(ArHi) Arranged Marriage #4 Thread5 Link Added pg1 - Page 58

this was the most incredible set of updates ever!

Oh I LOVE LOVE LOVE these updates. I was sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for khushi to explode and man did she explode. Brilliant absolutely brilliant. Arnav needed to be brought to earth from that might seat of his and khushi did an amazing job of telling him the facts. I love your writing and your emotion portrayal is unmatched.

woah you updated 4 parts altogether...wow!!

Have been reading your story for a while..and haven't really said much before (I know I know I am sorry). But the last update was brilliant!!!
I felt like I was there with khushi all through it (although I would probably have disappeared into the amazing shops at chapel street!) I loved how u did make her try to control her anger and that was probably my favourite part. Sometimes I feel arnav just assumes she is a lavanya and all she needs is money and shops and she'll be right. Also liked how we get a glimpse of khushi before this marriage..haven't seen much of it yet. And as always she was a bubbly happy in small things girl.
The last chapter quote was so so so perfect for arnav. I don't know if he realises that though. Obviously last chapter was the confrontation we were all waiting for. To say arnav deserved it is a bit of an understatement. Although the ending I didn't expect tears, stuttering and just shutting up.
Anyway the question now is where do they stand...love is kinda out of the picture still it seems, no?

Superb!
Thanks for this bonus update.Could not ask for more.
Loved Khushi's outburst.Surely it has left Arnav flabbergasted and some realisation of self introspection.

that was brilliant !!! Thank you sooo much for such an outburst of khushi !!!! It was really needed . And u did proper justice to the scene , it was even better then the actual Guest House one in the show ! U are a genius !
Its high time Mr . Arrogant Singh Raizada is shown a mirror and made to realise that his harsh words and indifferent attitude hurts others a lot .
I don't know about the virgo in u , but , the Leo and the Feminist in me is roaring with victory and pleasure ! Ahhh finally feeling light headed , just like khushi , so much frustration and to see that it has been vent out . Pure bliss !!!
Lets see what ASR does next ! Will he put some effort from his side to make this marriage work ? As from Khushi's side , its all over .
Waiting for future updates ...

P.S. Your blog link please ?

That was an emotion filled update.. your vm made me remeber those wonderful moments,,