#2 Forever Yours-A Swaron FF chp 21 pg 65 28th may'14 - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
that was great!!!! 😃

a bouquet from ashish ... n swayam's mom izz back... 😊

atleast swayam ko koi realize karane wala toh hai abhi... 😉

he's really angry with ashish n his gift for sharon... 😳

poor swayam... ye nhi bolega kuch 😵
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Posted: 11 years ago
So emotional it was..
Jaldi reveal why did swayam breakup wid her..
Suspense bohot zyada hora..
Update soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
yup it is short BT nice update sway am getting jeloues ...interesting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG very nice FF yr I loved it i read it in one g. pls update soon and pls PM me Pls Pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyy Read this FF in one go :O
Already addicted
Love the story line
want to see more of Jealous Swayam and Cute Ashish moments
I hope Sharon and Ashish dont fight or anything
Love Your writting style
Lovely work
Please Please Please DM/PM me about future updates and all your other fanfictions
Pleaseee Update ASAP

P.S. Hate how annoying preeta can be -_-
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz continue soon as we are waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am a huge fan of Swaron especially Vrushan.I read this FF back to back . the first thread is fine. but even after 21 chapters i am still confused with story u have outlined. Seriously!! i couldnt get Swayyam in this FF. You are not consistant with character sketch. I get Sharon, Kriya, Rey, their parents even Priyanka or preetha, i forgot the name, but swayyam??? A guy who is head over heels in love with a girl and 11 years in a relationship almost living together in Newyork suddenly breaks off because his father said so?. In which century is he living? and then you show his mother likes Sharon than her future daughter in law. come on very weird, you son is engaged to be married to another girl and you go and visit his ex girlfriend of 11 years?? And Swayyam is portrayed as a guy with no backbone. He is dertmined to move on and broke up with her two years ago. He doesnt pick up her calls or get in touch with her and all of a sudden he is at her house. it doesnt gel to me. Just because she broke her hand, he comes back after two years just like that. When in every opportunity everybody was begging him to go back to Sharon, he didnt do it ,or rather strong enough to resist her and then suddenly he wants to take care of her. the timegap is too much then it should not be two years may be six months and its not that he doesnt like preetha,. he is happy with her too. very confused. 😲. I hate Swayam's character here.When you read all 21 chapters at one go you will know what i mean.
Edited by gsk4 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
5 things to with Sharon before I die
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Posted: 10 years ago

Ek secret admirer nahi balki ek desperate stalker hai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
West Wing
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North Wing
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