IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 9

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

And that, my friends, is how to give us a proper realization and redemption track in a few short letters.

This was brilliant, Ridz. And not just because you gave us this sensible, yet romantic tale of how Arnav finds out the truth, but also because you used the letter format.

And letters to his mother! Where do you get these ideas from? I loved it!

Khushi's letters were really poignant in the beginning, and very Khushi towards the end.

I liked how you used the letter in another way too, a vessel for the truth, as it were.

And a shaatir dimaag-waala Arnavji is back! He has Shyam investigated and hightails it to Shimla to woo back his love.

You did give me a minor shock there for a minute when Khushi wrote that she was going away, but I quickly read the next letter and heaved a sigh of relief when I read "Shimla".

Khushi could not resist him, could she? And yet , she made him work hard before giving in.

And we get a proposal on bended knee!

And the last letter from Arnav, kya bolun ab?

Joy, regret, and a hint of lingering pain...and finally, some peace for two tormented souls with the return of the bangles.

Another loop closed, another sigh of contentment from me.

Great going,Ridz!