D3 ff: SWEET SECRETS-COULD DEY LEAD TO HAPPY END?

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

loved it...

explation of dresses were awesome...pic hota toh accha hota...but no prob...

updte soon..thnx fr pm//

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@shivi_reylover

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

u xplained d outfit very well...i was atully imaging rey in dat shirt...wid his chest

amazing!

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Awesome update 😊

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

lovely update
Thanx for d pm

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Reserved. Will read and get back to you (: Albeit, please update your index!

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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

awsm

ab dono team party me v na ladne lage

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

awesome...

loved the description of their outfit...

thnx for pm rutu...

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Nice update. . . . . .
Woww dress ka description was awsome,pics hotte toh bahut acha lagta,
bt its okh. . . . . . .
Krisha ka miss u vala part was super funny. . .
Bahut zada chota tha,
nxt part bada likhna. . .
Egarly waiting 4 it, . . . .
And mujhe bhi pm chaiye. . . . .
Do pm me wen u update. . . .

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

dat was AWESOME..

loved it..

update soon👏.

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Rutuja Shah

@rutsi_kriyaansh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hello guys here's the update!!!! This was quicker bcuz the previous update
was small!!!! Hope you lyk it!! Enjoy!!
CHAPTER 11
Rey & Vicky were standing near the entrance on the left and svayum
on the right waiting for their friends *cough* their ladyloves *cough*. Nilesh, rinni and
simmi were the first one to arrive! Just then bhamar came who were followed by vishaka.
(All of them are wearing the same dresses as rdx's party)
Vicky's POV:
Shit yaar! Ye deewani kaha reh gayi. Kabse ruka hua hu uss ke liye. Bhook lagi hai. Chal
khane ke liye chalta hu. Nhi wait vicky. Wait for ur deewaaani! My jaw must be touching
the floor right now.
R: Are vicky muh band. Agreed Neha acchi lag rahi hai!!! Par control dude!!
Acchi lag rahi hai yeh ek understatement hoga. Meri deewani uss white dress main angel lag
rahi hai. Damn pehli bar usne one peice pehna hai. W-O-W!!
End of pov
Sv: Neha nice luking u are!!!
N: Kuch zyada nhi lag raha na?? Ye sab Kria ki karamat hai ( ye gai kria ka surprise!
Vicky ke liye surprise tha bt it was a surprise). Voh mujhe tayaar karke uske ghar chali
gayi. Mujhe tayaar karne ke chakaar main voh ghar se jaldi nikali na iss liye apna mobile
ghar par bhul gayi. Vahi lene gayi hai!
Vish: U knw wat dude tum bahut acchi lag rhi ho. Kria ne kafi accha kam hai tumpe. For sumbody
Spcl????
Neha blushes: thnks!!!
Reyam smile at this.
Si: ya neha u r actually luking gud for once!!
Every1's jaw drops!!!! What Ms. Verbal Diarrohea aaj acchi lag rahi hai. No drnying dat!!
Rey whisphers to vicky: so thnk ur bhabhi once jab voh meri banjayegi.
V: obviously thnk u bolunga main kitt... Kria ko!!!
Svayum's POV:
Ye rey aur vicky kya baatein kar rahe kuch sunayi bhi nhi de raha hai. Ye sharon kaha reh
gayi????
Naam liya aur paaa... Wow mere toh dimaag ki bhi bolti band hogayi!! Itni hot lag rahi hai
Sharon. Har ladka usi ki taraf dekh raha hai. Wat???? Oi dur raho tum sabki bhabhi hai samjha?
Hai meri siren!!!
End of POV
R: hey shar u luk hot... Glances at svayum who was glaring at him... Nhi mindblowing!! Vaise kiss ke liye dressing up??
Sh: Voh ( luks at vicky & smiles at him & says) shona le liye...
Nil,rin& sim: Wat vicky ke liye?
Sh: Wat no. Shona is my cousin and vicky usse janta hai.
R: Wah sharon best frnd main aur mujhe ye shona ke baareain
Nhi pata.
V: Dude shona ny mai padti hai i knw her cuz she is m cousin nihaal's gf.
R: Ok.
Sv: Hushh... Aur compeitition nhi chahiye tha ye already itni stunning lag rahi hai aaj!!!!
Sharey & vicky hear this... Sharon blushes and ricky smirk
Rey's POV:
Improvement hai!! Sharon svayum ke compliment pe blush kar rahi hai!! Nice!
Hay mera chance kab aayega apni baatcutter ko blush karvane ka?? Usse yaad
aya ye baatcutter kaha reh gayi?? Shit main statue ban gaya. Agreed ki baatcutter
hamesha acchi lagti hai bt aaj to ye out of this world hot lag rahi hai!!!! Almost har
ladka uspe drool kar raha hai yaha tak ki nil bhi!!! Sabko warning deni padegi isse
dur rehne ki.. Aur iskki ye figur mujhe pakka maar dalegi... Iske yedancer long legs
kitne long rahe hai!!! Hay man kar raha hai isse abhi apne bahon main uthaloo. Control
dude control!!!! U r in a party!!
End of POV

vish: Dude u luk sexy gal!!!
K: baad main! Pehle Nega tu svayum ke piche se bahar aa. Maine tujhe itna dressup
svayum ke piche chupne ke liye nahi kiya tha. Aut teri vajah se mujhe vapas ghar jana
pada phone lene Ke liya!!!!
N: sry kria!!! *puppy dog eyes*
K: Chal theek hai maaf kara!!! Vaise bhi meri mehnat waste jayegi agar tuujhe
maara toh!!! Letas go!!
R: guys ek min listen: See all of us esi parties roj roj attend nhi karte aur ye
humaara divide iss party main humare clg ka naam khrab na kare iss liye hum log
Ek saath regre hai only for the party. Wat sy??
All: ok fyn!!
so guys kaisa tha?? Do comment!!!!!!!
luv rutu❤️