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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bags07

thnx dear!!but mujhe mera rey nhi mila leena k shadi mai but bahut dundha😭guess mera rey kahi aur hai😳but had loads of fun,masti ...i ll update the nxt part soon😳


oh poor bags, rey nahi mila..😭
par koi bat nahi, you enjoyed a lot at lina's wedding ha.
and yes tere next part ka intezar rahega so ab jaldi se update karna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guys...mai senior member bangayi😳so happy...happy happy...amd so sorry late se update kiya...yashi,ridshy,megha n dhrupal ab khus??
any ways aur bak bak nhi karungi ...

Chapter 7-oliver!oliver!oliver!

Rey:gulp!!swayam ko kabhi aesa nhi dekha..sahi mai Vicky mai swayam ko kuch nhi batunga aapne feelings ke bare mai..jab tak taani meri feelings ko accept na kar le..ab mujhe jobhi hi karna hoga swayam se chupa chupa ke karna hoga...

Vicky:haan yaar so to hai tumko sab chup chupa ke karna hoga..

Rey:vic! Tum is baaremai kisi ko bhi nhi batoge..neha ko bhi nahi..

Vicky:kya but kyun??sab koi kitne khus hoge..par Kagu ko bata hi sqta hu na..

Rey:Nahi!!vic..abhi dekha na swayam kasie react kiya..agar usko pata chalega to wo kaise react karega pata nhi..and taani wo kaise react karegi pata nhi!!jab time ayega hum bata denge..

Vic:ok rey as u say.

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After some time ..taani is introduced to the whole gang..every one welcomes her open heartedly.. every one esp swayam iss shocked to know that taani knows rey and both are good friends already(coz aftr accident taani had isolated herself from every one..within a week she n rey have become gud frndz but he is happy that finally his baby doll is moving on in her life).. ..then bell rings its time for their class..rey vic n taani are having economics cls..where in others are in other class..they are walking towards ..

Taani:rey aap thik to hai na..

Rey(confused):haan!!but tum puch kyun rahi ho?

Taani(concerned):wo aap tabi kuch ajeeb se behave kar rhe the ur ok na??vicky strts smirking.

Rey(thinking what to tell):t..ta..taani..w wo..wo..wo..vicky cuts him

Vic(with funny expression):wo kya hai na taani rey ka peth khrab tha. .. (pinching his nose with his finger n fanning his face with his hand with funny expression to indicate bad smel).. u know na wo gadbad wala. ..

Rey(shocked his eyes almost pops out):PETH KHARAB???

Taani controls her laughter..

Rey(embarresed and pulling Vicky):yeh tu kya bol rha hai.. vic:rey ab taani se kya chupana wo humri apni hi hai na.. don't worry she won't mind !! rite taani??

Taani is getting fits of laughter she has a tear in her eye..somehow controlling her laughter and manages to say:ye..yea..yeah!!vicky..I won won't mind..(and unable to control starts laughing)..rey gives Vicky a dirty look and says:VICKY ab to tu gaya!!!!!!!!!!!!and starts chasing him around corridor ..VICKY:DUR RHE!!TAAZI HAWWA ANE DE.still pinching his nose..taani opens her heart seeing rey s expression and laughs alot!!swayam see taani laugh (dil khol k haste huye and for the first time he say his old baby doll after the accident ,for the first time he did not see her fake her happiness..for first time he saw a different spark in her eyes.. he is really happy to see her laugh(after so many days) and is smiling..seeing him sharon see this and places her hands on his shoulder and he looks at her , she knows swayam s very happy to see his baby doll so happy.. then she blinks and smiles to tell him I know ur very happy!!swayam smiles back and points at taani,rey n vicky..sharon says I know what u mean to say..I know rey is behind her smile n happiness!!!..

Swayam(holding her hand in his hands):tumhe mere dil k haar baat pata chal jati hai na..sharon blushing...both are lost in each other s eyes..mean while rey sees taani laugh he stops chasing vic her laughter sounded to him like wind chimes he is lost and starts smiling ..and thinks how beautiful his angel looks when she laughs..see her laugh makes him feel light n happy that bcz of him taani is laughing.he could do anything to make her smile n happy.. ..

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After the class the whole gang gathers in canteen.

Swayam:taani!! chalo tumhra saman le ke ate hai hotel mai jake..

Taani:bhai maine saaman bhjwa diya hai ghar pe..

Swayam:oh tab to acha hai to ghar chalte hai..

Taani:bhai nahi mujhe kisi se milne jana hai!! Listening to this both reyam gets shocked.. as they know taani doessnot know anyone in mumbai and leena has also left for London..then who??rey hoping its not a guy!!

Swayam(possive bhai mode):tum kisse milne ja rhi ho??mumbai mai to kisi ko bhi nahi janti to??

Taani:bhai wo mere saat hi Mumbai aya hai...mer.. ..b4 she could complete both

Reyam(together):AYA HAI??????KON???

Taani(schocked so is the gang):BHAI!!REY!! shaanti baat to khatam karne do!!!..reyam nods..

Taani:mera dost!!infact dost se bhi badkar! Bahut hi close hai...he is such a charming guy..wo humre saat humre ghar mai hi rukega..us..again they cut her

Again Reyam(together): DOST??? SAAT REHEGA???

Rey feels pang of jealousy in his heart thinks did his angel just say bahut close???dost se bhi badkar??charming??uske saat rhega????and mera kya?? Gosh kuch to karna padega..his worst nightmare are coming true..

swayam in prossesive mode..thinking did his baby doll just say bahut close??dost se bhi badkar ??charming??and saat rhega??mai aur kisi anjan ladke ko taani ko hurt nhi karne dunga..kuch to karna hoga!! Both are lost thinking what to do when

Taani(frustrated):HAAN!! Dost !!oliver !!!wo.. again they cut her

Reyam(shocked n angry):OLIVER??? Taani is now very angry her bhai n rey are not letting her talk..

Taani(angry):HAAN OLIVER!!AAJ SHAAM MAI USE AAPNE SAAT GHAR LE KE ARHI HU!!

Reyam(shocked):KYA????

Taani(fuming with anger):HAAN!!

Swayam(full on indian possessive bhai mode rey happy cz he know what swayam is gonna do):TAANI!!!tum..before he could say anything sharon keeps her hand on his shoulder nods her head and he stops and wispers to swayam:tum jante ho na taani kis daur se guaz rhi hai.agar wo oliver ke company mai khush hai to usko ek chance to do!!

Sharon:Tum leke ao taani hum log bhi use milna cahte hai..sham mai humsab waha rhenge..oliver se milne..he sounds intresting..hain na swayam???

Swayam(suklling and trying to hide bitter tone):haan..sounds he intresting(sarcastic way)..then he sees taani sad..and hugs her and says I don't have problem taani tum leke ao ghar use.. gang(except rey) also in josh:haan taani hum bhi milenge!!!

Rey to full too jealous.. his face was full red due to anger..about to say something to swayam when vicky stops him by saying rey janta hut um he bahut gussa arha hai but aesa kuch mat bolde ki sab ko teri true feelings k bare mai pata chale..

Taani(quite happy to hear this) :thnx bhai n then to all:guys ur gonna love him and says bye..and smiles and goes out of canteen..

Rey is so jealous n angry that Vicky could feel hot fumes coming out of him..bas jalne ki bu n smoke nikalne ki kaami thi..

Rey is thinking to himself:pehle hi swayam ka possessive bahi mode kya kaam tha??jo oliver bhi agya ..mere pyaar par gharan lagane!!swayam ke bhai mode ko handel kar lunga but oliver ko??? And kya kaha taani ne charming,love him???maan kar rha hai ki usko ek box mai dalke kahi desert mai parcel kardu!!!meri angel se close hoge??ruk ab tumko sab sikhata hu. and plots a plan n decides to provoke swayam against him..smiles wickedly... oliver haan!!teri aesi welcome hoga ki tum yaad rakhoge!!

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At taayam s place...boys are sitting together in swayam s room and all girls except sharon(she is yet to come) are decorating taani s rum..

Rey is trying to provoke swayam by saying how can u trust a stranger .agar psyco nikla to??tumhre ghar mai humsha k liye rhe gaya to??taani se chipak gaya to??? Vicky rolls his eyes and shakes his head in disbelief..rey has been trying to scare n bhadkofy swayam..swayam is feeling tensed n is scared but for taani s happiness he is gona meet oliver!!!

Nil:rey tu kya kar rha hai ?swayam ko kyun faltu mai bhadka rha hai??

Rey:yaar tum nhi jante ajkal zamana kaisa hai..

Bharat:rey swayam samhjdar hai..wo koi lafda nhi hone degaa.

Amar: haan Ley bhalat thik keh laha hai!!and olivel itna bhi bula nhi ho saqta..

Rey:are!!vicky:rey bas bhi kar yaar!!

Suddenly door bell rings..they all know its oliver n taani..swayam asks girls to open the door..as he is getting hyper and boys are trying to clam him n rey trying to provoke him..

Girls open the door and sees taani and oliver..they are shocked to see oliver..he stole their hearts at one glance only..they are speechless..aftr some time they enter swayam s room (taani is in her room with oliver ..she is happy n surprised to see her room decorated bed covered in purple color sheets..soft toys on her bed..her dresses neatly arranged in cupboard her fav flowers were arranged in vase etc and she talking to oliver..dekha oli kitna ache hai bahi n unke dost..kitna sundar tarike se room sajya hai..tumhe acha lagan a..n oliver smiles)

Girls while entering swayams room.

Neha:neha liking oliver!!! Boys hear this & are schocked..Vicky is shocked n jealous. ..vicky:meri kagu ko koi aur pasand!NAHI!! Boys pat his shoulder symphatatically..Nil:thank god meri simmi sifr meri hai!!

Simmi:ya neha ..mujhe bhi oliver pasand hai..he is such an charmer!!

Nil(schocked,angry n jealous):kya???charmer?? muhje laga tha ki simmi ko sirf mai charming lagta hu ..simmi yeh tumne kya kiya??

Boys repeat the same thing with Nil..rey:ab bol na kyun bhadka rha hu..nil makes a sad face!!

Bharat(to nil n vicky proudly):tumhari girls ke tarha meri vishaka nhi hai jo mere ko chod ke kisi aur par laatu ho..wo to dusre ko ghaas bhi nahi dalegi..then they hear

Vishaka: dude!!Taani was right about oliver..he is charmer!!i felt like hugging him.. bharat makes sadiyal n shocked face(just like the one during rose day when taani asks him are u n rey couple? lol)..bharat:yeh kya locha ho gya??? Vishaka???us oliver ki toh!! In his angry mode twisting his wrist

All boys laughing at bahrat..they strt mocking him..vic:haan haan ab bol ki meri vishaka aesi nhi hai..

Nil(imitating):meri vishaka kisi aur pe laatu nahi ho saqti!!wo kisi aur ko ghaas nahi dalegi..

Vic:wo to ghaas to kya hug bhi dene ko tayar hai.. boys strts laughing..

Amar is folding his hands and looking up and praying to god;pls bahwan ji pls meli linni ko nahi..

Then they here rinni is voice every one turns their head towards amar..he is still pryaing

Rinni:sach mai oliver kitna pyaara hai!!uski ankhe kitni cute hai..amar se bhi jayda cute.

Amar:Nahi.. ..linni bhi?? All guys are fuming ..

Rey :ab bolo kyun bhadka rha hu?kyun faltu mai bolrha hu?oliver itna bhi bura nhi hai..

All guys are really jealous and angry and plan to take revenge on him their styl revenge..

Boys(smirking wickedly):OLIVER WELCOME ABOARD!!

Then girls enter chalo guys taani & oliver r here Oliver se mil lo ..u ll defiantly like him...and they leave boys..

Boys are still more jealous and they go out..

Boys:OLIVER KAHA HO???

Precap:meet oliver..and olini(taani + oliver) s friend ship details...


hope it not boring and have not dissappointed u...and do comment 🥱 agar kuch phek ke marne ka maan kar rha hai to fresh apples,mango,strawberries phek ke maro😉


Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u updated...
but it was super awesome...loved it to the core,,,,,
oliver and jealousy of the boys...
it was worth waiting...
but i'm not gonna update any of the stories till u update next part...
sorry but it made me impatient...
Edited by meghasingh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...y do i feel oliver is a pet animal... a cat... wild guess...
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Posted: 12 years ago
bags it was not at all boring!! it was a great update olier is creating curiosity i me wana know abt him!! boys scene was fab n TaaReYam scene was OMG AMAZING🤣great job loved it cant wait to know abt oliver update fast😃
Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meghasingh

finally u updated...
but it was super awesome...loved it to the core,,,,,
oliver and jealousy of the boys...
it was worth waiting...
but i'm not gonna update any of the stories till u update next part...
sorry but it made me impatient...

thnx😊
huh! ur kidding me rite?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey just waiting for your update and got it .

Rey's 'Pet kharab' part was just awesome and hillarious.
I too cant control my laughter.
Swayam is happy to see taani Smiling how loving and caring broher he is .
am just falling in love with swayam for that.
hope everyone have older brother like him.
He is happy to see that rey is behind her smile n happiness.
and Swaron convo "tumhe mere dil ki har bat pata chal jati hai...' too good.
REyam behaviour and jealousy for oliver is speechless.
Rey swayam ko bhadka raha hai oliver ke khilaf.
and d3 boys are also jealous with oliver as there girls praising oliver.
whole part is too good , its not boring at all..
to tere pe apple, mango ke strawberries marne ki jarurat nahi hai.
next part ke liye jyada wait mat karva varna jarur kuchh marna padega.
thanks for the update and pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

it was funny dear i loved rey's and boys jealousy do update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahaha...vry cute..plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha..ha.,i was totally laughing while reading.,n boys feeling jealous..super cool

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