IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 *

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shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

So what was loop here? or was this Luna's wishlist?

Anyways loved it. Waiting not so patiently for part-2 now.

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Awesome loop closure!!!!!!! no nimbu ka achaar made so much possible...

glad that arnav didn't sit back n brood over it!!!! n khushi avoiding him made him all the more persistent to know the truth was nicely written!!!!!!!

waiting for part 2...

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Comments updated on the blog :)

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

that was a fantastic interpretation, so so beautiful.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

ohk i dnt know tht is nimu achar that special or not or the power of being drunk but i have read and seen enough to know tht you tend to forget wht u did in that state and i am so so thankful that they remembered each and very word especially arnav because in this loop he is the man!!

its good tht the way he was persuading her comprised of just some lines because it was sexy enough to make reader hyperventilate had it been more long.

part 2? cant wait.

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shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Lovely chapter. They had just butchered a magical ArHi moment afterwards, in the show. It was nice reading ArHi acting honest and not running away from it. Cherry on the top, there is going to be another update from you, on this :) Waiting, waiting!

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

'' hamari dhadkane eek ho jati hai...'' as cheesy as it might sound, but i still love this scene! And believe me when i say, i was really really disappointed by the way CVs totally ignored the after effects of this scene!! 😡
and i m GLAD that u decided to emit the nimboo ka achar scene! That was utterly stupid!!
And they woke up in each others arms!! Wow!
I m really lookin forward to the next part!!

Update soon! 😳

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arshina223

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Oh thankyou so much that you picked this scene and completed it so so beautifully. No nimbu ka aachar to ruin so beautiful moment between them.
I liked that you showed arnav was familiar with alcohol so there was no chance he could have not remembered their last conversation.

Best part --The way arnav made khushi loose control and accept that her heart starts "running marathon" whenever he is near her.

Perfect ending Of first part with khushi yell of confession of her love for him.

Loved it.

Waiting for the next part.

Edited by arshina223 - 12 years ago