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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet Os
RishBala friendship was cute ❤️
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chapter 2


RK:ye choclates to ab mujhe phenkin hongi
M:kyaa? choclates? tu choclates laya hai mere liye?
RK:haan( puppy face)
M:tu sach me sharminda hai?
RK:haan
M:la! choclates de or jaa
RK:means tune mujhe maaf kiya?
M:nahiii
RK:to phir me
M:ek shart pe maaf karungi?
RK:bol
M:tu mujhe kbhi nahi bhoole ga or na hi hamari friendship ko? promise kar
RK:pakka wala promise,,,,chal ab hug de?

both hugged eachother...

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rk:zindagi k har more pe apka sath nibhayenge madhubla
m:bas bas ye dialouge bazi band kar
rk:sun kal jo heroine ane wali thi wo aj ayi..
m:achawww
rk:or tujhe pata hai?

the padmini calling madhu for lunch.

m:ayiii! maa tu ye baad me batana abhi me khana khane jari hun bohat bhook lagi hai.
rk:ok ok

somedays passed.. rk intrestd in dips ..madhu in room..

m:rk is so sweet nd cute .. madhu wht are u saying ..he is only ur frnd..par wo mujhe dost se kaayi ziyada lagta hai ...kya mujhe ??? tu bhi na madhu soja kuch bhi sochti rehti hai... gud nyr rk

rk:kya me dips ko propose kardoon? han kal movie ki succes party hai me usy wahan propose kar doonga ...

next day ..

rk:hey madhu..kal meri movie ki success party hai..or tujhe ana hai
m:me try karungi
rk:no try tujhe ana hi hai ..nd thts final..nd i have a surprise
m:surprise?
rk:han ajana ...ohk bye
m:bye...(surprise ...kya rk mujhe?

madhu dancing on me pareshaan song..

next day ..rk movie success part...

rk:aj me dips ko propose karunga ... ye madhu kyun nahi ayi abhi tak ... lo agyi..hi madhu
m:hi rk..looking dashing han
rk:nd u looking beautiful
m:thnx
rk:me bht onfuse hun yar
m:rk or confuse?
rk:shut up! yar ...dips

rk goin to dips

rk:hey dips
d:hi rk ... kya baat hai tum to bohat handsum lagre ho.
rk:well mujhse ziyada to ap kamaal hain
d:really!
rk:ofcause ..rk kabhi jhooti tareef nahi karta ,,
d:hmm
rk:come
m:rk...
rk:wht madhu?
m:wo kon hai?
rk:wo dips hai
m:dips?
rk:i mean deepali ... i call her dips
m:oh ok..
rk:wait me abhi aya
m:hmm
rk:kya me is beautiful lady k sath dance kar sakta hun ..
d:sure!
m:rk hamesha mere sath dance krta hai or aj...kya pata wo mujhe jealous feel kara raha ho..wo surprise bhi to dega ...haan!

dance finished all were clapping..

rk:ladies nd gentlemens...dil thaam kar bethen .. ek or surprise abhi baki hai ... well rk ka jispe dil aya hai ..uska nam batane ka waqt agya hai ..or uska nam hai?..any gussess ..nooo ...i wil tel her name ... her name is none othern than ..deepali shah...

all were clapping...expext madhu

rk:will u marry me?
d:yes!

they hugged...madhu's heart was broken ..she cnat controlled her tears nd running outside...

m:kyun mere sath esa hua kyun? kyun mujhe rk se pyar hua kyun? mujh jesi larki se kon pyar karega? rk sirf mujhe apna dost manta hai mujhe bhi sirf dosti tak rehna chahiye tha ... kyun me dosti se aage bharii kyun??? nahi me rk ko kabhi nahi bataongi me apni dosti torna nahi chati ...rk ko kabhi is bat ka pata nai chalega ..rk sirf mera dost hai sirf dost...!

just then radha ji enter

rj:madhu tu yahn kya kari hai?
m:kuch nahi anty bas andar jane wali thi ..ayie
rj:chal..

party

rk:madhu surprise kesa laga?
m:acha tha
rk:hmm
m:ohk me chalti hun
rk:itni jaldi?
m:han wo ..
rk:come on yar .. acha dips se to mil le...dips
d:yes rk..
rk:meet my frnd madhu
d:hi madhu..
m:hi nd congrts..
d:thnx .. tum rk ko bohat achi tarah janti ho na?
m:han
d:tumhe kabhi rk se pyar nahi hua?
rk:dips..wht rubbish yr? we are just frndxx ryt madhu?
m:ya! ok me ab chalti hun late hogya hai
rk:bye madhu
d:bye

next day

rk:anty madhu ko bula den?
p:woto kab ki college k liye nikal gayi hai
rk:nikal gayi hai?
p:haan
rk:ohk thnx

rk:itni jaldi niakl gayi bataya bhi nahi..

college

mf:kya bat hai yar subha se tu khoyi hui hai?
m:nahi esi bat nahi hai
mf:pakka?
m:han .. chal me chalti hun ...bye
mf:bye

rk:hey! madhu kahan hai?
mf:woto abhi abhi nikal gayi
rk:ohk thnx ...


at the malik mansion

malik:tune ye soch ke faisla kiya hai na?
m:han malik mujhe last year london me complete karna hai
malik:thek hai jesi teri mrzi..me tickets book karwa deta hun ...parso ki
m:parso ki nahi kal ki...
malik:ok

rk room

rk:ye madhu ko kya hogya hai? party wale din se dikhi hi nahi hai akhir kya bat ho sakti hai?..wo pareshan to nahi hai ...nahi nahi agr hoti to mujhe zaroor bata ti ...kal us se bat karta hun,,,,

malik mansion

p:madhu ye radha ji ko deke aja?
m:main?
p:han tu..
m:thk ha..(jake anty ko deke ajati hun rk k munh hi nahi lagun gi)

rk mansion

rk:patel khan laooo

madhu enter

m:anty ghr me hn?
s:nahi woto bahar gayi hn.
m:acha ye unko de dena kehna maa ne diya hai
s:ji thek hai.
rk:madhu ki awaz... madhu madhu ...madhu ayi thi abhi?
s:ji chef
rk:kahan gayi?
s:bahar ki trf..
rk:madhu madhu!
m:(oh no)
rk:stop madhu ...ruk ..kya hogya hai tujhe?me tujhe kabse awazen laga raha hoon sun q nahi ri?
m:abbb ..wo..mujhe der hori hai ..kal bat karte hn
rk:tu mujhe avoid kari hai?
m:main?...me q avaoid karungi.
rk:acha...itne dino se na tu mujhse mili hai na hi ghar ayi hai?
m:wo .. me busy thi..
rk:busy? kisme?
m:colege me ..
rk:college me?...dekh meri ankhon me ankhen dal ke bat kar..
m:kya hogya hai? pagal hogya hai tu?...mera hath chor or mujhe jane de...
rk:pehle mere sawal ka jawab de?
m:rishab hath chro?
rk:(shock)rishab? tu pareshan hai?
m:me pareshan nahi hun...tu samjh q nahi raha..
rk:meri taraf dekh?

raining starts...

m:dekh liya bas..
rk:madhu...

background music starts...hum hain deewane

m:barish shuru hogyi ha .. mujhe jane de...ye tu kya kara ha?

they dancing...

m:(me rk ko bhulne ki koshish kari hun or ye muje nahi me eas nahi kar sakti)

madhu leave her hand ..nd bhaag jati ha wahn se

rk:madhu madhu... meri bat sun ...madhu akkhir isey hua kya hai? itna ajeeb behave?

midnight..

t:gilcyrne itni rat gaye kya kari ha?
m:ku..kuch nhi
t:tu ro rahi ha?
m:nahi wo... tum sbko chor k jaongi na to
t:to mat jaa
m:nahiii
t:kyaaa?
m:mera matlab hai chal sojate hain..
t:thek ha gn..


heres the part end ...hope lyk it

love
SAM




Edited by Sahiba_doll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
loved the chapter
waiting for the next one
update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomee update👏
loved itt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IAM FEELING REALLY BAD FOR MADHU, I THINKS WAT RK FEELS FOE DIPS IS JUST AN INFACTUATION!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

IAM FEELING REALLY BAD FOR MADHU, I THINKS WAT RK FEELS FOE DIPS IS JUST AN INFACTUATION!!

ya ur rite ...but aage parhti raho pata chal jayega...😃 thnx fr cmnt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...hope we'll get more soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww becharii madhu! i hope rk dips per sirf atarct hua hai its not love yar...madhu's heart broken...hopee ...bohat rk ko bhi ho hi jae ga madhu se ishq...bte suparb part..cnt soon...
love
tia
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice oyeee..

waiting fr next part..

nd thankxx fr pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...but feeling bad for madhu

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