager to meet sh's sis..

sh: ok guys..i gtg..she z waiting for me..n ya missed u all...nahi kahungi😛..bcoz to b frank iss baar kiddo ke milne ke kushi mein maine aap logo ko itna miss nahi kia..sry😛..challo bye all..

sh started to run bt suddenly she stops n turn back n says..

sh: guys just ignore suspension matter..u guys will b very soon back in d clg..😉..b4 any1 wud qun her she runs off from der..happily...jumping..

nil: wat did she just say??

sw: haan..paagal hogayi hai apne behan ke milne pe..

rey:😊 bt i am happy for her..n she z upto smthng jo wo share nahi karna chahti..

sw: in that case..will just leave it upto her..

simmi: will wait n c..

vickey: usne kaha hai tho, we still have hopes..

nil : lets c..

after all this, 2 ppl r very sad..1 is tani n other 1 is aashi..(u guys can understand y😉)

ok guys dats it for now..will conti soon..plz comment n hit the like button😊

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