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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start👏
continue soon😊
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Originally posted by: upasna_mishti

mb forum pe karti na post
okay its damn interesting
thanku fo pm

tere ko read karna hai na hehe😆 yahin karle😃 thnx 😊
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Originally posted by: -Priya01

Hi Shahiba ...lovely concept ...thxs for the pm n do continue soon

thnx dear piya...😛
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Originally posted by: deepakk79

Update it soon yaar 😆

ya ya sure😃 btw thnx han😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PerfecT..GaL

Welcme here sammy...i would love to read ur os

ya sure adaa ,,,thnkoo😆
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

nice start👏

continue soon😊

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thnx guyxx for lovely comments ...! here is update ...!


chapter 1

Malik Mansion

M:didu nashta to karlo?
T:gilcyrene mujhe late horaha hai so am going bubye take care.
M:arey par...

trishna left

RK Mansion

rj(radha ji) bj (bittu ji)

RJ:rishu uth gaya hai bittu ji?
BJ:anty ji wo chef abhi tak sorahe hain.
RJ:hey bhagwan is larke ke me kya karoon?

M:anty jo karoon gi me karoon gi.
RJ:arey! madhu beta aoo andar
M:namaste!
RJ:dekh abhi tak rish...
M:ap fikar mat kijiye me abhi utha deti hoon.

radha ji smiles

RK room

M:wah wah! kese araam se soraha hai ... mujhe kehta hai subha uthke mere paas aya karo me tumhe college drop kar doonga or khud dekho janab aram se sorahe hain ... abhi isko uthati hoon..rk uth jao..
RK:maa kya hai mene kaha tha na aj subha mat uthna meri koi shooting nai hai.
M:maa! rishu tujhe ek good news deni hai uth ja beta ...(giggling)
RK:bolo me sunraha hoon.
M:mene tere liye ek larki dhoondi hai.
RK:acha ... kyaaa?
M:hahahaha
RK:madhu ki bachi ye teri shrarat thi... abhi batata hun tujhe
M:RK the superstar Rishab Kundra bas shadi ke dar se bhaag jata hai ...
RK:bas kar beta abhi choroon ga nahi..

DOWNSTAIRS

RK:ruk ja tu beta
M:han han pakar
Rj:are tum dono phir shuru hogye
RK:maa pehle isne shuru kiya tha
M:to tu uthra tha kya? wese mujhe wada krta hai or khud hi sojata hai.
RK:abb ..wo..
M:bas bas rehne de... oh! no me late horahi hoon me jarahi hoon ...
RK:me drop kar deta hoon.
M:no thanx me chali jati hoon.
RK:thora wait karle
M:only 10 mins
RK:ok ok
M:me bahar rukti hoon.
RJ:in dono ki to masti chalti rahegi.. pata nahi kab bare honge .
BJ:ji anty ji..

RK coming...

M:hmm looking handsome..!
RK:always sweetheart
M:kisko impress karna hai ab?
RK:girlss mujhe impress karti hain me unko nahi
M:han han ab cahlen..
RK:ya!

in the car

RK:so madhu college kesa chal raha hai?
M:jesa chalta hai
RK:hmm
M:BTW kal teri shoot ki new heroine ane wali hai na.
RK:yeah!
M:agar us se tujhe pyar hpjye to?
RK:bakwas
M:what? stop stop..
RK:why?
M:idiot college agya hai
RK:o! yeah!
M:ohk bye tc.
RK:bye tc. nd baad me lene ajaon ga ok
M:ok

madhu left ..rk cel ringing

RK:bolen bittu ji
BJ:chef abhi call aya hai apko abhi shooting pe jana hoga .
RK:thek hai me ata hoon.

STUDIO

RK:heroine to nahi ayi abhi tak?
BJ:chef wo thori der me ponchti hogi.
RK:thek hai.

"HATIYE HATIYE MAM ARAHI HAIN"


RK:konsi asmaan se pari utar ayi hai bittu ji?
BJ:dekhte hain


PA OF HEROINE

PA:mam ap bethiye
Mam:GOD! juice lekar ao mere liye foran
PA:yes mam .. mam k liye juice lao

HEROINE IS DEEPALI

RK:mera juice kahan hai bittu ji?
BJ:chef wo me juice laya tha...
RK:to kahan hai juice?

"mere paas hai juice"

RK:so ap hain new heroine?
D:ji bilkul
RK:heroine to nai lagti ap?
D:bas kismat yahn le ayi hai.
RK:kismat?
D:apke charche to bohat sune hain aj apni ankho se dekh bhi liya...
RK:to dekhne k baad apki kya raaye hai ...MIS ..
D:deepali shah
RK:intresting
BJ:chef shot ready hai
RK:chaliye

RK " MERI ANKHON ME DEKHO SUMAN KYA TUMHE PYAR NAZAR NAHI ATA"

D"SAMEER ME KISI OR SE PYAR KARTI HOON"

RK"PLEASE SUMAN EK BAAR MERI"

D"TUM MERI BAAT KYUN NAHI SAMJH RAHE ME JARAHI HUN"

RK"SUMAN SUMAN"

director:cut it!... wonderful shot

BJ:chef k liye chair lao

D:not bad ap to kaafi ache actor hain
RK:ap bhi kuch kam nahi hain
PA:mam chalen
D:ok RK kal milte hain.
RK:zaroor bye..

COLLEGE

one of madhu's frnd

frnd:great yar madhu tune bohat achi speech di.
M:thnx.
F:wese tujhe is sab k bare me kese pata?
M:bas pata hai
F:acha ... ok me chalti hoon.
M:bye... ye RK kahan reh gaya hai?

RK KA CALL

M:heloo! kahan ho tum?
RK:sorry madhu aj me nahi apaonga wo meri shooting...
M:pehle batana chahiye tha na huh! bye me chali jaongi khud.
RK:madhu helo madhu ... shit!
M:nahi ana tha to to pehle batana chahiye na faltu me mera time waste kar diya idiot..

madhu reached home

M:aj me us se bat hi nahi karoongi...
P:madhu kya hua??
M:kuch nahi maa me bohat thak gayi hoon sone jarahi hoon .
P:khana to khale
M:bhook nahi hai.

nd she left for room...rk enter

P:arey! rk beta
RK:namstey anty...madhu kahan hai?
P:madhu ko tumne drop nahi kiya?
RK:nai wo mujhe kaam...
P:acha tabhi uska mood off hai
RK:dont worry anty abhi on kar deta hoon.

padmini smiles.

RK:koi humse bohat naraz hai hamari taraf dekh bhi nahi raha... par phir me ye gift kisko doon jo me leke aya hoon chalo kisi or ko de deta hoon

M(herslef):kuch bhi karlo me nahi bolne wali
RK:Lagta hai bohat naraz hai
M(herskef):hawww! chp hogya.
RK:kya karoon? idea

RK:ye choclates to ab mujhe phenkin hongi
M:kyaa? choclates? tu choclates laya hai mere liye?
RK:haan( puppy face)
M:tu sach me sharminda hai?
RK:haan
M:la! choclates de or jaa
RK:means tune mujhe maaf kiya?
M:nahiii
RK:to phir me
M:ek shart pe maaf karungi?
RK:bol
M:tu mujhe kbhi nahi bhoole ga or na hi hamari friendship ko? promise kar
RK:pakka wala promise,,,,chal ab hug de?

both hugged eachother...

here is the part end...

hope all are like it! do comments and likes,,,!

love
SAM






Edited by Sahiba_doll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beta thora bara karle comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update sahiba ...love rishbala friendship ...y am i smelling deepz ll come in between their friendhip???
thxs for the pm...do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yar bada awesome blosam update tha... Un dono ki friendship kitni cute hai... Deepali ki entry bhi ho gyi...yaha pe bhi vo kamini k role me hai kya? Chal vo to aage k parts me pata chal jayega... Yay... Ye os kamal dhmal hai...👍🏼

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