ACP OF THE YEAR ch1 pg7 dec 11th

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Hey guys me back with another ariya story basic story line is like SOTY but very diffrent with lots of twists





ETF CHIEF ACP SAMEER DHAMSINGH RATHORE




The scion of the Rich Royal Rathore Rajput Family , shares a complex relationship with his family and father, Raja Ranjeet singh Rathore because Raja Ranjeet only measures Rathore with his own parameters of success and is upset that he left teh royal tradtion to beocme a officer ..Despite all his aggression, like all sons, Rathore seeks his father's approval. Rathore's sweetheart, Riya Muhkerjee has a special place in Rathores 's heart too but that doesn't stop him from taking her for granted. In this life of dreams and status and much respect walks in a old friendenmy Arjun changing views, adding complications and thereby shifting equations to the extent that the ACP Of The Year competition in POLICE FORCE becomes the symbol of self-worth and self-realisation for Rathore, he is an amazing chief and ACP knows how to have fun , was an amazing racer in college

RESEARCH SPECIALIST RIYA MUHJERJEE


RIYA beautiful, hot a head turner . has very few reasons to complain in her life, she has a wonder job , amazing friends and a guy who she thinks loves her . Born with a silver spoon in her mouth. yet very humble and sweet she has always been very lucky since childhood she has gotten everything her parents pampered her with a huge mansion,imported cars,Jewels , servants, they gave her everything except their love ... mom was very busy with socal work and ngo's and her kitty parites while her father was away on business and traveling ...she is very alone she tries hard to smother her need for love with couture clothes, designer brands and her half baked romance with Rathore . When a new acp her senior Arjun walks into the corridors of ETF Riya doesn't pay much attention to him but as time passes by she can't but help realizing her attraction for him and Riya realizes suddenly that the ACP Of The Year trophy has much more significance in her life than she imagined.
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ACP ARJUN SURYKANT RAWTE


Arjun is a State level shooter and an excellent ACP from a middle class Delhi family. His arrigance, aloofness, street smart intelligence, and photograpic memory and his nonsense nature makes sure he is always ahead of others in thought and action. When he enters ETF on the request of the commissioner , he soon realizes that his position and presnece is not wanted is among Rathrore 'but his heart is with the team . His friendship/bromance with Rathore and his unspoken love for Riya give rise to complications he doesn't expect and it's just a matter of time before he realizes that ACP of the Year trophy is no longer just his ticket to success but will chisel him into the person he will become.

TECHNOLOGY SPECIALIST SHEERKANT SEN AKA SHREE


He is sweet, a total gagdet geek, funny, best friends with riya , and chotu is Rathore's chamcha

COMMANDO CHOTU


Sweet .caring,goofy, strong, best friends with shree n riya arjun;s chamcha



KHUSHI KHUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA AKA RIYA'S CHAMKILI


Best friends with riya since high school loves her like a sister hates Rathore for taking riya and her love for granted ... annoyed with Arjun but turns a blind eye for 2 reasons 1. she knows what khichadi is cooking between ri n him and 2. he reminds her of her husband arnav singh raizada how he was in the beganing sadhu

ENCOUNTER SPECALIST FIZA


She's the barbie doll type. A Bitch.(BEAUTIFUL INDIVIDUAL THAT CREATES HELL when she wants ) tries to steal Rathore from Riya...yet she likes Riya she sees her old self in her but life changed her and made her seem rude and bitchy when in real she is just like riya has many walls that need to be broken ...she is atypical girly girl but when needed can be like one of the guys a awesome shooter .. she is a header turner hot and she knows it ... she is the style icon of the ETF just like riya loves to shop and has everything name brand designer but along with looking pretty and using her girl charm to woe the guys she is a fantastic encounter specialist , hails from a rich well known family, her family all are in the states spoiled , she gets what she wants in her family thats why seeing rathore and knowing she cant have him is very diffcult for her


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The girls were in her room getting her ready while the boys were with rathore

I must say riya you do look pretty says ms .theeki

Thank you waise aaj tum bhi achi lag re ho par itna sexy sari kyun pena tha says riya

That she does says chamkili and puts a kala theeka haan yaar aaj ki din rathore ki nazar sirf ri pe hona and your sari god arnav ko bhi dehkne majboor kare ga says chamkili

Well kya kar sak the main hoon hi itne theeki na she says and winks

Wow ri lag tha hai rathore really loves you your mehndi is so dark said chamkili

What the well of course he does its just does she 'says ms theeki aka fiz

Let me see her mehndi na

No ms theek move it go look at your own hands says riya

What the why she says

Your Bure nazar is not needed chamkili ek aur teeka dalo muhje says riya

Omg As if whatever she had tears in her eyes riyas word stung her she walks out

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Guys down stairs in the main hall

Yaar itna nervous kyun ho ra ho'just relax says arnav

Arnav nervous tho hoga na sir kyunki ri ka ab har baat sun na hoga kyun chotu says shree

Right aur waise bhi aaj thak sir ka chal tha hai ab riya ka hoga , just wait when thw ring is put on the finger na sir will be dancing to her tunes says chotu

Arjun was lost his eyes fixed to the staircase and her room hopeing to see her one glimpse.

Arnav noticed

Rawte yaar in dono ko chup kar im so damn nevous and they just love pulling my leg ' yaar riya khus tho hai na , im just so worried aaj kal she seems very quite

Nahi rathore larki hai hota hai jab shaadi ki functions hote hai just calm your self Ill get you a drink says arjun

Thanks Rawte im so happy ki my bestfreinds are here with me especaliy you and Arnav hum then college se ek saath the na .

Aur roshni ki baad tho I missed you arjun tum aur arnav na mere bhai ki jaise ho infact ab shree aur chotu bhi hai

He hugs arjun

Arjun hugs him back but is looking still at riya's room

Arnav gets annoyed and took him in the corner

Just stop it Rawte I know ki kya ho ra hai bas karo just like you're my friend rathore is too jot u kare ho na is wrong says arnav

What am I doing says arjun

Tumhare nazar is looking for riya na itne restlessness hai na stop it says arnav

Yeh sirf rathore ka haak hai , im warning you as afriend don't do this

Varna agar main samjaoga na it will be ugly says arnav

They go back to rathore hand him a drink

she sways her self to the men

haye there comes miss theeki says shree

Looking dashing as always handsome acp says fiza

Thank you darling and you are looking stunning i must say says rathore

she blushes

Yeh kya hai drinking before the ceremony na and she takes his drink and sips It yeh kya hai let me fix your buttons on your shervani

oh boys please be a gentelman and hold this she hands them the drink

She goes closer to him and seductively buttions it there perfect riya is very lucky I must say bye boys she says and takes the drink walks away swaying her hips

Haye yeh ms theek hum ko kyun nahi dehk thi says shree

Arjun is annoyed with rathore

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Back in the room

Riya what was that I know you hate that ms theeki who always flirts with sam but aaj tum na were very rude she actually was hurt when you said bure nazar says chamkili

I know yaar and I feel horrible but I can even show rathore my mehndi says riya

What why not uska naam ka hai you have to she says

That's the problem yaar galati se rathore ka nahi par says riya

Par kya kis ka naam tere haath pe hai? Says chamkili

Yaar you know everything why are you asking says riya

Ri tum kya kare let me see in her hand ina small corner you can see the initials ASR

Nand kishor kya kare tum shit sam ka naam hai hi nahi kya haath pe?

Hai par on other hand I added it my self itna acha nahi hai

Pheww at least kare na

Just don't show this hand to any one please says chamkili

Tum na finish getting ready ill go down and haan stay away from that acp samhje ya samajo '. Or else problem hoga right when chamkili was leaving riya was putting on her churiyaan and they fell on the floor

Omg ri yeh tho'

upshugan hai say ri

im really scared yaar says riya

don't worry just arjun se door raho please

just until you get engaged atleast says chamkili

khushi '. Kahan ho says arnav

aye says khushi and leaves

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after a lil while

it's time for engagement

she is in her room she feels her dori of her choli get lose

she trys to tie it again the lights go out

riya hears foot steps

chamkili ya ms theeki please help me na my dori is open please can you tie it says riya

she feels someone tie her dori suddenly she feels a breeze and her heart beating super fast she whispers arjun

tumne kaisa pata tha riya ? it so dark

aap ki aahaat I know very well mere dil ne kaha ki aap hi ho says riya

tho agar yeh baat hai tum yeh galati kyun kare ho ? he says

yeh hi theek hai arjun please our familes want this we want this she says

really jhoot hai riya you don't want this he says

he lights his lighter since its so dark

just stop it arjun she puts her hand in front to tell him to not say another word bas haan I want this please ab leave she says

he smiles really ek aur jhoot riya engagement rathore ki saath laken haaton pe mere naam ki mehndi abhi you want this?

Who galti se hua ab please leave it almost time for the exchanging of th rings koi dehke le tho hungama hoga please she begs him

Dehke tho dehke ne do damn it I don't care waise bhi he doesn't care for you riya you see how he always flirts with what you call her haan ms. Theeki , he doesn't value you 'par I do 'he says

Just shut up arjun main aisa nahi kar sak thi she has tears in her eyes

He cups her face look in her eyes whipes her tears and bend his head and kisses her

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Downstairs

Riya kahan hai ill go get her hum saath will go down he thinks he was looking for her and couldn't find her '

he was fixing his cufflinks and walking kahan hai who sab wait kare hai he walks in the room , its so dark in here he thinks and ons the lights and

he looks up

He suddenly starts to clap his hands and yells What The 'bloody dog get away from my GIRLFRIEND

They turn and face him

Everyone runs to see kya hau

Wow just great kya baat hai

Aaj hi yeh deh na para 'acha hai

on are engagement Riya?

She had tears and was extremely guilty

Sameer please just hear me out ' he stops her by raising his hand indicating her not to speak another word

Yeh aap ki galati nahi hai riya ' yeh uski ki galalti hai damn it

He grabs arjuns collar

How could you Rawte I knew tumko trust nahi kar na jo tu kare na mere bhen roshni ki saath uski baad bhi I turned a blind I just because of her but still again you proved me wrong damn it you back stabbed meee

Yells rathore

Rathore baat suno says arjun

Arnav is stairing at arjun

And is about to punch him when

Sir leave him na says shree

Noo I wont yells rathore

Sam clam your self says fiz

Nooo damn it calm myself after seeing him my so called friend my co officer kissing my Girlfriend

Rathore I know tum upset ho but thisis not the time says arnav

What the says chamkili

She looks at riya

She whispers tu tho bole ki you wont go near him, yeh galat hai tho phir yeh kya hua ? says chamkili

Kab se chal ra hai under my nose questions Rathore

Rathore ab yehs ab kyun '. These answers will only hurt you says fiza

No let arjun answer damn it Rathore has every right to know says arnav

Actually I don't know I unknowing I fell for her says arjun in acalm manner

This annoyed Rathore

Rathore goes to slap him

Nooo please yells riya

This pisses him off more

Is going to slap him

but riya comes in the middle n gets slaped

Rathore didn't expect this

Riya says rathore and goes to touch her cheek where he was slapped when

Riya yells arjun in concern and pulls her behind him

Rathore tu he grabs his collar

Just stop it rathore tum riya ko kabhi pyaar hi nahi kare ,

You never loved her or why would you give other girls the time attention your girlfriend needed ? you didn't care how she felt when you were busy flirting with ms.theeki huh? Tho ab muhje aur usko saath dehke kyun bura laga huh?

This is exactly how she use to feel says arjun

Teri tho I wont spare you , mere girlfriend ko kiss kare ki baad you are blaming me.

I never kissed any other girl and job hi hai its between me and riya ,

You always were eyeing riya , you even said agar I don't treat how she deserves you will but I thought tu mazak kara tha, day one se uske peeche tha damn you rawte

And he punches him in the jaw

Arjunn yell riya

Arjun punches rather back in the nose

fiz has her hand on her mouth in shock

enough both you yells arnav

he trys to pull them apart

what the the tiro say chakili , shree and chotu

They are all shocked

Chotu shree dehke kya re ho help karo yells arnav

Chotu pulls arjun away while arnav and shree try to pull rathore

Leave me shree iss kamine ko na I will teach him today ,

He always ruined my life be it my sisters or my family

Stop it rathore roshni ka baar baar stop throwing it in my face jo bhi hua mere galti nahi tha says arjun

Shut up oh really now just like kissing riya isn't your fault na '. it was and always will be aur haan riya mere hai say rathore

Galati fayme main ho rathore uske haathon main mere naam ki mehndi hai aur dil pe bhi yeh dehko he takes her hand and shows him

Enough yells riya and pulls it away

Bas karo im not yours or rathores , samhje ya samjao

Damn im not apart of this stupid ACP OF THE YEAR crap that you will win me 'im odne with both of you understood she says

And runs off

Riya chamkili runs after her

Arjun looks at rathore they have a stair down

Ch 1 Precap : 5 years later and flash backs

Edited by Fiza28 - 12 years ago
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Character sketch pg 1

Teaser pg 1

ch 1 pg7

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3312512&TPN=7&#71470866

Edited by Fiza28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my comment first time and in ur topic hehe
btw looks interesting wating for first chapter 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow cs is very intersting
waiting for 1 chapter,
send me pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept
cont soon
& pm me also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting... loved it.. ofcourse except the rathore riya.. half baked love story part...

update soon!!!
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intresting...
i would definantly like to know why acp of the year trophy has becom so important...?😉
plzzz pm me when u update..
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Interesting CS...
waiting for the story...
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Absolutely phenomenal...
yaar shaleen pic dekhe ke...i am fainting...superb CS...Chamikili is here...

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