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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#131

thanks for the wonderful replies guys it keeps me boosting thanks a lot 😳

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#132

heres the next part

recap-kk makes kunal realise that his feelings for nimmo and kunal ask kk whether even nimmo loves him
kk-ofcourse sir
k-tum itne sure kaise ho sakte ho
kk-i mean most probably unki ankhon mein toh yehi dikhta hai
k-haan per mein probablity per toh nahi chance leh sakta nah
kk-sir woh hi toph mein keh raha hoon agar aap nimmo ke samne confess nahi karte toh apko kaise pata chalega ki unke dimag mein kya hai
k-haan woh bhi hai, per nahi tum nahi ja sakte
kk-sir pyar aise nahi kiya jata
k-per kk agar usse aisa kuch bhi nahi feel hota hoga toh
kk-aisa ho hii nahi sakta mein unkhi ankhon mein paha hai and u know sir i'm never wrong
k-agar usse apni feelings ka pata hai toh usne kuch kaha kyun nahi
kk-sir aap 23rd century mein kyun ji rahe hai, after all woh hai toh ladki hii nah
k-per phir bhi
kk-per sir aap neh toh mauka kaha diya sidha keh diya ki mein bas natasha se pyar karta hoon, toh ab nimmoji kya kar sakti thi usmein
k-kyun agar she feels something toh usse fight karna chahiye atleast batana chahiye after all koi apni feelings ko bypass thodi nah kar sakta hai
kk-sir woh koi soap ki main vamp nahi hai
k-haan woh toh nimmo hai kabhi bhi apne bare mein nahi sochti, per usse sochna chahiye nah
kk-sir aap woh behes baad mein kariye, ab jaiye nah
k-mein roses nahi ring leke jao
kk-obviously sir
k-okay
reached the mathuriya house
k-namaste
a-namaste beta
k-woh nimmo hai
a-nahi beta nimmo toh nahi hai kuch kam tha
k-haan woh mujhe usse kehna tha ki(then realised what he was doing) kuch kas nahi bas aise hii, i mean uh huh
a-usse job mil gayi hai mumbai se bahar
k-kaha
a-woh usne batane se mana kiya hai
k-kyun(heratbroken)
a-bete galat mat samajna per woh apne atit ki parchayi apne ane wale kal pe nahi padne dena chati and moreover woh tumhe aur natasha ko khush dekhna chati hai
k-(had tears in hi eyes, tears that were directly from hi heart, actually a broken heart and he left the mathuriya house without saying anymore, this had happened frist time in is life when he loved someone and that person didn't love him back the feeling was miserable, he had just hoped now that nimmo had gone a little bit later he realised his feelings a bit late,he just wanted to tell her once how he felt, but now he was helpless how on earth would he find her)
kk-sir kya hua
k-kk woh chali gayi
kk-kaha
k-pata nahi,
kk-per nimmo ke gharwalon ko toh pata ho ga nah
k-wh nahi bata rahe
kk-sir agar hum unhe bataye ki aap nimmoji se pyar karte hai toh shayad woh batadein
k-koi fyda nahi hai kk, nimmo ne hii mana kiyatha unhe, aur agar wo mujse pyar karti nah kk toh aisa kabhi nahi karti, humne toh decide kiya tha nah ki hum dost ki tarah milte rahenge toh phir woh bina batye kyun chali gayi, kyun ki woh apne past se koi nata nahi rakhna chati.
k-per sir aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai nah ki woh apse itna pyar karti hai , ki aap khush rahe isiliye woh yaha se chali gayi
k-nahi kk this time u r wrong pyar mein koi itna sacrid=fice nahi karta
kk-sir woh nimmo hai, kuch bhi karsakti hai

oright guys this was the part tell me how it was 😳 hope u all liked it

Edited by sufi89 - 19 years ago

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åpoiuy

@åpoiuy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#133

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U are very talented. I really love ur fanfic! Keep it up
luv
Sadaf

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#134

kya guys none is reading this one 😭

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masala

@masala

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Posted: 19 years ago

#135

sorry was busy... dint get time to read. it was pretty good. plz keep continuting. do not discontinue at all... its my request!

keep up the good work

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ishani

@sufi89

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#136

heres the next part
recap-kunal goes to nimmo's houuse to propose and finds out that she left and he is heart broken
3 yrs later
in kunal's office (kunal is wokring hard on a project, natasha enters his cabin (well she was given a new cabin as she is a full time employee at sehgals, and now she no more shares a cabin with kunal 😳 )
n-kunal yeh project ki file maine dekh lii hai, i think this project ka net profit zyada hoga, i mean ahuja's(ring any bells 😳 )ke sath humara paternership at par hai like 50-50% profit and this company is giving us 65-35% so agar hum is inke sath patnership kare toh won't it be more beneficial
k-i don't think so after all sehgal's ki bhi koi reputation hai andthis company doesn't have a very good reputation 4 saal pehle yeh company pe 3 adultary ke case hue thee, so i think ahuja will be better
n-per kunal, char saal pehle ki baat hai na this is present
k-past ko koi itni asani se nahi bhula sakte
n-tum nimmo ki baat kar rahe ho na (kunal told natasha everything and he told her that he needed sometime to overcome so they cancelled their marriage but r still in a healthy relationship, natasha is still waiting for kunal)
k-(his heart fills with tears when he hears or thinks about her) umm abhi hum office mein hai aur mera manna hai once a cheater always a cheater, aur waise bhi ahuja's ki reputation toh humse bhi achi hai and moreover i know them personally(remember dev and kunal where batch mates)
n-janti hoon per kafi saal ho gaye nah dev se baat kare hue its almost like graduation ke baat hum log mile hii nahi
k-thats why i'm looking forward to meet him (and also someone else 😳)

banglore
d-nimmo(well they r good friends now so he calls heer nimmo instead of namrata, though he feels nimmo is bit tacky)
n-yeah
d-sehgals ke sath humari deal final ho gayi hai and we're flying to mumbai tommorrow, god nimmo i 'm so excited kitne sallon baad mein kunal se milonga
n-(she was thunderstruck at the mention of kunal, she had moved of in life with much difficulty, sje remembered all those sleepless nights when she went crying to bed,it was hard to overcome those feelings and she still wasn't able to and going back their was like rejuvaneting all those feelings)
d-kya kua, don't react as if tumhe kuch bhi pata nahi hai
n-huh haan mujhe pata tha per these project, i mean isme meri kya zroorat hai
d-oh common nimmo these is such a big project and i want u to handle it with me
n-but mera toh finance dept(she had gradually progessed and was now thw finance head and also part time secretary of dev)
d-tum yaha kitne sallon se kaam kar rahi ho
n-i know dev ki koi bhi project mein finance is important, but mein hii kyun koi aur bhi toh kar sakta haina
d-nimmo, yeh achanak kya ho gaya hai
n-umm kuch nahi, i mean agar hum mubai jayebge toh atleast 3-4 mahine ke liye aur mein utne din aarsh ke bina nahi reh sakti
d-nimmo, mein kaha keh raha hoon tum uske bina aao obviously kanta masi aur aars toh jayenge hii nah aur tum hii toh keh rahe thi ki tum apne parents se milna chati ho after all tum mubai 3 salon se nahi gayi ho
n-dev u don't understand
d-haan so make me understand
n-kuch nahi
d- thik hai so tum mumbai chal rahi oh thats it final,lock kar diya jaye, pukka
n-shut-up, acha ek baat batao tumhare pass already ek secretary hai, phir tum mujhe part time sec kyun rakhte hoo
d-thats very simple, u r very entertaining, tumhare company mein koi bhi rahega toh din bhar ka tension chala jata hai
n-entertaining
d-haan jab tum girti ho phir embarass hoge sorry bolti ho tuti ji chis ko jod ne ki koshish karti ho, u know jab se tum ayi ho mujhe circus jane ki zaroorat hii nahi padi
n-gave him a stern look
d-okay sorry (in a very student kinda way) ab kam karre

oright guys this was the part tell me how it was i hope u all liked it 😳

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: poiuy
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U are very talented. I really love ur fanfic! Keep it up
luv
Sadaf

i'm flattered, thanks for the comment😳

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: masala
sorry was busy... dint get time to read. it was pretty good. plz keep continuting. do not discontinue at all... its my request!

keep up the good work

well don't worry i'm not gonna discontinue and thanks for all ur comments 😳

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#139

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww lovely ab aywga maza when kannu baby 😭 will see nims wid dev and nims will see him wid nat haha plzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon itz just amazing