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Posted: 19 years ago
heres the next part guys

recap-nimmo reaches mumbai,kunal has a ray of hope but it is soon crushed as he realises dev loves nimmo and maybe even nimmo loves dev

[in the resturant>(dev and nimmmo) enter natasha was waiting for them)
she looked at dev adn then from behind nimmo came and she was shocked out of her wits(not that she didn't like nimmo but suddenly she felt that her love(kunal) was going away from her)
dev went and hugged her and natasha just kept lookimg at nimmo
n-hi natasha
nats-hi,bahut salloon baad
d-don't tell me, ki ab tum dono bhi ek dooosrein ko jaante ho
n-haan dev agar mein kunal ko jaanti hoon toh uski wife ko toh jaanogi hii nah
d-well tum itni achi tarah nahi jaanti toh
n-huh
d-well kunal-natasha neh abhi tak shadi nahi kii
n-kya
d-haan but don't worry they r still very much in love
n(smiled)
at the tble ev's phone rang and he went to take it
n-natasha tumne aur kunal neh ab tak shadi nahi kii
nats-nahi
n-lyu
nats(she was about say the truth and then feared what if nimmo loved kunal, she wasn't ready too loose kunal now so she decided not to tell) woh bas aise hii,humne socha hum humare relationship ko thda aur waqt de aur hum thode hii dinno mein soch rahe hai shadi karne ki
n-oh thats nice
nats-nimmo ek n=baat puchu
n-haan
nats-kya tum kunal se
n-nahi natsah tum jaanti ho tum kya keh rahi ho
nats-jaanti hoon isiliye pooch rahi hu
n-common nats its been 3 yrs aur waise bhi i and kunal r gr8 friends thats it and it ends their i don't love kunal(it had been three yrs but still it was hard to say but now she was used to saying this lir=e so many times that it almost seem true and she knew she had to make it her truth)
(behind them kunal herad all this and his heart broke once more)
nats-(relived by nimmo's answer0arre kunal tum kaha chale gaye thee
k-kahi nahi ek zaroori kam yaad aa gaya tha isiliye
nats-kunal can u believe its nimmo, kitne sallon baad nai
k-yeah i really can't believe it
k-so nimmo how r u kaisi ho
n-mein thik hoon kunal
(dev joined them)
d-hey guys did i miss anything
k-nahi kuch nahi.per maine bahut kuch miss kiya hai
d-huh
(nats caught kunal's handindicating him to stop0
k-kuch nahi aise hii,anyways kuch order kare tum logon ko bhuk lagi hogi
after dinner
n-natasha yeh kunal aise kyun behave kar raha tha
nats-kuch nahitumse gussa hai isiliye
n-kyun
nats-tum uski itni achi dost thi phir bhi tum usse bina bataye hii kahi chaligayi isiliye
n-mein kya karti natasha, agar mein usse batati toh woh kya mujhe janne deta
nats-per nah batakar bhi toh woh hurt hua hai na
n-i understand mein usses kal baat karrrongi
dev and kunal joined them
n-dev hum kaunsi hotel mein tereh hai
d-woh(looking at kunal)
k-hotel nahi mere ghar pe,i hope after all tumhe koi problem nahi hoga after all ghar toh akhir ghar hota hia nah
n-ofcourse koi problem nahi hai
at seghal house
nimmo went to dev's room
d-kuch kam tha
n-haan
d-kya
n-hum kal yaah se chale jayenge
d-per kyun
n-i mean hum hotel mein koi kamra le lenge
d-haan per kyun
n-bas aise hii
d-huh
n-dev tum sawal bahut pochte ho
d-per itna acha ghar, tum kunal aur natasha ko jaanti ho ,phir problem kya hai
n-kanta masi
d-toh
n-woh kal aarsh ko leke aa rahi hai na aur common kanata masi aur aarsh ko bhi yaha rakhna isn't it a bit rude
d-per kunal mera dost hai
\n-phir bhi agar tumhe rehna hai tum rhao mein kal hotel shift ho rahi hoon
d-acha thik hai kal jayenge thik hai
n-haan kal mein subeh airport jaoongi aur waha se sidha hum hotel pohonch jayenge aur phir office thik hai
d-oright timetable ab so jaoo
n-hititing him goodnight

morning at the breakfast table=(nimmo met all the members dadaji,shradha,varsha chachi were pleasantly surprised to see her and dadi,pam where shocked to see her in a businesswomen kinda outfit)
n-acha dev mein nikal ti hoon der ho rahi hai thik hai seeya, bye kunal
k-bye
k-d where alone walking in the gardern
k-yeh nimmo kaha gayi subeh subeh
d-airport
k-kyun
d-uski kantamasi aur aarsh aah rahi hai nah aaj isiliye unhe lene gayi hai, and kunal u don't mind nah hum hotel mein
k0-nahi ofcourse not i understand, waise kanta masi hai kafi interesting character nai
d-tum kantamasi ko kaise jante ho
k-unhe kaun nahi janta
d-woh bhi hai
k-aur yeh aarsh kaun hai tumhari colleague
d-(smiled) not excatly
k-huh
d-woh nimmo ki beti hai
k(another jhatka, he couldn't digest it anymore)
d-kya hua
k-kuch nahi tumne bataya nahi nimmo shadi shuda hai
d-hai nahi thi, she got divorced from her husband three yrs back, really unlucky an jo nimmo ki kadar nah saka aur moreover he gave her divorce when she was pregnant can u belive it
k-so aarsh abhi 2 and a haf yrs ki hai
d-yeah she is a little angel in disguse, mujhe toh itna dar hai ki woh jab puri tarah se chalna sikhe toh nimmmo pe nah jaye warna jo chise baki hai woh bhi tut jayengi
k-(matalb aarsh meri beti hai)

oright guys this was the part tell me how it was and yeah thanks for the replie
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow, so natassha is becoming villan. Personalaly I think kunal deserves it but lets see what happens. Great writing as always. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kannu knows da truth
wow i hope keketa does dis same in khnk 😳
thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot 4 posting itz awosome 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
heres the next part

recap-nimmo shifts to another hotel and kunal realises that aarsh is his daughter
k-(he was going through a gush of emotions at once, he felt immensly happy and at the same time sad that all the 3yrs he hadn't been their for aarsh and also angry on immo that she didn't even tell him)
he was lost in his own thoughts
d-kahan kho gaya
k-huh kuch nahi
d-chal yaar samman shift karna hai
k-yeah okay
(in the car)
d-yaar ek baat bata tu itna change kaise ho gaya
k-matalb
d-matalab yeh ki tu kabse itna soch ne laga jabse aya hoon tujhe khoya khoya dekh raha hoon koi problem hai
k-(in his mind ek problem ho toh batao yaha toh pura mount everest tut pada hai)
d-kya hua wapas kho gaya
k-nahi yaar koi problem nahi hai bas kam ka thoda stress hai no biggie
d-waise itna bhi kam nahi karna chahiye
k-uhmm
(after moving into hotel)
d-chal yaar office chalte hai nimmo fresh hoke aa jaegii
k-yeah(he didn't want to go at all he wanted to stay back and get answers of all his questios)
(after dev and kunal left nimmo,kb, aarsh arrived)
kb-waah nimmo maan gaye dev ki choice ko hotel toh bahut acha hai
n-massi dev ki choice phele se achi hai
kb-tu uski side maat leh huh,acha yeh bata anand ko milne kab ja rahe hai
n-masi aaj toh mujhe office jana pedega app aarsh ko leke chali jaye mein directly waha aa jaongi
m-nimmo aaj itne sallon mein tune pheli baar yeh word use kiya hai
n-kaunsa
kb-'jana padega', tu kabhi bhi office jaane ke liye itni dukhi nahi thi, kunal se mili kya
n-huh
kb-nimmo tu abhibhi ussse bhul nahi payi hai
n-aisa kuch nahi hai kantamasi
kb-acha tujhe nahi batana hai mat bata, acha ek baat bata tujhe office jaane mein kitni der hai
n-bas mein ek do ghante mein nikal rahi hoon
kb-acha toh mein apne chawl jake aaon
n-thik hai
(she started playing with aarsh)
(in the office0k-yaar devmujhe ek zaroori kam aa gaya baki ki procedure natasha samjha degi
nats- aisa kya zaroori kam hai kunal jo tumitna important kam chod ke ja rahe ho
k-kam hai natasha, ake batata hoon
in the car he was getting restless, to get his answers he couldn't wait anymore to see her
he reached the hotel and went straigtht to nimmo's room
the door was opened he wanted to bang inside but just stopped at the sight of aarsh , she looked like an angel, with dark brown hair, she had got his green big eyes, one look at her and even a stone would melt
he just stood their in silence and watched nimmo play with herafter a while he went inside
n- saw him and a sudden fear grew in her mind, she hated this type of feeling she didn't want to lie anymore but she ahd to otherwise everything she ahd done for kunal-natasha would be in ruins
n-kunal tum haan mein
k-nimmo tumne bataya nahi tumhari beti bhi hai
n-woh kunal humari zyada baat kaha hui isiliye,aur tumhe kisne bataya
k-dev neh, waise aarsh kitne saal ki hai
n-woh one and half yrs
k-lagti toh nahi
n-huh
k-waise yeh thoda thoda chalti bhi hai tumhe nahi lagta yeh 2 and a half yrs ki hai
n-nahi kunal
k-per devne toh mujhse yehi kaha
n(she knew what was coming that kunal had figured it out, she coukdn;t lie anymore but if she doesn't then she will betray natasha andafterall natasha had waited all these yrs)woh dev ko confusion ho gaya hoga
k-per woh toh tumhara bahut acha dost haina
n-haan per
k-acha yeh chodo, wos the father
n-woh,huhu huuuhmm woh
k-kunal sehgal rihgt
n-uhhhhhhhhmmmmm
k-how could u nimmo, how could you do this to me
n-wohh
k-tumne itni badi baat mujse chupai aur isiliye tum banglore chali gayi,mujhe mera jawab chahiye nimmo why did u do this
n-woh kunal
k-batao nimmo i'm listenning
n-kunal mein batane hii wali thi per phir tum aur natasha
k-mein aur natsah kya nimmo. rishte jhoot ki buniyaas pe nahi bante
n- kunal mein pyar karti hoon
k(these were the words he wanted to here from her since agesd) kya
n-(she was scared, that her feelings might leak out)haan mein pyar karti hoon dev se

oright guys tell me how it was
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG... its sooooooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry for not being active for past few weeks... i finally read ur fanfic after a long time!!! it ws very refreshing. i loved it. keep up the good work and keep it coming...

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow, wonder how long nimmo will deny her feelings. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
aha aha m criying again kannu baby gonno hurt 😭
nimmo how could u 😡
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ishani plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon yaar 😭

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