IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 7

wow. u made me remember tht there 2nd marriage was actually forced. so yup i really appreciate this closure series u have attempted. looking forward to it.

I loved it . awesome WRITING.

Nicely done, please do continue there were so many loopholes and you have a knack for being creative about them.. this was recommended by Expell , so glad she did !!

great stories...
apt closures... was quite contenting...
i hope u write more and more

Loved both parts, do continue soon please. And I agree, he should've proposed to her when he felt like it. In fact, I thought he'd do just that in time for the 6-month mark. But no, his idea of winning Khushi over was becoming a cocky know-it-all. And yeah , I often wondered, why no one from the Raizadas ever asked the Guptas how they met Shyam, even after they believed them. There are so many loops to close, and lapses to be mended, I look forward to reading your works far a long time :)

love what you are doing

I loved it. you are rally closing the loops.

Thanks a lot for so beautifully closing the loops it was just so perfect. I would love to read further and would like to remember ipkknd with closed loops.