Tales of the Heart #2 | VirMan | CH 42, PG 112

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Aishwarya

@chasinghope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Awh Man! That was just an abrupt ending! 😆 I want more! 😆

Awesome chapter, Zahara! (Like always) We should be so proud having a FF writer like you in our forum, and also writing on one of the most adored couples in Tellywood! 😳

I just loved how Virat sneaked out of the house, how he climbed up, how Maanvi applied cream and obviously that sweet conversation on 'why' he was there. 😉

I am falling in love with the story, the same way VirMan are falling in love. ❤️

And if it is a question about when you are updating, you can update whenever you are free, no worries.

All the Best for everything! 🤗

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arhifandebi

@arhifandebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Zahara!!!!!! You actually updated !!!!!!!!!😲 Am I dreaming?? 😵*rubs her eyes,pinches herself,and realizes that it's all true* I'm super delighted...!!!! Thank you so much dear ...You don't know how Happy I'm to see you back...🤗 Coming to the update...It was just MARVELOUS...!!!!!👏Thank God Madan accepted Virat at last... The way Virat was missing Manvi was really great...and at last he went to meet her.. Oh how eagerly I had been waiting for this...and the welcome Virat got was really hilarious but the scene that followed was a real good one... As soon as you get an offer please do let me know okay??😊 and Please please do continue soon... The point where you ended I just can't rest in peace without reading the revelation in the next part... Thank you loadz for the pm...⭐️

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Glad to see ur update. .its brilliant. .n dnt worry dear u will surely get uni call. .
thanks 4 pm

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Zahara!!! Why do you always stop at the wrong place??

Haaa i wanted to read more and there you go with a fullstop!

Ok let me control my excitement and the further mixed emotions! Hehehe

So our hero is missing maanvi very much and he took the risk of going to her house and sneeking in just like he had done few days back! I can see the gradual improvements between them like him opening up to maanvi.

Ahh i loved this part!!

Thnx for the pm

Yaaay as i promised last time this was a quite long comment!

😃

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Hey Zahara,
The update was FABULOUS 👏
Aww... How sweet of Virat to run away from the palace just to meet Manvi😊 Glad to see that he was missing her way too much.
I am sure when Viren comes to know about this, he will tease Virat to death. 😉 I mean Viren had to wait for a week to meet his wife, but Virat couldn't wait even for a night 😆
Loved Manvi's care for Virat
Thanks for the PM...

P.S. All the Best for your Uni proposal. I am sure you will get an offer soon 😊

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angie82

@angie82

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Hey,

Well what do I say, as always the update is great with depth of emotions of different characters.
Also you always keep everyone the edge of wanting more...Now even i wanna what was the past along with Maanvi.

Like the subtle changes in their relationship, and they both missing each other for now each others company...Will wait to see how the friendship and love progress.

God Bless you :)

Brgds
Angie

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Beautiful update!!
Loved it!!!
Like how their relationship is progressing!!
Waiting 4 ur next update!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Ok Im suppose to be preparing a presentation for
My boss but no I'm on India forums reading
Your story defo Gunna gey fired tomarow

About the update god it was awesome
Loved how virat was missing manvi Lol
He imagined her sleeping next to him
Loved virikas small scene was so cute of them
Lol she hit him poor thing got bruised
Was an awesome update loved it to the core
Continue soon and do pm me
Thanks for the pm

Love kanwal