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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awsum yaar...taani rey swayum omg hilarius ..i think oliver is a small kid..nywayz update soon waiting:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
di it was amazing
jus loved it
really loved tareyam scene🤣
abhi toh kuch marane ka man nahi kar raha...lekin agar late update kiya den i'll surely kill u
so update so soon
n thanku so much 4 d pm di
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing yaar...just amazing...loved it to d core...waitin for your next UD
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Posted: 12 years ago
osm lovd it update soon
i thnk oliver iz a dog lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago

thnx guys for ur lovely comments...i just love ur comments..ur comments makes me happy and next part is in next post hope u like it and do comment...itna mehnat jo kiya h..😊

Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys happy new year!!!well m here with next chap..m sorry again there is not much of taarey but its quite emotional...and pls no thank you s n all..if at all u wanna thank sm one then thank megha.. ⭐️jisne muhjhe daaraya n update karne pe mazbur kar diya😡 so megha dear this update is for u...n haan tum bhi jaldi update karo...😡n hope ab dhrupal ,ridzy kuch phek ke nahi marenge n yashi ka gussa kam hoga😉

Chapter 8-unique bond!!

Boys rush into hall to find girls surrounding someone near couch girls are standing & giggling..they cannot see the person,,but they know its oliver.. all the boys are really jealous.. esp rey ..he is grinding his teeth in anger,soon all the guys starts walking towards the couch .. ..they are facing girls back.. ..they ask girls to move and..Rey(bitter tone):girls haato hum bhi dekhe mr charmer ko!!!

Amar,vic,n nil:haan !!

Girls move aside..and boys see Oliver they are shocked..and their mouth falls down,reyaam s eyes almost pops out

Boyz(together):YEH OLIVER HAI???

Taani(smiling):haan !guys meet oliver..

Then boyz(except reyam with cute face):awww!!

Oliver is 2 year old golden retriever

Reyaam to each other:Oliver is a dog???? And both burst into laugh..

Rey(himself):mai faltu mai jal rha tha..tension le rha tha..

Swayam(himself):mai faltu mai tension le rha tha ghabra rha tha.. ab mujhe koi tension nahi.. and happy to see taani play with oliver

Girls have gone to get snacks,,Boys are rubbing oliver s fur n patting him.. they are playing with oliver ..vic n nil are hugging oliver ..& thanking him saying acha hai tu insan nhi hai..and boys are laughing over their stupidity.

Now rey and swayam have started to play with oliver..when door bell rings..swayam gets the door..he is delighted to see sharon..and asks kaha thi tum??

Sharon(smiling):wo mai taani k liye welcome gift lane gayi thi..and uska fav cake,icecream n chocolates bhi layi hu.sab k liye layi hu ..she places all the stuff on table then asks where is everyone..

Swayam:girls kitchen mai hai n boys oliver k saat mere room mai ..

Sharon:oh oliver aga..before she can complete..she hears a loud bark from behind which startled she turns back and sees a dog running towards her so she starts running she climbs on dinning table and tries too shoo him..swayam trying to calm sharon..but our oliver is upto something ..so he climbs on table too..sharon walks backwards still trying to shoo oliver..she comes over the edge of table n slips and is about to fall she closes her eyes..but swayam catches her ..and oliver backs off wagging his tail and goes to swayam s room..sharon opens her eyes n wraps her hands around swayan s neck..he pulls her close to him still holding..kisses her fore head..sharon blushes both are lost in each other s eyes(swarons pehla nasha BG)..taani n gang witness this incident..decides to leave love birds alone.. they go in swayam s room..oliver sees taani wags his tail and run towards her..she bends down and hugs him kisses his fore head and says..

"oli tumhne yeh jan bhuj ke kiya na bhai n bhabi ko pass lane ko??"then he starts licking her face she laughing..seeing this whole gang starts laughing..

Vicky(to rey who is lost in taani):rey( he is still lost then Vicky waves his hand infront of rey still no reaction then pinches him and says) Rey:ouch!!!yeh kyat ha?? vic: Dream world se bhar nikal .rey smiles syly...then Vicky:rey tum faltu mai oliver se jal rhe the oliver to ek cute sa doggy hai ..

Rey:abhi bhi jal rha hu .. Vicky(shocked):rey!!! Doggy se jal rhe ho kuch to standard maintain karo..!!

Rey:kya karu dekhna meri angel kaise use hug n kiss kar rhi hai..toh jalan hogi hi na.. vic:tu sahi mai pagal ho gaya hai..Rey(dreamingly):haan taani ke pyaar mai pagal ..and is lost in taani again .. vicky shakes his head in disbelief..

After half an hour swaron are back to reality and they come in swayam s room both are blushing ..then sharon cuddles n plays with oliver n slowly wispers..thanks oliver for giving me such an beautiful moment..oliver wags his tail n licks sharon..then when sharon gets busy with girls swayam hugs oliver and says thanks oli .. aese sharon ko meri baho mai lane ko..oliver wags his tail n licks swayam too(it his way to express ur welcome)..

Rey is sitting in couch alone all r busy with some work when oliver comes wagging his tail towards him ..he has something in his mouth..he drops that near rey s leg..rey picks it up and it's a book on friendship..rey is confused when oli raises his paw up like to give shake hand..rey luks at book then at paw asks oli:tumhe mujhse dosti karni hai?? Oliver wags his tail..rey smiles and takes his paw in his hand..and shakes it gently and says ab hum dost hai..oliver licks rey..(oliver is a smart dog )

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After the gang has left..swayam and taani are talking to each other oliver is lying on taani s lap taani is stroking him..

Taani:bhai ap ko oliver se koi prob to nahi hai na.?

Swayam(smiling):nahi taani mujhe oliver se koi problem nahi..infact I like him..he is so adorable..

Taani(smiling):haan!bhai and yeh bahut shaant hai..

Swayam:tumhe yeh kaha se mila ??kab mila and mujhe kyun nhi batya??

Taani(expression changes she is sad..her eyes are wet) :bha..bhai.wo..wo.. do..do..sa.(crying)

Syam gets tensed..he got to know taani found oliver 2yrs ago after the whole incident..he doesnot want to hurt her..he regrets n is guilty for asking this..he goes and sits besides her and hugs her n says m sorry..

oliver senses taani is sad & is crying and gets up from her lap and goes into room and comes back with a smiley ball in his mouth..just then taayam breaks hug..but taani is still crying..oli drops smiley on her lap swayam is stunned to see this and oli climbs on couch & is beside taani his eyes are also wet n taani picks up the smiley she turns towards oliver he licks off her tears from her face..taani smiles and hugs him..swayam is shocked to see all this. ..he is shocked to see such a unique bond btw olini.how oliver was there for taani though he cant speak he consoled taani,he cared for taani..maybe that is the language of love u don't need words ur expressions are more then enough..then swayam too hugs olini..after some time they break hug..

Swayam(sad):sorry !!meri karan tumhe ..taani cuts him:nahi bahi!!ap pls sorry mat kaho..aap ki koi galti nahi hai.. smiles n aap puch rhe the na ki oliver kab mila..he can still see pain in her eyes..

Swayam(concerned):nahi taani don't do this ..hum is baremai kabhi baat nahi karenge..

Taani(holding his hand):nahi bhai mai upset nahi hu..and mujhe aap se aur dur nahi bahg na na hi aap se kuch chupana hai..aap ko haq hai jane ka .. swayam:ok..

Taani still holding swayams hand..oli is resting again on taani s lap..but his eyes r fixed on taani..he knows she will need him..

Taani:accident ke baad (she somehow manges to hold her tears but her voice shakes)

Swayam(eyes are wet):pls taani don't do hurt urself ..stop it ..oliver gets up and and places a paw on taani s & swayam s hand..and barks slowly his eyes are teary..taani places another hand on oliver s paw and pats it..and says oli muhje yeh karne do ,mujhe yeh karna hi hoga.. and turns to swayam

Taani:bhai pls aj mujhe mak roke mujhe rone dijye ,apni dil ki baat kehne dijye.maan halka karne dijye..dard ko bhar nikal ne dijye.pls..swayam nods his head..

Taani(tears are flowing from her eyes):accident ke baad mai apna pura hausala har gayi thi..but aapne chachu chachi,n leena ne sambhal liya..aap jante hai na ki shivam tabhi London mai tha..aap ek mehna baad chale gaye jab mai thik hogayi thi..but apke jane baad andar h andar akela mahsus kar rhi thi..swayam holds taani s hand tightly.maa papa k bahut yaad ane lagi thi chacha chichi ne humsha muhje akele mahsus hone nhi nahi diya..but mai tut gayi thi..meri zindingai mai bas ek hi khusi n hope tha ..and wo tha shivam..mera pyaar(she starts crying swayam places his hand on her shoulder and..oliver licks taani..and places his head on her shoulder.. he n swayam are also crying after some taani wipes her tears.. and give a weak smile to oli n swayam..she wipes their tears..)and continues

Taani:fir thode din baad shivam London se wapas aya..mai uske pass rona cahti thi usko dil k baat batana cahti thi..mai cahti thi ko wo hug kar k bole ki taani mai humsha tuhre saat rhaunga..mai hu tumhre saat tumhe akele kuch sehne ki zarurt nahi..par..par.. wo wo mujhe akela chod diya..breakup kar liya and kaha ki ab mai uske koi kaam ki nahi..wo mere saat papa ki wajhe se saat tha..and breaks down and cries ..swayam n oliver sees her like this an feels pang of pain in their heart..swayam hugs her tightly..he feels lump in his throat..oliver lays is head on her lap and is crying..swayam breaks hug n cups her face and wipes her tears and says..taani wo tumhre layak hi nahi hai kit um uske liye ro..taani nods and continues..

Taani(her voice is still shaky and eyes are teary but she is not able to control her tears..her pain wants too ooze out in the form of tears):tabhi meri zindagi se jeene ki wajha chen gayi..mai puri tarha se tut gayi thi..khud ko lachar n bebas mahsus karne lagi..ek lash ki tarha bangayi thi..bahut maan kiya ki apni jaan de du but himat hi nahi huyi..(swayam is shocked to hear this how shivam had broken taanis confidence he clutched his fist n wished that he could kill shivam for breaking his baby sis s heart but doesnot utter a single word to taani)..

Taani(feeling bit better):shivam se milne ke baad mai kab kaha garima nagar pahuch gayi pata nahi chala(its an imaginary place its 1.5 hrs from taanis place) tab maine ek mehne ke puupy ke rone ke awaz suni..to dekha ki thode bache ek puppy ko mar rhe hai,,mujhe yeh dekha nahi gaya n maine un bacho ko danta and bhagaya..tab ek bade box mai maine oliver ko ghabara k ek kone mai shake hote huye dekha..maine apna haat uske pass kiya wo aur ghabra ke kone mai chala gaya..tabhi maine oliver ke ankho mai dard and daar dekha..jo darad mai feel kar rhi thi wahi wo kar rha tha,aapno ko khone ka dard..puri duniya mai akele hone ka dard and dusro se hurt hone ka daar..maine dhere se usko apne haato se uthya and wo bahut dara hua tha ..dar ke mare mere haato mai kaap rha tha aur ro rha tha..fir mai usko apne chest ke pass pakda n usko dhere se shelya..and kaha ki mai tumhe kuch nahi hone doungi ..and usko kiss kiya tab wo rona and kaapna band kar diya..fir uske ankho mai maine trust dekha..maine use hug kiya..tabse hum dono ek unique bond mai band gaye hai..and smiles and hugs oliver)

Taani(smiling):bhai. Jabhi mai dukhi hoti thi oliver mere bina batye hi meri baat samhj jata tha..and muhje yeh ahesas dilate tha ki mai akeli nahi hu..wo humsha bina bole mujhe comfortable feel karat a tha..mere ansu poonch deta tha jaise aj .. (tears in her eyes)jabhi mai kamzor padke apnea p ko kuck karne ke baremai sochti wo aapki n chacha chichi ki photo mere paas la k deta..saat hi mai ek kitab jispe likha hota tha tumhre bina tumhre apno ka kya hoga.. meri haar feelings uske saat share karti thi mai and yeh samhj jata tha ..shivam ya maa papa, sonu,and di ki jabhi yaad ata to yeh gana bajata aur apne peche ke pairo pe khada ho ke nachta..aur mujhe bhi nacha ta..aur dance k zariye mera darad kaam ho jata..(both taayam smiles) meri hifazat karta..kisi bhi aese waise ladke ko paas nahi ane deta ..bhauk bhauk ke bhaga ta dur(and laughs) kaio ko dauda dauda kar kaata hai jinhone batamizi se baat kit hi..(swayam too laughs and hugs oli)..jabi mujhe khana khane ka man nahi karta to yeh apni bhari dish muh mai utha kar dustbin mai phek deta..yeh jata ta ki jab tak mai nahi khaungi mai bhi nahi khaunga.. Jabhi mai roti yeh bhi rota hasti ye bhi hast.. aesa hai mera oliver..ek dum possessive ap he ke tarha ..agar oliver na hota to mai shyad aj zinda bhi nahi hoti..(smiling weakly) and both taani n swayam hugs oliver and oliver understands their feelings and barks softly..taani breaks the hug and says mujhe pata hai tum khus ho pata hai oli ki bhai k saat hu..janti hu ke tum bhai se bhi pyaar karte ho..aur ab mai nahi roungi..mere saat mere do anmol cheez hai.. I love u both and hugs oliyam..and oliver starts licking them.. when swayam laughing says I know you love us too..oli wags his tail

After some time swayam hugs oliver n kisses oliver n says thanx oli tumne meri absence mai meri baby doll ki khyal rkha...oli gives a angry bark..swayam understands "meri" n smiles n says sorry humari babay doll ..oli hears this n starts wagging his tail n licks swayam..swayam:love you too oli..


precap:taarey s passionate moment in rain...

so guys how wad taayamver s bonding??kuch jyda emotional hogya na???kya karu ladies mai hu adat se majbur😃 LOL many guys have guessed it right..hats off for u guzz oliver is doggy .. i love animals n i feel that bond btw a animal n human is unique...🥱


Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. It was beautiful. Really emotional. I became so emotional reading this. Thank u so so much for the pm. I wouldnt want to miss this. Plz plz plz. Lu fr this
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww it was so cute emotional n awesum...rey bein jealous f oliver...so cute!...n taayam convo...gr8 job...pkz update soon...n plz koi muje bataye ki megha ko kaise darate hai...so i can keep scarin her jab tak woh aoni saari stories ek ek karke update nai karti...since she scared u in2 updatin...:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god it was really a cute update do update soon
Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

Wow. It was beautiful. Really emotional. I became so emotional reading this. Thank u so so much for the pm. I wouldnt want to miss this. Plz plz plz. Lu fr this

thnx dear...and told u rite pls no thank yous...only i can thank here😊

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