IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 *

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

This was the most intense and heartfelt confession I have read till now thanks a ton for d pm
I ve sent u buddy request accept it pls

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raina

@Girlabouttown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

amazing series :)

The satisfaction i am getting just by reading them 😳

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

The update was brilliant and awesome, absolutely phenomenal first part.

An amazing read and the update was written exceptionally well.

Each time I read one off your brilliant updates for "closing the loops" I do a happy dance.

The holi confession was one of my favourite scenes and you wrote it beautifully,

So glad Arnav actually decided to talk about there drunken confession, awww Khushi actually confessed that she loves him.

Loved the update, eager to read the next and hopefully have the loop closed perfectly.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

good job there... each time when u write a scene i wonder why couldnt it have been this way, this makes more sense..and also has more beauty to it... i loved how he thought and decided to talk rather than acting oblivious to something so magical that transpired btwn them...waiting for part 2 already...
btw do u happen to pm?? :)

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Loved it!!! I do agree with the nimbu achar theory!!

How nothing was brushed off, neither was it forgotten! Also that Arnav pursued it and wanted to get an explanation!!!

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Yayy for reality, I am glad you addressed the nimbu ka achar myth and laid it to rest, common sense prevailed here if only once again we saw this prevalent int he show...look forward to part two.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Loved it

a different take on the holi situation and the confession

i agree Nimbu Ki Achaar cant cure being drunk in seconds

atleast here we have Arnav talking it out and not acting like they don't remember a thing

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Very well written and thought out too.

Glad that Nimbu ka achar is thrown out of the window!

What stupidity was it!

Glad that they remember and voice it out. After sleeping together, Khushi avoiding and trying to regroup her thoughts is quite normal and believable! Trying to evade his eyes as well as questions is what she is adept at and him persisting is what is normally any couple would do. Glad he is asking her q's and trying to elicit answers!

Waiting for the next update to see how you resolve their MU.