Taarey ff- One touch started it all - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago
At last bags... You updated!!!
The update was so so so sweet!! Gosh! Loved it when rey was running aroun and taani was chasing him... 🤣 Hilarious!!
And next update mein TR dance in rain??!!! *blush* Waiting for your update!!! Iss baar please jaldi karna!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
di awesome. . . . rey injection se darts hai
n he starts crying...🤣
n taani uski himat hai 👍🏼
2 gud di
plz iss baar zyada time mat lagana update karane mai
n thanx 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Bang on update bags! Rey ko INJECTION se dar lagta hai?! ROFL!! Hahahhhaahha!!! Massstt!! Precap sounds interesting.. Dancing in Rain.. * Blush*

Update ASAP and doo pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg wonderful update
taani nd oli runing behind rey😆
lol dat ws funny...nd haye cute movement
btwn taarey ohh god rey ws behaving lyk kids🤣
it ws hillarious nd cute😳 i wish mere paas oli jaisa pet hota😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awsome luv it. 😊
rey is so scared 4 injection and crying that was so hilarious.😆 cant stop laughing. love the way taani held rey's hand so caring. wow love 2 have a dog like oliver.
update soon and do pm me thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just read all 9 parts!!! OMG ur a very very very good writer. and luving ur filmy side. and how reyam reacted to knowing that taani bringing someone home and then oliver being a dog was so damn cute. and rey afraid of injections haha. and i loved taani and rey's song sequence during reception, u wrote tht part really nicely!!!

plz plz plz update soon and pm me!!!! plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
you are a amazing writer plzzz update part 10 plzzz i cant wait anymore 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
osm update 👏
oliz 1 smart dog n d rain dance sng shud b leja leja😊
update soon
Edited by mevrulz4eva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys m back with chapter 10..the song sequence did not turn up as i planned n m quite unhappy by the way it turned up...so sorry guys..hope u guys dont mind..is bar is song seq se adjust kar lo next time ke mai no dissappointment..do comment😭



CHAPTER 10

Rey slowly opens his eyes and is happy to see taani holdin his hand n brushing his cheeks(he is on cloud #9) .. .. doc goes out both are alone..taani asks(innocently n cutely)"ab bhi bhi dard ho rha hai?" rey (cutely with a pout): haan!!!!

Taani kisses her finger and places it on rey s hand rey toh shocked n taani asks" ab thik hai?"

Rey(himself with a face):thik to hai but aur acha hota agar tum kiss de deti directly haat pe..

Taani :rey!REY!! rey coming out of his thought..again making cute pout wala face (baby voice)n"han but muma ki yad arhi hai"(making sad face) taani:kyun rey.. rey(innocently n cutely with a irresistible pout ):kyun k mumma kissi deti thi yah ape(pointing his cheek)..and pouting again(he looked like a kid).taani is so lost in rey s innocent n kiddish behaviour

Taani(not knowing what she is saying):awww!!so cute koi nahi mai de deti hu! Reys face lits up n smiles naughtily,Then she realizes what she has just told and covers her mouth with her hands..and her eyes are wide.

Taani(herlself):oops!! taani ghadi ho tum!!yeh kya bol diya maine..shit!!ab kya karu…mana kar deti hu haan!!

Rey (putting his face forward n pointing at his cheek..and again cutely in kiddish way):yaha de do!

Taani is embaressed..and taani was abt to say something when …rey(puppy dog face with a pout) :kya soch rhi ho do na..she could not say him na..her heart melted!!and she bends and gives a small peck on hi cheek..rey s face lits up he feels butterflies dance throughout his body.. taani n rey looks into each others eyes..then doc comes and says rey ab app ja saqte h..both are out of their HHLL moment..and taani looks away she is embarssed n blushing..

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Next day in college ..in vp s chamber….

Gang:sir apne hume bulaya?

VP:haan!!muhje aapse kuch baat karni thi..

Gang:kya sir?

Vp:jaise ki tum sab jante ho humara college "dance with me" (an International dance competition ) jaha pe world ke best dancers part lete hai is saal host kar rha hai..gang s happy n cheers..vp smiles n continues..so mai cahta hu ki tum log sare arrangements n guest dancer ke food n accommodation n stage ki tayari karo..i want u guys to take in few volunteers to help u guys..but use pehle humre GS rey ko ek assistant k zarut hai..and muhje lagta hai ki taani is a good candidate for AGS post..hope you don't have any prob taani..rey is delighted to here this

Taani:but sir mai mai kaise??

Vp:I know taani u r really gud at organizing and all..and tum apna kaam ache se karogi..so done? Taani smiles n nods.. VP: so sharon,taani,swayam n rey tum log in charge ho dance with me k arrangements k liye..make sure sab kuch best ho..dont worry about expenses…

All four nods..

VP : and har saal ki tarha tum log participate karoge n maine tum logo ka naam register karwa diya hai..as you all know humari taraf se haar saal ki tarha couple dance,group dance,solo k liye humare entries hai..gang is happy..but is saal rules mai thoda modification hua hai..

Gang shocked n confused:is ka kya matlab h sir?

Vp(tensed):is ka matlab yeh hai ki is saal couple dance k liye purani jodiya nahi ja saqti jin hone ab tak perform kiya hai.and na hi wo individuals part le saqte hai jinhone couple dance mai participate kiya tha and they always have won .. from one clg only one couple entry and one group dance n one solo in different forms(either girl or boy no discrimination btw them during compition) are allowed ) ..gang is completely shocked..(as swaron,nimmi,viha have participated many times so humlogo ki taraf se a fresh new couple k entry karwani hai..and is baar u guys have to opt for different dance forms apart from what u guys have done in compition..gang is confused..vp continues iska matlab..rey u can do any dance form apart from lyrical hiphop, freestyle kyun ki tumne yeh compition mai kiya hai,swayam tumhe contemporary n freestyle ke siva kuch karna hoga..simmi tumhe belly dance n contemporary k alawa kuch aur karna hoga,rinni tumhe hiphop n popping k alawa kuch aur karna hai,sharon tumhe flamenco n classical k alawa kuch aur try karna hoga,amar tumhe tutting n locking k alwa kuch aur try karna padega,nil tumhe popping n break dance k alawa kuch karna h,Vicky tumhe jazz n bboying k alwa kuch karna hai,and neha tumhe modern n bollywood k alva kuch karna hai..vishaka tumhe hiphop n lyrical contempory k alwa kuch karna h..

Gang is shocked m doesnot know what to do as they have less than a month to practice..and make arrangements..gang leaves vp s chamber..all are tensed..

nil:ab couple dance mai kise bjhenge??hum sab to perform kar chuke hai except bharat n vishaka..

All look at them..

Vish(with a face):Dude don't look at me like that ..mai n mushy mushy dance ?no ways.

Bha:vishaka sahi bol rahi hai..mai bhi nahi karunga.chipku dance..

Chipku word strikes vic s head n gives him idea!!

Sharon:tab to hume ab ek ladka n ladki dundh na padega jo dance karte hai..

Vic:kya zarurt hai iska?humre pass already fresh new , crispy n hot Jodi hai…

All including taarey excited :KON?

Vic smiling and looking at taarey who are standing next to each other.. gang understood n smiles and looks at taarey ..both are nervous..

Taarey:sab aese kyun dekh rhe ho n turns back to see if sm 1 is there..

Vic:yaha waha kya dekh rhe ho?

Taarey :matlab?

Gang::matlab yeh ki tum dono..ho humare couple dance entry..yani brand new hot n crisp Jodi..

Taarey look at eachother with shocked expression:KYA??HUM?

Simmi:haan !tum !!

Swayam:tum dono ne leena n rakshit k reception mai bhi dance kiya tha..

sharon:tumlogo ka dance video deekha hai humne

Neha:u both having great chemistry.. both rey n taani blushing!!

Amar:haan leh,taani tum logo ki chemistly baht achi hai!

Rinni:haan u should do it ..

Vishaka n bhar:haan guys..

Taarey are more then delighted to here this..rey phoole nahi sam rha..after all taani k saat some chipku moments milega..haye n rey is lost..he s day dreaming.. dt too with a 1 feet smile…

Gang:so u guys ok with it..?taani?

Taani(smiles):I don't have any prob..wt abt u rey? Rey is still lost ..taani :um rey!!rey!!nw nudging him with her elbow but rey s rey he is still lost..gang :rey koi prob hai kya rey.. the vicky goes near rey n pinches him hard

Rey:ow!!! Vic(wishpering):mai janta hut um bahut khush n excited ho..taani k sat dance karne ko n janta hu tumhe uske saat chipak na hai but agar aese h smile n day dream karte rhaoge to gang kisi aur ko taani ka partner bana denge..

Rey(shocked to hear):nahi nahi!!aesa nahi ho saqta..

Gang(cnfused):kya nahi ho saqta..?rey:wow o wo um um..han mere ko couple dance se koi prob nahi ho saqta..

Gang:ok and goes away

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So a week has passed everyone has decided on their solo performances n group dance..that u ll come to know later..taani n rey have started rehearsing their dance routine..and all are busy with prep n rehearsals..every day taani n rey had to rehearse more than others as they have to give 3 performances..so they would stay back in college till evening n rey would drop her..

One day..after rehersals..rey is driving back home..when taani sees gol gappa stall and asks rey to stop the car(climate is pleasant as if its gonna rain quite cloudy with cool breeze playing around)..he is confused n stops taani runs towards the golgappa stall n starts having gol gappas ..rey watches her with awe..she indicates him to comes over n have..he says in sign lang u have I ll wait for u here..but taani goes n pull him out..he has never had gol gappas in his life and taani takes a gol gappa in her hand n asks rey to open his mouth n he does what he is told n taani puts gol gappa in his mouth..rey finds gol gappa too big to eat n makes face while eating taani laughs n rey joins her n they continue to eat rey enjoys eating gol gappas. After some time taani asks golgappa wala to make next one tihka gol gappa..rey to asks the golgappa wala thika one..

Taani:rey ap mat khye bahut thika hoga…apse nahi hoga…

Rey:nahi mujhe khana hai..taani tries to convince him but rey s not ready to hear..taani gives up..gol gappa wala gives both thika wala..taani haves it with ease..but when rey haves it he starts screaming ..taani gives him I told u look..and rey runs towards a complex building which is empty and a mile away from rey s car..he finds drinking water there n starts drinking it like he is thirsty from ages..

Song beigns to play ..(leja leja re)

Leja Leja Re Haay Haay Leja( taani is following him when a rain drop falls on her cheek..she looks up it starts raining..)

Ni Muiye Ni Muiye Ni Muiye (rey is coming out of building stops when he sees taani enjoying rain and she spreads her hand n looking up feeling rain on her rey is so lost in her)

Leja Leja Re Mehki Raat Mein Churake Saare Rang Leja(then she sees few kids playing in rain n starts playing with them in rain n kids go from there rey is still looking at her)
Raati Raati Main Bheegun Saath Mein Tu Aisi Mulakaat Deja(rey opens an umbrella and takes it near her he walks dreamingly towards her) (don't ask me frm whr he got it)

Leja Leja Re Mehki Raat Mein Churake Saare Rang Leja(rey holds umbrella for taani she sees at umbrealla n shakes her head takes umbrella from him ..starts rotating with umbrealla rey runs near shelter)

Raati Raati Main Bheegun Saath Mein Tu Aisi Mulakaat Deja(taani is dancing n playing in water puddles

She is splashing water with her feet ..)

Ni Muiye Maila Mann Mera, (rey is watching her with great intensity)Kya Karna Aisa Rang Gora, ,(taani asks him to join her but he refuses he is resisting his temptation to touch her)
Jo Piya Na Rijhaye(now he gives up to his temptation n slowly walks towards her slowly still looking at her with great intensity)

Ni Muiye Mann Maila, Mann Maila Kya Karna, Hai Aisa
(he goes near taani she sees him and starts walking back ..turns away to go..but rey holds her hands and pulls her back she comes crashing to his chest)
Na Bhaye Piya Ko, Tann Gora Kya Karna, Hai Aisa (he slides his hands along her shoulder till her hands n holds her hands in his hands,taani feels butterflies in her stomach when his warm hands slide along her cold n wet shoulder and he holds her hands against her stomach)
Leja Leja Churake Saare Rang Leja (slowly moves her hairs from her back..taani closes her eyes n is breating heavily rey comes close to her neck she can feel his warm breath on her cold n damp neck she shivers at this )
Raati Raati Main Bheegun Saath Mein Tu Aisi Mulakaat Leja
(he kisses taani s neck n moves down towards her shoulder taani clutches reys hand tightly n tilts her head slightly to give him better access)

Leja Leja Leja Leja Re Leja Leja Haan Re (rey realizes what he is doing feels guilty and moves away from taani..) Chahoon Paas Paas Aana, Koi Dhoondh Ke Bahana Tumhe Apna Aana( but taani wants to remain in his arms..she suddenly they hear a loud booming sound of thunder taani gets scared runs and hug rey from back tightly,rey is startled by this )
Chahe Ruthe Ye Jamana, Chahe Maare Jag Taana, Tumko Hai Pana
(rey holds her hands and turns to face her taani says pls muhje kabhi chod ke mat jaye ..he sees taani is shivering he cups her face places his fore head on hers and says"kabhi nahi"..and hugs her tightly)

Ni Muiye Saari Raaton Ki, Kahani Koi To Hogi (taani digs her face deep into his chest ..they break the hug..taani is crying ..rey cups her face wipes her tears away)
Jo Jaage Taare Raaton Ko, Ya Jaage Jogi(rey and taani are hardly few inches apart ..they can feel eachothers heart beat..taani closes her eyes & rey kisses taani s eyes one by one )

Hoo Ni Muiye Haay (taani slowly opens her eyes and looks into reys deep dark brown eyes n both are lost in each others eyes)
Ni Muiye Hoti Hia, Kucch Batein Hoti Hai, Raaton Mein(rey kisses taani s fore head,and kisses her left cheek and then right cheek passionately)
Jo Jaage Hai Jogi Ya Taare Jage Hai, Raaton Mein
(taani is lost in rey ..she closes her eyes..holds reys arms tightly and pulls him close to her)
Leja Leja Re Mehki Raat Mein Churake Saare Rang Leja
(rey moves close to her face ..he brushes her lips by his thumb she clutches reys arms more tightly n digs her fingers deeper into his skin)
Raati Raati Main Bheegun
(rey kisses near her lips passionately both feel goose bumps on their bodies)

Ni Muiye Ni Muiye Leja Leja Re
(rey s lips are near taani s lips..she can feel hot breath on her lips this sends shiver down her spine n vice versa with rey…rey lips are almost touching taani s..when rey realizes what they are doing rey moves his face away from taani s)
Bheegun Re Haai(rey earns respect in taani s heart ..now she realizes that they both were carried away ..and he did not misuse the situation.so she places her hand on reys cheeks rey leans his face on her palm and closes his eyes.)
Ni Muiye Ni Muiye Ni Muiye
(taani with draws her hand and turns ..rey holds her hand pulls her close to him )
Leja Leja Aa Re
(takes her hand places it on his left chest ..and taani looks into his eyes and feels his heart beat).



Precap:

taani s room...

taani:am i in love?kya mai unse pyaar...?

rey s house..

rey:kal mai usko apni dil ki baat bata kar rhaunga!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg...bags thank u thank u thank u so much for selectiing this song...its my fav...
Love the update ...

How rey is behaving like a kid and taani give him cheek kiss...and then gol gappa scene is nice...and then the rain sequens ..*faints*...its dam hot...really very god yar...i love the update...

Love u so much for this update...

Next part plz update soon...cant wait to see taarey together...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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