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Posted: 12 years ago
pls. update soon bags... cant wait ...
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plz plz plz update cant wait any more plzzz...
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14 chapter is gonna be split into two parts n 14.a will be updated mostly tomorow (worst case by thursday)and 14.b soon(when i too dunno)..so have lil patience sweeties..and m really sorry for not commenting on your posts..i ll comment & like them tomorow..


precap for 14.a


Rey:teri himaat kaise huyi meri taani ko hurt karni ki usko chhone ki n use aese baat karne ki?mere hote huyi meri taani ko kuch nhi ho sakta"

she was lost in her thoughts when rey called her meri taani..

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Boyfriend word hits taani hard n she again looks at rey lovingly & with a smile..

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for the first time taani felt his possessiveness in his hug!!which she liked ..it made her happy to see his possessive side!!!

Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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aww...taarey r too cute...lovely updte.,.taarey gng 2 goa n precp is damn awsm jaldi updtd karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
can't wait at alll
plzzz update now now plzzz😭
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awww...loved the precap...please update soon...cant wait..hehe =D
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OK sweeties before i update the next chapter let me present you banner for one touch..all credit goes to our sweet lovely rockstar Tahira(Tahira-2013 ) .thank you sweetie for this wonderful n awesm banner..so the entire chapter 14 is dedicated to tahira(both 14.a & 14.b)
love ya!!


PLS do like n comment ...
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hey Peeps m back with a update..frist of all sorry for updating late..2.thanks tahira for such a lovely banner(ladki mai bahut talent hai)😉 so this whole 14 chap is dedicated to her only!!
3.sorry for not commenting on your posts..
4.ache ache comments do yaar dil khush ho jata hai
5.agar 14.b chap jaldi cahiye lambu comments dene hoge!!n likes bhi😉
ab aap sab ko gussa arha hoga.. bak bak band karti hu nahi to jaan le loge..

ab ghoorna band karo aur update padho!!


Chapter 14-Realizations!

Next morning taarey left for pune..in rey s car..

In pune ..

Rey and taani have selected the fabric for their costume.taani feels hungry so they go to a mall..in mall taani was lagging behind n rey was ahead as she was looking here n there checking out shops..when her eyes caught a blue color heart shaped ocean crystal pendent which was displayed in swarovski jewelry show room..taani was staring at the pendent when rey sees her stare at the pendent..taani was lost in the pendent..

She liked the pendent and wanted it badly..so she asks rey to wait for her and she goes to shop..to sales person

Taani:um!! Hi I would like to see that heart shaped pendent which has been put on display..(and points at the pendent)


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Salesperson:ya sure mam..i will get it for you..

He goes to display n gets the pendent..and

Salesperson:you have a great choice mam..and starts explaining about the pendent..

Taani asks him to pack the pendent..when a newly married couple enters and..wife sees the pendent

Wife:oh!!wow its so beautiful..and to her hubby oh honey I liked can I buy it?

Hubby(lovingly):ya sure anything for you..

Wife:thnx dear n pecks on his cheek and asks salesperson for the same pendent..

Salesperson:I m sorry mam but this pendent is already brought by this mam(pointing at taani) and this is limited editon..so we had only one piece..

Wife:oh !!then can you order it for me from other show rooms?

Salesperson:I am afraid that will not be possible mam..coz there are only 5 such pieces in india..why don't you choose from one of these?? Shows her other pendents..but she did not like any ..

Wife(disappointed):thanks but I did not like any of these.. her husband trying to cheer her up saying its ok hon!i ll get u some other pendent..but wife was really sad n starts walking out.. seeing her husband also becomes sad..taani feels bad & sad seeing this and'

Taani to lady :excuse me!!

Wife looks back and stops taani goes to her.. and

Taani(smiling and giving the pendent to her):you can have this pendent.

Wife:but u liked it n brought it..

Taani:ya but u can have it .if it makes u and ur husband happy..

Wife:nahi mai main hi le saqti

Taani:aap mujhe apni choti behne samhj kar rakh lijye..yeh samhjye ki aapki choti behen ne aapko gift kiya hai..pls mana mat kijye..

Wife looks at her hubby smiles n nods saying take it.. she smiles and takes it from taani and hugs her n says thank you!!!

Then taani leaves from there rey had witness the whole scene,,he feels more proud of taani ,cz she sacrificed the thing she liked to make some one whom she doesnot know happy.

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Taarey decided to stay in pune as it had become late..both stay in hotel..around 10:30 PM taani goes for a walk ..she is thinking about rey and how he helped her move on and how much he means to her..she is so lost in her thought that she doenot realize that she has was around half a kilometer away from hotel on an isolated road..when

Guy1:hey isint that taani shivams ex?

Guy2 :ya dude!!its taani only gosh she is sooo hot check her out!!

Guy3:ya dude she is so sexy ..shivam kitna bada pagal hai jo isko chod diya..gosh I wanna taste her so badly..

Guy4:so what are v waiting for chale?lets hav sm fun (all smiling wickedly)

Taani is still lost in her thoughts when a guys cum and

Guy1:hello!!!madam!!kahi jar hi hai(taani is out of her trance & is shocked to see 4 guys b4 her )n tries to touch her she wisks his hand away and starts walking towards hotel in full pace..guys follow her..

Guy2:hey dear don't be sacred!!humlog shivam k dost hai..hum tumhara khayal rakhenge.. smiling wickedly ..

Sense of fear is griping taani she is choking..she doesnot stop..when guys cm in front of her and block her way..

Guy4(whose name was prateik) :aww common baby lets have fun..let us enjoy with you taani felt disguisted by their thoughts.. and pratiek holds her wrist..taani is scared to death ..she doenot under stand how she landed in this mess..

She tries to free her hand but his grip is too strong..and

Guy3:no use darling u r not going any where..itne aasani se tumko jane nhi denge..

Pratiek & are coming close to her she moves back..pratiek pulls her towards him..taani closes her eyes tears are flowing from her eyes..n comes crashing against a hard body.. she feels the touch familiar but is afraid to open her eyes. she feels her hand free from prateiks grip & hears someone howl in pain

bg Raabata from agent vinod(female version)

Faili Thi Siyaah Raatein, Aaya Toh Subah Leke
Khama Si Zindagi Mein Jeene Ki Wajah Leke

(she opens her eyes to see rey standing btw her n them his back is facing her..)

Khoya Tha Samundaron Mein, Tanha Safeena Mera
Saahilon Pe Aaya Hai, Tu Jaane Kis Tarah Haan Leke
(she clutches reys shoulder n hides behind him.he holds her her hand tightly yet gently .taani peeps slowly..rey had cautght prateik s hand n was twisting it hard n well others were on floor wincing in pain..)

Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
(taani looks into reys eyes his eyes are burning with fury n anger.he turns his head back n looks at taani & his eyes become soft n gentle)

Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
(taani remembers reys words.. ".kabi tumhe hurt nhi karunga na hi kisi aur kokarne dunga..ab se tum mujhe apne aur apne musibato,dukh ke beech mai paogi.mai tumpe kabhi koi aanch nahi ane dunga..promise tumhara saat kabhi nahi choodunga..".she has tear in her eyes).

Ab Kya Hai Kehna, Humko Hai Rehna
Jannatein Bhula Ke Teri Baahon Mein Mein Panah Leke
(she realizes that rey truly cares for her & "he did nt let anything to happen to her".bth r lost in each others eyes ..with prateik howling in pain then)

Faili Thi Siyaah Raatein, Aaya Toh Subah Leke
Khama Si Zindagi Mein Jeene Ki Wajah Leke(
R:tum thik ho na?Taani manages to say yes..then rey sees the mark on taani s wrist due to prateiks grip on her hand..again his eyes starts to burn with fury..his eyes are turning red.he looks back at prateik with so much of vengence that prateik gets scared for his life

Meharbaani Jaate Jaate Mujh Pe Kar Gaya
Guzarta Sa Lamha Ek Daaman Bhar Gaya
(rey slowly releases her hand n in fraction of seconds he holds prateik by his neck trying to strangle him to death simulatenously hitting him yelling"teri himaat kaise huyi meri taani ko hurt karni ki usko chhone ki n use aese baat karne ki?mere hote huyi meri taani ko kuch nhi ho sakta"..leaving taani n others stunned..)

other get up n try to save prateik from his clutches by trying to pull rey off prateik..but rey wont even buldge a bit even they apply all their force n energy..

Tere Nazara Mila, Roshan Sitaara Mila
Takdeer Ka Jaise Koi Ishaara Mila

(Taani is looking at rey..rey looks at taani (small HHLL moment)n he remembers moments spend with her n remebers what prateik did few mins back to her..he was still more furious & starts hitting prateik again.she was lost in her thoughts when rey called her meri taani..all she was doing was looking at rey ..)

Prateik s friends try harder but fails..when rey pushes them n they fall down..they see taani and runs towards her ..taani is still lost ..one of the guy brings her back from her trance..she looks at them n she is shocked they have desperate n pleading look in their eyes

Roothi Hui Khwaishon Mein Thodi Si Sulah Leke Aaya Tu Khamoshiyon Mein, Baaton Ki Chirah Leke(Guy1(almost falling to her feet they are afraid to touch her):taani!!taani!!PLEASE PLEASE prateik ko bacha lo.Please usse bacha lo nahi to tumhara boyfriend usse mar hi dalega..

Boyfriend word hits taani hard n she again looks at rey lovingly & with a smile..again Prateiks friend pulling her out of her trance..)

Guy2:please taani hume maf kardo n use bacha lo..dekho wo saas bhi nahi le pa rha..taani looks at prateik who was turning blue ..she hits her head with her palm & shakes her head & smiles "kya kar rhi hai taani ja ke bacha le nhi to rey problem mai honge"

Khoya Tha Samundaron Mein, Tanha Safeena Mera
Saahilon Pe Aaya Hai, Tu Jaane Kis Tarah Haan Leke
(taani realizes if she doenot stop rey he ll kill prateik..so she runs towards rey yelling his name "rey!!rey chod dijye use rey!" but rey is not him a mood to listen)

Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
( rey is about to punch prateik again when taani holds his hand and rey stops ..taani comes in front of him.he looks in her eyes and taani:pls chodjiye usse rey..his expression softens n he lossens his grip on prateiks neck when prateik takes this as an opportunity n strts to run)

Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
(rey sees him run his anger reaches peak n he is about to run after prateik when taani hugs him tight(cz this was the only way that she could keep rey from killing prateik) and "rey pls mai thik hu mujhe kuch nahi hua !!and he is not worth it !aap ke hote huye muhje kuch nhi ho saqta" rey could feel his anger melt away like magic & his every muscel in his body relaxing & expression softening.)

Ab Kya Hai Kehna, Humko Hai Rehna
Jannatein Bhula Ke Teri Baahon Mein Mein Panah Leke
(rey looks at taani and slowly places his hands on her waist n pulls her closer kisses her on her forehead n hugs her back..as to express that she is safe with him n nobody can hurt her as she belongs to him.)

Jannatein Bhula Ke Teri Baahon Mein Mein Panah Leke(.for the first time taani felt his possessiveness in his hug!!which she liked ..it made her happy to see his possessive side!!!)

Faili Thi Siyaah Raatein, Aaya Toh Subah Leke
Khama Si Zindagi Mein Jeene Ki Wajah Leke
(she closes her eyes in order to cherish this moment capturing it in her memory n not wanting it to end n smiles)

precap:????????????????

Precap cahiye kaya?


OKKK ab aap sab soch rhe honge ki pendent kaha se beech mai aya..rite?? so bata du pendent ko soch k kuch romantic moment socha hai mai..kya wo nxt update mai pata chalega...aur sorry ache khase romantic song ko pura action cum romantic cum comdey song bana diya mere ko h nhi pata ki aesa kyun kiya maine ..blame it on my stupid filmy imagination ..seriously aese stupid sa pyaar ka realization mere ko hoga to mai mar jaungi has has kar😃 ny ways acha laga toh commments n likes n acha nhi laga to shoes yaad h na 7 no wali?(mere kharab hogaye hai)




Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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wow it was damn amazing di loved it
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Awesome banner
Bags love the update Taani is a sweetheart for always making others happy. Omg possessive Rey was amazing love the way he protect Taani from those jerks. And when he said meri Taani omg moment lol love Taani reaction now I can't.wait for their confession. Love the song, Bags u did a brilliant job plz continue soon.

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