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Posted: 12 years ago
ONE OF THE BEST CONFESSION EVER
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
RIDZ!!! Mere yaaraz dil khush kitta tune!

The Holi scenes have been super IPK to me always. But it never really made sense you know, and that diminished the charm of it all...par a loop to close it all, where have you been all my life?!

I am so glad you didnt go the melodrama way of "oops we slept together" or "nimbu ka achar cures bhang ka nasha". Love the way you kept it so so simple and beautiful.

And I also love her avoidance and his figuring out dayum she remembers!

The confrontation has always been your strong point, dont we know that from the last OS?! This was no different. I didnt expect an I love you..now the kostin remains, how is he going to turn things around? Is he going to own up to his mistakes or bury that hatchet all together? SUPER KEEN. updex part 2 awlredyyy.

My favourite part the way you portrayed Khushi's reluctance in talking to him and not wanting to get hurt again!

Luna
ps. Thank you for taking up this loop!
Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res!

Edit:

A million thank you's for no nimbu ka achar, the one thing that single-handedly ruined the magic of that scene for me.

Yes, there was undeniable magic in that scene. But only when taken as a stand-alone, when the past was forgotten and never taken into account.

But you turned things around quite spectacularly!
Not only did you give us a break-down of that particular scene, you also made them remember the whole thing, dammit! No pretenses here, and no ambiguity either.

And then they sleep together, and Khushi avoids him the entire day...that's exactly what should have happened, I think.

A perfectly wonderful confrontation, Arnavji is bent on discovering the truth here!
And he does, when she blurts out that she loves him.

Now the kostin is, where do they go from here?
The Shyam disclosure still remains, I wonder how you plan to go about that?

When are you updating Part Two?




Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Even though I did not understand the hindi dialogues, I was still able to appreciate the reveal. No more cowardly Arnav and Khushi, pretending it didn't happen. Good job!
Edited by shona-li - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

ONE OF THE BEST CONFESSION EVER



Haha. Thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Intoxicated rather than drunk

The nimbu stuff was just so that Anjali could find another reason to take away everyone's pleasure. None can enjoy if she can't. Didn't we see the same behavior later??
Ain't nobody allowed to be happy if she ain't happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was better than the real one. At thay time I really hoped something happen like this but when do CVs do what we like *sighs*. The best part was when she confessed first. It had always been Arnav who used to say I Love You in anger. Really an amazing one 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona-li

Even though I did not understand the hindi dialogues, I was still able to appreciate the reveal. No more cowardly Arnav and Khushi, pretending it didn't happen. Good job!



None of the hindi dialogues were my own, they were from the holi episode :)

And thanks! :)
Edited by BlueMystique - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Honey this was so much better than the one on the show...one of the best confessions ever. And Arnav has a brain and he decides to take the bull by its horns instead of beating around the bush or even ignoring the elephant in the room.
This was absolutely lovely..I dnt know about Khushi but my heart is still beating hard..

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