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Chapter 7

"What's Going on girls?" he asked being the only male in the family he had no male company since a long period of time, Sam and Kriya were best, best friends just like Ron and Kriya were. Just look at her it was all he had to do and Ron would come flashing into his mind, Sam was a true copy of Ron, her hair, her smile, her eyes, even her tone, everything was SO like Ron and he loved her. Kriya how ever was Tortures but still he took her as a friend these girls used to never let him in, in their conversation. but this time he had to know what was going on.

"Oh, Nothing Much. It would help if you could just go and sit in the porch and let us talk" kriya said with a smile flashing on her face.

"Fine. i'm going." he said shrugging his shoulders and wondering what were they exactly talking about? and why was Kriya trying to shoo away him? He left the arena sighing.

"Where is he taking you?" kriya said, who was now dyeing with curiosity. "Believe me. I don't know" Sam said "What you don't even know this? and you're going on a date what.." she was saying but sam interrupted "Its Not a Date!" Sam snapped "So. What is it?" kriya said a naughty smile playing on her lips "I'm just..umm.. going out with a guy of my age, Yeah, that's it!" sam said with a confident smile "Fine, So, What're you going to wear? Anything decided?" kriya asked "No, nothing much. just sneakers and a tank. Isn't that what u wear on.. er.. outings?" sam said still wondering what she said was right or not. "You serios? you're gonna wear sneakers?" kriya asked "P-uh-leaze. let it be. what will we talk about all time?" Sam asked with a fierce expression "Okay, firstly when you go out with someone on a date.." kriya said but.. "Its not a Date!" Sam snapped yet again "your so called outing first thing you do is wear something trendy, then when your boyfriend takes you.." kriya was about to complete when "He's not my Boyfriend!" Sam snapped like she was suddenly shot by a gun "..okay, someone takes you out you can talk about whatever you feel like, and by the end of the date.." sam alert again! "Its Not a Date!" sam snapped "..end of the night you'll have lot of things to talk about" kriya said as if she was teaching Sam another lesson of Pchychology. "Have you been to a lot of dates?" sam asked her brows low in curiosity "The last date i went to was with...(She thought for a moment).. Kunal" she said and then got lost in her thoughts "But Kriya, It's Not a Date!" sam said

Rey was on his laptop when kriya came. "Lets go out?" he asked "Where?" she said "Anywhere. I feel sick sitting in the home all weekend" he said "Reyaansh Singhania, are you asking me out on a date?" she said a smile playing on her pretty face "No! it isn't a date" he stated "so, what is it?" she said biting her lip "Okay... kind of date" he said blushing "So, reyaansh singhania, you ARE asking me out on a date?" she said smiling "yeah kind of" he said shrugging his shoulder a little "2 minutes" she said and went inside "was it this easy?" rey thinks to himself...

"Thats all i could do in 5 mins" she stated "no, u look fine" he said

Continued...

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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"I don't want to go back" he said laying on the dry grass. "i didn't wear this dress for laying on the grass all night" she chuckled "You look good" he said "tell me something about yourself?" he asked "What?" she asked "Anything, don't you want me to know you?" he asked but it seemed more like he just said "No, It isnt that. i just.." she said "You just??" he asked "You know what?" she asked "What?" he asked "I really don't know why you don't have a girlfriend?" she said "why do you think so?" he asked "I mean, you're cute, have a nice personality, and everything but the only thing that hits me that is why don't you have a girlfriend?" she said "I never found anyone" he said "I never saw your parents either" she said "I was 7 when my mom left me at aunts house saying that she was going for shopping, and never came back" he said a bit depressed now "She never tried to find you?" she asked really worried "On 13th birthday i recieved a card it said 'Happy birthday teenager-Love Mom' the card was addressed San Fransisco, after that never. that was the last time i knew where my mom actually was. I remember how happy i was to receive that card" he said the pain was alive on his face and kriya could see a few tears in his bottle green eyes too, she could feel the pain. she wanted to say something but what if she said something wrong? which would hurt him even more. she gently placed her head on his chest. she soon sound his hands on her back too he was gently caressing her back with his hands. it was then when she realised how alone he really was. "do you want to know what I'm thinking?" he said "hmm.." she said "okay, I'm thinking how perfectly we fit together" he said she looked up wondering what she should say "i know that means something different" she said "it sure does." he said but his phone starts to ring at the current moment. "You mind if i take it?" he asked "yes. but take it anyway" she chuckled she pulled away from the hug. she wondered whether she should tell him or not? what if he rejects her? what if he tell her to stay away and shouts at her? what if.. she suddenly realised his confused gaze was fixed on her while talking she smiled at him after seeing this kind of response. he hung up soon. "What?? what happened? why did you broke up?" he said "I do mind you not telling me what you're hiding and i do mind you not telling me this straight away" she said "Kriya ghai, I think i.." he gulped 'come on rey say it' she thought "I know it looks weird but i think i .. i" he stammers "What are you waiting for? Christmas?" she sighed "I love you" he said in a fast and meek tone, he said it all in one go.. "I love you" he said a bit calmly she bit her lips making sure she doesn't smudge her peach lipstick. "umm.." she thinks "Don't do a lot of drama now" he chuckles "It's not drama, it's a kinda tradition that girls feel shy before saying it" she said beating his arm playfully "Tradition? before saying what?" he asked "Arrey, before saying I LOVE YOU TOO" she said and he smiled she later realised what she just said and gasped "Was it as simple as that?" he asked biting back a chuckle "I WILL definelty mind if you dont kiss me right now" she said smiling "why not?" he asked and raged forward to her lips just when he found a hand on his chest..

She looked at his eyes, confused. but i had to do this. i have to tell him. and specially when he means this lot to me, i have decided to TELL him. i HAVE to tell him. "before you kiss me, i need to tell you something...

Precap- Big secret gets revealed

Hope u guys liked it? especially d proposal part? i suck at romance. so i just hope it was okay. please give me reviews. long comments please. and do i need to tell u to hit the tab one more thing...

SORR FOR NOT REPLYING THECOMMENTS..

i was very disturbed and wrote it in a haste. that is why couldnot reply 2 Comments. hope u guys understand and i really hope ki mere mood ka asar iss update par na pada ho? pada kya?

Okay ryt now i really feel guilty for not replying to the comments..

Ho sake toh mennu maaf kar dena mere yaaron! PLYSH!

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago