MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago
Heheehe 😆..mahi update waz fab 👏 dude do update soon..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update Mahi, loved the hamster scene, and manveer were throughout so cute!
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Posted: 11 years ago
MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 19... MANVEER...
In manyata's room, uday comes... Manyata is standing in front of
mirror..she is in towel... both shocked...
Manyata: tum tum yaha kya kar rahe ho???
Uday gets attracted towards her... he moves towards her and she
moves back...she touches the wall both silent... a different hunger in
both of them's eyes... Uday moves more closer... he removes the wet
hair from her shoulder and kisses her neck...manyata closes her eyes...
as soon as uday's lips touch her neck a cold current passes through
her body...she could feel the hunger...slowly uday moves his face up
near manyata's ear...sliding his nose...manyata scared...she was able
to feel each and every breath of him...uday kisses on her cheek...
Uday in a low voice speaking in her ear: kya hua dar gai??hum
tumhara bharosa kese tod sakte hai??jab tak tumhari marji na ho...
hum tumhe us tarike se hath to kya dekhenge bhi nahi...
He says this and moves back...he looks in manyata's eyes... he says
her sorry for that hamster thing...manyata nods and smiles...
Manyata evil look holds uday's collar: agar marji ho to???
Uday evil smile puts his hand on her waist and pulls her more closer:
to hum abhi taiyar hai...
He picks her up and puts her on bed and goes closer and closer his
whole body almost touching his...music starts...
Tumhein pata to hoga
Tumhi pe mein fida hoon
Tumhi hai jabse hai chaha
Hawaon mein udta hoon
Tumhi mere har pal mein
Tum aaj mein tum kal mein
Hey shona hey shona
Manyata unable to speak:uday mein woh...
Uday smiles and he moves more closer and takes the dress which was
lying on side of manyata...
Uday moves back and gives that dress to her...
Uday:ye lo tumhare liye laye the...
Manyata:uday tumhe kese pata chala..
Uday: yahi na kit um majak kar rahi thi...pyaar karte hai tumse
princess...tumhari ye cute si ankhein hai na tumahre bina kuch bataye
hume sab kuch bata deti hai...
Manyata smiles: I LOVE YOU...
Uday: I LOVE YOU TOO...he kisses on her forehead... hum to tumhe ye
dress dene aye the lekin tumne to hume hi out of control kardiya
hota...
Manyata: HAWW... ab chalo jao yaha se mujhe change karna hai...
Uday gets up and goes from the room...uday goes in that room and
here manyata wears that dress...it's a beautiful black colour western
one piece...perfectly fitting manyata,but she was unable to zip the
dress...uday lying on bed and manyata in front of mirror both
rememberin whatever happened in the room...smiling and blushing...
Uday to himself: ab tak to manyata taiyar ho gai hogi...
He goes in manyata's room and sees that manyata is trying but is
unable to zip the dress...he again gets attracted towards her...manyata
turns so dat uday doesn't see her back...but uday almost out of
control...he turns her back again and moves his hand on her bare back
from her neck till down...shivers passing through manyata's body
then he slowly pulls the zip up...manyata closes her eyes...uday turns
her back manyata still closing her eyes...he soesn't say anything so
manyata opens her eyes...and sees uday's mixed expressions... happy
shocked innocence all mixed together...
Manyata:kesi lag rahi hu main??
Uday pulls her: bahot bahot achi...
Manyata:acha to tumhare hawaiya kyun ude huwe the??
Uday: who actually hume pata nahi tha ki hamari jungle billi itni achi
dikhti hai hume to laga ki vo sirf towel mein...
Manyata punches him...HAWW kuch to sharam karo humari shadi bhi
nahi hui ab tak...
Uday: toh kya hua who bhi ho jaegi...
Manyata smiles and kisses on uday's ckeek...
Manyata: I hope jaldi ho ab aur dur nahi reh sakti...
She says in a low voice and hugs uday... the music starts...
Sari duniya ko chod ke mene
Chaha hai ek tumhein
Mene zindagi se manga hai to
Sirf manga hai ek tumhein
Abb ise chah mein
Abb ise raah mein
Zindagi bhar mere
Tum ho na
Hey shona hey shona
They go to uday's hotel..
Manager: welcome sir, mam sir your meeting...
Uday: postpone it manager today's evening just for my beautiful lady
and the forthcoming queen of jaygadh...chale mam??
Manyata blushing and says chalo...
They both sit... uday orders starters for them...
Uday: princess tum sach mein is dress mein comfortable ho na??
Manyata smiles: han uday... aur wese bhi tumne ye laya hai obviously
socha toh hoga na ki inme mein comfortable hungi ya nahi??
Uday smiles: aur tumhari ring...
Manyata sad: uday who ring mein gharpe...sudden happy... nahi bhuli
hu ye dekho...mein bhale hi tumse naraaj thi lekin ye ring meine kabhi
nahi uteri...han nahi to...
Uday almost teary...kisses on that hand:thank you...
Both eye contact...
Uday: acha suno hum washroom jake aate hai...
Manyata: uh, uday tum jao mein waha us garden mein wait karti hu..
Uday: okay!!
Uday goes and manyata is standing in the garden alone...waha garden
fence ke bahar bike pe kuch log beithe hai... wo manyata ko dekhte
hai...they climb the fence and come in the garden...manyata dar jati
hai... woh wha se jane se pehle hi woh lok use gher lete hai...woh use
touch karne ki koshish karte hai...
Manyata: don't touch me...
1st man: oh cmon sexy don't do this to us...
Manyata: please leave me... she shouts uday's name...
2nd man: oh look she is calling her bodyguard...
All laughing... manyata scared and crying...
A man is about to touch manyata's waist but uday hold his hand and
twist's it and the hand broke...manyata more scared...she hides
behind uday...anger and fury burning in uday...
Uday: how dare you touch my girl?? Do you know who she is you
*******???
Manyata shocked seeing uday use abusive language... all men start
attacking uday...
Bahot badi fight hoti hai...ek admi uday ke hath pe tubelight marta
hai...uday ke body se khun beh raha hai...sab ghayal pade hai...
Uday shouts: managers take these ***** from here and throw them in
jail...
Manager aur gaurds sab ko le jate hai... uday wahi gusse mein khada
hai... manyata rote hue use
hug karti hai...uday calms down...
Uday: princess kyat um thik ho??
Manyata moves back and nods...she sees the blood on her hand and
gets more scared... she takes uday to his hotel suite and makes him sit
on bed and she sits on floor on her knees...
Manyata crying: pagal ho gaye ho kya??? Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
mera kya hota??
Uday: humare hone tak tumhara koi baal bhi baka nahi kar
sakta...nafrat hai humhe un logo se jo tumhe gandi najar se dekhte
hai...
Manyata: mujhe dusron ke najar se koi faraq nahi padta mujhe sirf
tumhari najar se faraq padta hai...har bar chot lagti hai tumhe meri
wajah se...
Uday(upset): chot to hume tab lagi thi manyata jab tumne kaha tha kit
um humse nafrat karti ho... chot to tab lagi thi jab tum hamari shakal
bhi nahi dekhna chahti thi...pata hai manyata dad ne bachpanse hume
sikhaya ki hamesha apne feelings ko chupake rakho...unhe bahar mat
ane do...lekin hum andar hi andar ghut rahe hai...lagta hai jese ye ked
kiye jazbat hume hi mar dal...
Manyata keeps her finger on his lips...crying she takes his hand and
keeps it on her heart... uday confused..
Manyata: ye dhadkane feel kar rahe ho uday??ye dil sirf tumhare liye
dhadakta hai...i promise you uday...in 10 dino mein, mein tumhe woh
har khushi dene ki koshish karungi jot um deserve karte ho...but
promise mi ki tum mere sath apni har feeling khushi ho ya dukh share
karoge...promise mi ki tum hamesha mere pas apna dil halka karoge...
promise me...
Uday: promise...both crying...uday sits down and hugs her...
Tum jo gussa bhi karo
To mujhe Pyaar lagta hai jane kyon
Main to jo bhi kahun
Tumhein iqkaar lagta hai jaane kyon
Chodo bhi yeh ada paas aake zara
Baat dil ki koi kehdo naa
Hey Shona Hey shona

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guys i know m late!
I had almost forgotten about this story!
Plus ik the language here used is a little immature as compared to LIPNP and os's... But i had written this story some year back and now my writing skills have really been developed all thanks to u guys!!
Though im still surprised this story has readers!!
Thanks for that guys!
Ill update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey mahi thanks for update
it was fab
uday is hero
the update was very romantic
waiting for ur update
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow nice update
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
The update was amazing. I really loved this story and im glad you've updated again.
The story is fantastic. It covers all the aspects of a beautiful story, from hate, pain,to love and care. The manveer scenes were very cute. Loved all the scenes alot. It was a very romantic and sweet epi. Please do update soon and dont leave this in between as this surely is one of the best you've done. Please do pm me when you update next time :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey this is amazing dear!🤗
Loved it!!👏
Do update soon!!😃
Ty for the pm!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Mahi, awesome update! The beginning scene with Manveer was so romantic😳. Of-course Uday helping with her zipper, reminded me of a similar scene in the show. The dinner-date turned out very action-packed 😆. Naturally, Uday had to win the fight 😉!! Those stupid thugs don't know that THAT WAS THE PRINCE'S PROPERTY ... they shouldn't look in her direction - let alone touch her 😉. Enjoyed it Mahi, Nicely written! Do continue soon, thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was simply awesome
i loved it completely

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