Lost in Your Eyes Thread 2 (Arshi SS)

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Iamyself

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

That was amazing! :)

You should start up a new one soon!

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kaira101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

loved the epilogue

beautiful ending to a wonderful story

thanx for the pm

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Mitalp142

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Wow, Khushi is pregnant!! 😃

Edited by Mitalp142 - 13 years ago

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shubhadask

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Nice ending.. Thanks for the pm,plz pm e your next ss also..

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GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

the ending could not be better than this..

yeah.. i already saved all of this updates.. was waiting for the final one.. now im gonna print all this .. u know in word it is almost 61 page.. a small novel.. love u for this..

pls now come u with some other long updates .. why not a FF in total..

i told u earlier also.. after madhu i liked and loved ur writing .. ..amazing..

thanks for ur all the time and efforts.. be blessed ..

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GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya
This was honestly one of my favorite SS's. I loved it a lot, and I loved, loved the ending. I teared up too when I thought about the rabba ve.. where it all began.. *sigh Beaut. Write more SS's please :)

this one is definitely my best .. i used to wait for her updates.. i already saved all her works.. pata nahi kab keya hogi then all will be lost ... :) ..

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GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

frankly speaking anything u will write im for it..

prologue fits fine.. as now he had strong reasons for his attitude and those dark features..

and yeah khushi will be some bold innocent young girl who gave him some treatments in d past ..

and how sweet it would be when past meets present ..

waiting for this.. just go for it..