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abjeya

@abjeya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

awww. u know muskaan reading your end note i can practically imagine the steam coming out of your head, okay,okay i am just joking but the update was really good. loved the way arjun had flashbacks of riya and even at that time riya was so cute. please let arjun save riya soon and confess his love to her. so please update soon.

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

Thank u so much dr for considering me in ur list ...
mn thank u so much dr for reply...n dont warry...main roj ek comment karungi

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sarahjareen

@sarahjareen

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#853

Beautifully written... when will you update the next part... how long will keep riya away from arjun.

Loved the way you made us wait the update...

No word to explain the update you have written...

Share the updates ASAP.

Love your writing skills. Plan to make a movie. It will be a hit...

awaiting for your update.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#854

heyy hope you are fine now..!!!

superb awsum fantastic update..!!!👏⭐️

loved it..!!!

that sik na..!!!! how dare he challenge our etf..!!!!🤢😡

loved d slap arjun's father gave to sik..!!!

wow shree got all that information even arjun was impressed with him..!!!

awww arjun made shree to confess how he got all that info..!!!😆😉

loved how everybody is concerned for riya..!!

wow that flashback scene ws awsum..!!!

their kiss was sooo hot..!!!! n arjun's feelings wow..!!!

m still blushing like hell...!!!☺️

poor riya she scared from arjun and hiding in the room and bathroom full day..!!!

loved arjun's anger at the fact that she has not eaten the whole day..!!!

arjun forgot to pick them up from airport..!!!😲

amit was total awsum..!!!

loved the way he replied to arjun..!!! aww his one tooth missing smile..!!!😆

that sky is so pathetic..!!!🤢

he drugged riya and carried her in a box..!!!😡

thank god arjun recognised him..!!!

finally he saw riya..!!! yayy..!!!

but how dare sky slapped riya ab to arjun ke hath se ussse koi ni bacha sakta..!!!

end is scary...!!! riya and sky at the end of the cliff with gun and arjun jumping on him..!!!

cant wait for the next part..!!!

continue soon..!!

thx fr d pm..!!!

have pm u my email id..!!!😊

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qsc12345678

@qsc12345678

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#855

😊Awesome, Perfect.

Loved how Riya was wiling to wait for him. She is so scared of him and loves him at the same time too. Hope he tells her soon that he loves her. Hope that they meet soon.

Waiting for the next update eagerly. See U...

😊😊

Edited by qsc12345678 - 12 years ago

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#856

first of all tnx so much to adding me in your pm list
now for you and your ff love u both so much

it was amazing

outstanding,awesome,lovely,too good and you know i have no more words to appreciate you

you are such a amazing writer

i like that seen where all the team is ready to catch sikender's brother red handed with riya and they cover up all the airport and working different place and cheating with codeword also

i am happy to know that atlest arjun see the riya

and ye kya you stop writing that where it to close to riya free from sky

pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon

and tnx for pm👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.

Edited by 12pr - 12 years ago

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Pinky pan

@piupan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#857

hey plz tc...😊
n yaa dis part was awsum...😊 jst hope dat arjun can save riya asap 4rm dat bloody sik n his so called bro sky...😡

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#858

First i say sorry dr...mujhe pata he nahi chala when u upadte...!!!
but thank u so much for reply my pm...!!
thank u so much dr for considering me in ur list...!!!
now come to ur update...!!
what a beautifuly written..!!
waooo dr...tumne to mujhe faint ker diya..!!
kya update likha haiii..!!
first sik n king conerversation was super awesome...!!
i feel i realy watching...!!
one king in front of me...!!
ohhh my god ye arjun n his anger...super prince style...!!!
hehhee ye sach main shree he hai ya koe or...!!
shree is so smart n intteligent...!!
arjun. n rathor both impressed...!!!
i lv the cod langue..that they using in airport...!!
oufff hummm omg what a flashback...!!!
its to hot...i m bussinggghggg!!
i cant see arjun that side..!!
ohhh poor riya sacred arjun..!!she hide herself in. her room n then in bathroom...!!!
ohhh yr u r realy realyyy superstar...!!
i m ur one of big fan...!!!
plz bhul mat jana ur promise ur first autograph...only for meee...!!!!
how how hhooowww u imagine its totaly beautiful...!!!!
i can imagine every think in front of my eyes...!! ur timing ur writing is supub...!!!
i realy realy lv. ankur riya n arjun scence...!!!
in the last its so scarry yr...!!
hop arjun save her...!!
ohhh siks bro slap my poor riya...n vo bhi in front of arjun...!!ab to vo bachega nahi..ab to vo gaya...!!!
grate job dr...!!
n plz come with next part soon...!!!

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#859

Oh firstily thanx for such a long updtae but not fair stopping at such a point,can't wait to know wat will happen next.

OMG the things Arjun wanted to do to Riya,i was literally going mad while reading and riya being so scared of him and not coming out of the bedroom was so funny

Update soon