MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#321

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 20... MANVEER...
Uday is sitting on bed, manyata sitting besides him...manyata keeps
her hand on his cheek: jao jake fresh hoke ao...uske bad mein tumhare
ghav saf karti hai...
Uday:ok..
He goes in washroom and here manyata gets uday's call...
Unnati: hi manyata waha sab kesa hai??
Manyata:yaha sab thike unnati...
unnati: kya hua manyata tumhari awaaj itni utri hui kyun hai??
Manyata tells Unnati everything:unnati kya uday ke life mein koi esa
insaan hai jiske bare mein who bahot kuch feel karta hai par kabhi
express nahi karta???
Unnati sad: dada ke life mein esi ek hi insaan thi manyata...MAA...
Manyata: thnks unnati...there's a sound of opening of door... acha chal
lagta hai tera dada agaya...bye...
Uday comes out in black banyan and trousers...his hair wet...but he is
still sad...she hold his face in her palms...
Manyata: Uday mein janti hu kit um bahot upset ho par please bhul
jao sab kuch...
She kisses him on his lips...but this time he doesn't kiss her back...as
the aggressive Uday used to... Manyata sad moves back and is about
to go when suddenly Uday catches her...and pulls back...he hugs her
tightly... seeing his pain manyata's tears fall... the music starts...
Maan yeh saheb ji
Jan hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane
Naina Nawabi ji
Dekhe hai Sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe Ishare
Maaan yeh saheb ji
Haan Karta Bahane
Naina Nawabi ji
NA samjhe ishare
Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo re Saibo
She makes him sit on the bed...she cleans all his wounds...and both sit
silent for sometime... Uday phir bolne ki himmat karta hai...takes her
hand in his...
Uday: im sorry manyata hum wo...
Manyata keeps her finger on Uday's lips...: shhh... koi baat nahi...
bas tum phir se mujhe mere pehle wale Uday ko wapas kardo...
Uday smiles and covers her in his arms...
Surkhiyan hai hawaon mein
Do dilon ki milne ki
Ho ho Arziyan hai nazaron mein
Lamha yeh tham jane ki
Kaise huzur ji yeh lab dikhlaye
Chuppi bhi lage ke bhi gazab yeh dhaye
Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere baiga dheere dhere Apna sa dheere dheere
LAage se Saibo
Manyata : ek baat puchu Uday?
Uday:hmm...pucho...
Manyata:mujhe apne bare mein kuch batao na...
Uday: hmmm...to kya janana chahti hai humari princess humare
bareme...??
Manyata: mujhe chod ke tumhare life mein ese insaan jinse tum khud
se bhi jyada pyaar karte ho...
Uday haste haste: hmmm... dad choti mo...he stops his
expressions change...his expressions change...tears fall...MOM...He
gets up from bed...
Manyata takes his face in her palms...
Manyata:mujhe maaf kardo uday tumhe upset karne ka koi irada nahi
tha mera...
Uday:its ok...
Manyata:kuch batana chahoge??
Uday:very upset...pata hai princess bachpanse dad ne sikhaya ki
kabhi bhi apne jazbaat juban pe lane se hum kamjor ho jaate hai...
Manyata:hum dono to ek hi hai na Uday...mein chahti hu kit um har
who jazbat mujhse share karo jo najane kitne saalo se tumne apne dil
mein ked kar rakhe hai...bataoge mujhe plz??
Uday looks at her innocently and nods...
"humari ma ka naam sulabha tha... Maharani sulabha giriraj singh...
bahot pyaar karti thi wo humse...hume humesha pyaar ka rastaa
chunane ke liye kaha karti thi...lekin us din..."he stops...
Manyata: tensed...us din kya??
Uday:tab hum 14 sal ke the... Humari ladai virayangad ke sath chal
rahi thi...unke riyasat ke maharaj ke dad ki mot hamare dadaji ke
hathon se hui...badle ke liye us raja ne kuch admi bheje hume maarne
keliye... Listening this manyata shocked...hum aur maa angan mein
khade the...pata nahi kya hua par achanak wo humare samne aa
gayi...hume kuch pata nahi chala...lekin jab wo neeche giri tab humne
dekha ki unhe goli lagi thi...
Uday apni story batate batate neeche gir gaya...
Maa:mujhe maaf kardo Uday beta...
Uday: maa maaa ap hume chodke nahi jaa sakti uthiye...maa...
His mom closed her eyes forever...back to present--------
Uday sitting on his knees shouting loudly...MAAA...
Manyata shocked to know this... Uday looks at manyata ...
Uday:mar dala humne unhe manyata ... humari wajah se unki jaan
chali gayi...kash wo log hume mar dalte...
Manyata sits down on her knees and hugs him tightly... Uske pith ko
apne hath se sehlate hue...
Manyata: nahi Uday ...jo kuch bhi hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi
thi...please apne aap ko doshi mat mano...
She moves back and wipes his tears...kissing him on his forehead...
Uday crying: manyata promise me kit um mujhe kabhi chod ke nai
jaogi...
Manyata: I promise...
Uday rests his head on manyata's shoulder... Manyata this time
covers him in her arms...
Manyata in mind..
" mujhe nahi pata tha ki is haste hue chehre ke piche tumne itna dard
chupaya rakha tha Uday..."
She makes him stand and takes him near the window...pointing
towards the brightest star in the sky...
Manyata: wo tara dekh rahe ho Uday wo tumhari maa hai...jo tumhe
dekh rahi hai...tara banke who hamesha tumhae sath hai Uday ...
Uday shout looking at the star:kyun kyun chod ke chali gayi app hume
maa kyun??
He goes and sits on bed...crying...
Manyata goes and sits near him...and holds his hands...
Manyata:Uday utmhe aaram ki jaroorat hai... you should sleep...
Uday nods and keeps his head on her lap...uday still crying... manyata
moves her hand through his hair...
Uday: thank you manyata
Manyata:sh... Abhi kuch mat bolo so jao...
Uday sleeps and manyata bhi thodi der baad so jati hai...
In morning...
Manyata sees that she is sleeping in Uday's arms... Uday still
sleeping... Manyata sees him innocently...kisses him on his head...
and removes his hand from her waist...and is about to go when uday
pulls her back...and she falls on uday...
Manyata: uday ye tum kya kar rahe ho??
Uday: apne hone wali patni se kiss lene ki soch rha hu...
Both look at each other's lips... manyata controls herself...
Manyata: abhi nahi badme...
She says in a low voice...
Uday: please princess ek kiss do na...
Manyata blushes...ese mango ge to mein mana kese karungi??
Ek Shararat Hone Ko Hai
Ek Qayamat Hone Ko Hai
Hosh Humare Khone Ko Hain
Humko Mohabbat Hone Ko Hai
SHE KISSES HIM ON HIS LIPS AND RUNS FROM THERE... AND GOES
AND STANDS IN FRONT OF THE MIRROR...
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
Uday comes and hugs her from back!!: thanks princess...
Manyata turns: Uday plz ese thnk you kehke mujhe paraya to mat
karo...
Uday pulls her more closer: ach toh hum puri tarah se ek ho jaate hai
na...
Manyata:beats on his chest... Shut up uday kuch toh sharam kar...
Uday: ab sharmana kya princess shadi ke raat toh vese bhi hum...
Manyata keeps her finger on his lips and he kisses her fingers...
Uday:I LOVE YOU...
Manyata: I LOVE YOU TOO...
~mahima~
i know i know u all wanna kill me but believe im sooo tired of the dailyy chores i e hw and assignments obvio that m unable to write anythong so sorry!!!
love u guys!

Quote

roshni101

@roshni101

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Finally you update after ages. Loved it to bits.
It was amazing. Every single line was written beutifully.
Manveer scenes were sooo cute and sweet.
I hope to see alot of manveer romance in further updates.
Please dont make us wait again and update soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

hi mah⭐️i

the update was really amazing and i must say u have done a great job

can't wait for the next update😳

accha jab bhi tum next update karogi plz.do pm me...plz...🥱

Quote

sehrish

@sehrish216

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

It waz fab update n romantic thnkz for pm 👏

Quote

sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

mahi, when r u going to update.😡😡😡..it's been ages since u updated, now update soon and ya one more thing update a long one🤢...soon

i's an order cum request...😃

Quote

sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

when r u going to reply...it's been ages since i have got a perfect dose of manveer...and now i can't wait anymore...do update soon

Quote

sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

😛hey! mahi what happened to you, wh y r u nt updating😭😭

please update soon

just can't wait anymore😭

aur kitna time lagega yaar, over here i am dying to get a good update of manveer from ur side ...😕🤢...plz update plz...a request coming to you straight from my heart...umm kuch jyada ho gaya na😲

😳😛😊

Quote

MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 21... MANVEER...

Manveer come home from the hotel... Manyata in her room standing

in front of mirror... Uday comes and hugs her from back...

Manyata: Uday ye kya kar rahe ho??

Uday: hmmm... Hum apne hone wali biwi ko ek pyarasa hug hug de

rahe hai...vese voh hai to pagal... par bahot pyari hai tumhe milna hai

use...??

Manyata: koi jaroorat nahi hai... Mujhe pata hai tumhari choice hai to

koi pagal bore hogi hi...

They both start laughing...

Manyata: hmmm...toh hum ghar kab jaa rahe hai??

Uday: tumhe badi jaldi hai ghar jane ki...

Manyata turns back facing him...

Manyata(blushing and playing with his shirt button): ab wapas india

jaenge tabhi toh hamari shadi hogi...aur tabhi toh hum... She leaves

the sentence half...

Uday naughty mood pulls her more closer...:tabhi toh hum..kya

princess...manyata blushes ...bolo na...

Manyata: tabhi toh hum he goes more closer..:tabhi toh hum jaygad

aur devgad ki MAHARANI banenge...

She pushes him back and runs laughing...uday runs behind her and

catches her waist from back...aur who use jor se gol gol ghumata

hai...both very happy...music starts...

Tere murdne se suraj murd gaya..

Teri roshni ke saaye mein main dhoop si khili..

Mera aasman bhi chota pardh gaya..

Mujhe jab se hai baahon mein teri panaa mili..

Woh thehri teri adaa adaa..

Ke ruk bhi gaya mera khuda..

Toh mujhpe hai yeh asar hua.. toota main iss tarah..

[Sadka kiya yoon ishq ka..

Ke sar jhuka jahan.. deedar hua..]

Uday still has a tight hold of manyata from back...she turns back

facing him...

Manyata: aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai mujhpar??

Uday: ab kya kare princess ab toh tumhare agle das din (he goes

more closer to her and whispers in her ears...) aur raat bas humare

hai...

Manyata: HAWWW... she says blushing... Ab jao jake nahake aao

najane kitne dino se nahaye nahi ho...

Uday: oh plzz princess... hum roj nahate hai lekin aaj agar tum hame

company dena chahti ho to your most welcome...

Manyata punches him on his chest...:shut up yuvraj Udayveer

singh...ab jao...

Uday smiles kisses on her cheek and goes in his room aur nahane

chala jata hai...manyata uske room mein jati hai waiting for him to

come out...uday shouts from the bathroom...

Uday: manyata kyat um waha ho???

Manyata: han Uday hun kya hua??/

Uday: plz humhe do na hum bed pe bhool gaye...

Manyata:han han lati hu ( manyata talking to herself...)mujhe pata hai

yuvraj udayveer singh tum jan bujh ke towel bhul gaye ho...

Manyata takes the towel and goes near the bathroom and knocks the

door... Uday opens the door... manyata hands him the towel but he

catches her hand and pulls her inside and closes the door... manyata

first closes her eyes thinkin that he wont have his clothes on...but

fortunately he had worn his trousers...but no shirt... Manyata is

touched to the wall and Uday is standing very very close to her...

Manyata slowly opens her eyes and looks up...uday is looking at her...

both lost in each others eyes... Then manyata's eyes move down on

his chest ,his muscles... She was very impressed by his muscles and

naked chest... she moves her hand on his muscles and chest totally

lost in it... Uday moves more closer... He moves his fingers on her

lips... Manyata's heartbeats turn fast... Uday is abou to kiss her but

she pushes him back and rushes otherside... uday moves towards

her with a serious+naughty expression..she moves back...the music

starts...

tum bhee ho, mai bhee hu, pas aao, toh keh du

aakhir kyun pal yu diwana mai ho gaya

tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jana -

jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya

badan kee yeh khushbu, jatane lagee jadu

toh hoke bekabu, dil kho gaya

tumhe jo maine socha, tumhe jo maine mana

tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jana

jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya

Manyata aur piche ho jati hai... now she has touched the wall and

Uday phirse kareeb jata hai... Galtise shower shuru ho jata hai...dono

puri tarah se bhig jate hai... Uday shower band kar deta hai... woh

manyata ko apne bahon mein uthata hai aur bahar bed pe leta

detahai...manyata ghabra rahi hai... But she is lost in his face... Wo

dhire se uske muh pese gile baal hata ta hai... he kisses on her her

eyes...nose cheeks...and moves his fingers on her soft pink lips...

both breathing fast...both could feel their heartbeats turning fast...

Manyata closes her eyes... slowly Uday touches his lips to her...

Blood starts boiling uder manyata's cheeks... the passionate kiss

suddenly and unknowingly turns agrresive one... Uday moves over

her... manyata locks her fingers in uday's hair... uday slowly moves

down and kisses each and every part of her neck aggressively...

Manyata pulls his head up and makes him kiss her...

The music starts...

itni kyun, tum khubsoorat ho, ke sab ko hairat ho

Duniya mein sach-much hi rehti hai

Pariyon se bhi zyaada pyaari si ladki koyi

Haan itni kyun, bolo haseen tum ho, jo dekhein gum-sum ho

Dekho na main bhi hoon khoya sa

Behka sa mujhpe bhi chhaayi hai diwaangi

Tumhi ko maine puja, tumhi ko chaaha paana

Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana

Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya

Badan ki ye khushboo, jataane lagi jaadoo

Toh hoke beqaabu, dil kho gaya

Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana -2

Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya

Uday realizes what he was doing and moves a little back...both

panting...both shocked...

Uday: I sorry many...

Manyata keeps finger on his lips...and kisses him again...but this time

short kiss... uday shocked by her reaction...his mood changes to

naughtiness again...he was on manyata so he moves aside lieing

next to her... Manyata still in naughty mood... She keeps her head on

his chest and looks in his eyes...

Manyata: YOU ARE TOO HOT TO RESIST YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH...

Uday ko shock pe shock lag rahe the manyata ko ese dekh kar...

Uday: manyata tum thik to ho??

Manyata blushing making pattern on his chest with her fingers...

Manyata: kyun tumhe kya laga flirt sirf tum kar sakte ho han??

Uday starts laughing...

Manyata: has kyun rahe ho??

Uday: kuch nai... bas believe nahi ho raha ki ye tum hi ho...han nahi

toh...

Manyata blushes...The music starts...

Tum bhi ho, main bhi hoon, paas aao, toh keh doon

Tumne jo dekha toh kya jaane kya ho gaya

Jaane kyun, rehti hoon khoyi si, jaagi na soyi si

Ab dil mein armaan hai saanson mein toofaan hai

Aankhon mein khwaabon ki hai chaandni

Aa...jaane kyun, behka sa ye mann hai, mehka sa ye tan hai

Chalti hoon itraake, ithlaake, sharmaake

Balkhaake jaise koyi raagini

Tumhein jo maine samjha, tumhein jo pehchaana

Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana

Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya

Uday: ab jao kapde badal kar ao...varna tumhe thand lag jaegi ya

tumhe usme bhi hamari madat chahiye????

Manyata: no thank you mein apne kapde khud badal sakti hu ok... tum

bhi badal lo samjhe phir hum ghumne jaenge...

Uday: I LOVE YOU...

Manyata: LOVE YOU TOO... She kisses on his cheeks... jaldi se taiyar

ho jao ok...

Manyata leaves the room... both get ready...uday comes in manyata's

room and sees her in a hot sexy black dress... Uday very impressed...

Uday: kya baat hai princess ANARKALI siddha DISCO chali?

Manyata: matlab??

Uday: yahi ki hamesha anarkali mein rehne wali humali princess

achanak disco look mein akhir irada kya hai??

Manyata: Uday yaha mein sirf manyata hun atleast agle das dino

keliye naki yuvrani manyata... toh meine socha kyun na agle das dino

keliye apne aap ko badal du...

Uday: oh... YOU ARE LOOKING VERY HOT YOU KNOW THAT?? Esi hi

dikhti rahi to kahi hum phirse out of control na ho jae...

Manyata: HAAWWW...tum kuch kam hot nahi lag rahe ho...han nahi

toh...vese hum jaa kaha rahe hai???

Uday: hamare dost ke party mein...

Manyata: kon dost??

Uday: he ek hamara sabse acha dost aur unnati ka hone wala fianc...

Manyata: tab toh ise milna hi padega...

The go to the hotel named THE ROYALS... they enter the party...

everyone is looking at manveer the perfect couple... everyone meet

them... Uday introduces manyata to everyone... one of uday's friend

says...

Jaz: must say uday your fiance's extremely beautiful...

Uday: afterall she's my fianc...

He looks at her... she is busy talking with some other girls... She goes

to uday...

Manyata: tumhara ye special friend hai kaha??

Uday is about to speak when someone speaks from back...: uday

kese ho??

Manveer turn back... manyata shocked to see that person...

Uday: manyata this is my special friend ragz... yuvraj raghvendra...

(NOTE:- RAGHVENDRA/RAGZ PLAYED BY SHYAM (ABBAS MEHTA)

FROM ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAM DU...)

Rags looks at manyata and turns into stone...

Manyata with tears in her eyes... goes near him and slaps him tightly...

no one notices this cuz every1 wa busy dancing...

Uday holds her elbow...: princess ye tum...

Manyata: ye tumhara dost hai uday? Ye ghatia insaan??

Rags still standing there like stone... Manyata runs from there and

Uday goes behind her...

Rags(angry): is thappad ka jawab hum tumhe jaroor denge manyata

urf moniya...

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 22... MANVEER...

Manyata runs away crying dnt knw wher she was goin... Uday cmes

near the hotel gate...

Uday(tnsed): manyata kaha ho tum?? Kya hua...

He goes near the watchman...

Uday: watchman did Uday see any girl running from here in a black

dress??

Watchman: yes sir she was crying she went dat way...

Uday almost searches for two hours... use manyata nahi milti... Who

bahot jyada ghabrah jata hai... Tabhi ek cal ata hai jise sun kar uday

pathar mein bada jata hai...

The call was from st. joseph hospital... the caller said that a girl in

black dress had an accident and severely injured... they got his no.

from the girl's cell... He rushes to the hospital...he asks the

receptionist about the accident... The receptionist says that the girl

was taken to the operation theatre...after 3 hours of operation doctor

comes out...

Uday: doc howz the girl can you show me her clothes and phone???

Doc: oh yes... the gal has severly injured her head...she was lucky that

she was brought here on right time...or else we would have been

unable to save her...the ward boy brings the clothes and cell...they

were of manyta... Uday wasn't able to control his feelings...

Doc: do you know the girl??

Uday: yes she iz ma fianc she is princess manyata of devgad...

Doc: can you plz cum in ma cabin...ther r sum things needed to be

discussed...

They both go in cabin...

Uday: how is she??

Doc: plz first sit down and have some water...

He sits down and luks at doc's tensed face...

Uday: how bad is she???

Doc: she has lost a lot of blood...her skull was almost tore apart...she

is saved is jus a miracle of HIM(the GOD)...

Uday:now really tensed: will she be ok??

Doc: we will just hav to wait and watch mr...??

Uday: udaveer...

Doc: mr. udayveer may be or may be not...

Hearing this Uday turns pale...

Doc: mr. udayveer you need to sign sum papers... I think Uday should

inform ur family members as sun as possible...

Uday understood wat doc wanted to say...he was devastated...

shattered to pieces... all wer informed...all came to Canada for a few

dayz...

2 days passed...

1 month passed...

3 months passed...manyata hadn't gained conisciousness...

As the days passed one by one... Uday was breaking into pieces...

His princess...the very fragile delicate little angel...who he wanted to

keep happy always... was lying on that hospital bed...without uttering

a word... 3 months were like being tortured in hell for uday... Finally

after a long wait of 3 months a ray of hope raised...

Doc: thank god mr. udayveer late so atleast manyata has started

responding to the medicines...finally there's a hope...

Uday felt happy but was sad...knowing the amount of pain his angel

had to face...

He rushed in her room... he hadn't seen her since 3 months...he just

used to stand here the ward door but wasn't ever able to the room

and see his angelic princess in such a devastated state... He didn't

had the courage... first time in life he had felt like a coward...he goes

inside tears in his eyes...he goes and nd...sits near her on the bed

taking her hand...

Uday: itna gussa kyun ho humse princess?? Tum humhe maro pito

gandi galiyan do par ese chup to mat raho... Now crying... utho na

pricess dekho tumhara halkat veda aya hai...utho na...utho...

Ds: sees uday in such a state tears roll down her cheeks seeing his

pain...ese nahi tutte beta agar manyata ne apko dekha to kya

socheng??

Uday: dekhne dijiye use ds...use bhi pata chalna chahiye ke itni der

sone ke karan hume kitni taklif ho rahi hai...dekhne dijiye use dekhne

dijiye...he cries even harder...

Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jaate hai

Beet lambhein humein jab bhi yaad aate hai

Mere kandhein mein sar ko Jukana Tera

Mere sene mein khud ko chupana teraa]2

Aake mere panaho mein shaam-o-seher

Kanch ki trah woh tut jana tera

OoO OO

And finally the day arrived...

Doc: finally...god listened to U mr.uday manyata gained her

consciousness...

All were very happy... listening the news Uday touched the wall

crying...evry1 went inside the room except Uday...

Evry1 greeted her hugged her...but her eyes barely noticed them... her

eyes wer searching for just one person... who wasn't there...

Manyata(sad): who kaha hai??

No one answers...manyata then remained silent...the whole day

passes...its midnight... Uday cumes inside and watches his angel

blankly...he goes near her caresses her and and kisses on her

forehead...tears in his eyes... He gets up and is about to go whn she

catches his hand...

Manyata: kisime itna bhi ghamand nahi hona chahiye...she says

playfully...

Hearing the angelic voice uday turns back...the voice of the angel

voice of his princess which he hadn't heard since last 3 months...

She slowly makes her with her on bed...uday doesn't look in her

eyes...he is seating silently... the silence was unbearable for

manyata...

Manyata takes his face in her palms..: naraj ho mujhse?? Bahot buri

hu na mein???

Uday looks at her with mesmerizing eyes and finally in her dark brown

eyes...he doesn't speak... he just wanted to hear her sweet voice...

which sounded like ringing bells to his ears...

Manyata: itna gussa ho mujhse?? Khush nahi ho ki mujh hosh...

Uday keeps his fingers on her lips and finally breaks...a deep aye

contact between them...tears roll down his cheeks...

Uday: tum bahot buri ho princess bahot buri...

Manyata: Im sorry Uday ...

He hugs her tightly...crying... he then rests his head on manyata's

shoulder lieing next to her... Like a child in his mother's arms...

Manyata caresses his cheeks, kisses him on his forehead wiping off

his tears...and is overwhelmed by his love for her...she reasts her chin

on uday's head...

Uday: tumhe nahi pata princess tumhe is halat mein dekhke humpe

kya beeti hai...

Manyata: pata nahi bhagvan humse kya chahta hai uday... jab bhi

humare life mein kuch acha hone wala hota hai tabhi who kuch na

kuch galat karte hai...

Uday: ab bas princess agar bhagvan khud bhi niche agaye to bhi

hume juda nahi kar paenge...

He then kissed her neck and got up...he made her sleep...

Manyata: plz uday kahin mat jao...

Uday smiles and nods at her...lies next to her takin her in his arms...

Manyata had found her destination in uday's chest... Manyata sleeps

in warmth of his arms...she felt so protected...in those muscular

arms...dat formed an iron cage around her... uday also goes asleep

with his angel curled up in his arms like a baby... MANVEER SLEEP

PEACEFULLY HAVING A DETERMINATION OF NEVER LEAVING EACH

OTHER...

~MAHI~

Quote

Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Wow finaly u update dear
nice part
1st part ws so romantic love it
2nd part ws so sad kaun hai ragz wht happend betwn them
bt nice update
pls update soon

Quote

sakshi1rani2

@sakshi1rani2

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#330

it was amazing...😊...i am so happy today

it was really a long time!!!!!!!!!

the first part was really wow,,,i had fun reading it...anarkali disco chali thing was funny and romantic manyata is not at all bad...infact she is superb!!!!!!!!

the manveer romance made me blush...ooo thora jyada ho gya na i know.!😛😛😛

i hate this raghu whatever...can't imagine what connection he has with manyata

and i am really trying hard to think about their connection::::

1. may be he used her for something i uday's absence 😕

2. may be he had lust for her😳

3. may be he likes uday 😆and to get manyata out of his life he played evil and was brutally bowed down by manyata

ahhh...😆...wild guesses any ways the manyata in coma part was really emotional!!!!!!

uday really loves her yaar...😭...but i loved there romance and the way uday reacted...to her absence and his angel's halat...😭..

the suspence is surfacing and the delay is killing...waiting for ur next update eagerly...😉😉...hope u update soon😃