Lost in Your Eyes Thread 2 (Arshi SS)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Loved the epilogue. Sad that this ff is over. Please writeanother one soon.

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

superb ending...

loved the whole thing, you gave it a dream like ending...

congrats on completing it successfully...

hope you start a new one soon

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IPK007

@IPK007

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Hi, I thought of a really dark love story...not sure how it would be recieved...

Do let me know, after you read this...this ASR's character will be disturbing and bordering on the dark side( initially) ...

PROLOGUE FOR THE IMPENETRABLE HEART...

ASR was an enigmatic man that very few people truly knew..26 years old, one of the richest men in India and of royal descent, he was crowned with the title of Raja of Mewar, a sleepy old province in the interiors of Madhya Pradesh..when he was only 25

Returning from USA with a degree in business management, he spent only a few hours at his father's deathbed...Hating himself for not having any kind of feeling for him, even when he was living his last moments, ASR felt relieved when he died...

Hard hearted and cynical, there was nothing he hated more than allowing himself to show any kind of emotions, specially when he knew them to be false..

While he was busy running his business empire from Mumbai, the memories of his childhood were buried and long forgotten, what remained however was the impenetrable fortress that guarded his cold, miserable heart...

Somewhere buried in his subconscious mind were fleeting memories of a tinkling laughter, a swing on a mango tree and pretty payal clad bare feet dangling from it...memories he never allowed himself to acknowledge...while awake...

However in repose, he would often see a child's face, a ten year old girl with the most enormous eyes and a mischievous smile...

"I am going to be the Raja of Mewar...you can't talk to me like that.." he would see himself as a somber 11 year old..

Edited by IPK007 - 12 years ago

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

cute epilogue and a great prologue for the new ss

Edited by laksh65 - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

wow what an ending
they do a movie together
and they are gonna be parents soon
and it all worked out for them
haiye main mar jawan
hope we see you with more on arhi soon please
now thats an ending am talking about
he is pretty over protective of her as she is pregnant awww
and the twins are there with them too cute
cheers for pm

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783730

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Movie idea was great!

why dont petition for that instead of season 2?? lol

anyway, it was a good journey!!!

lovely!!

Keep writing!

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

it was awesome..truly a fans view point

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Oh so beautiful!! Rabba vey n Arshi

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

wonderful epilogue
love it
but it was too short...it was beautiful story
and the prologue for the new ss is great
like it
looking forward to read the new ss