(ArHi) Arranged Marriage #4 Thread5 Link Added pg1

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fhussain237

@fhussain237

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

I cant tell u in words how excited i am to read the next update
I read chapter 23 which was really interesting
The sneak peak was amazing
Please update soon

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Pd2012

@Pd2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Great. Waiting for the update.

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simi888

@simi888

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Hey, many apologies for not commenting recently - been a hectic time to say the least!

anyway coming to the important part, each chapter has been better than the last, you really exceed yourself each and everytime.

the last chapter, where khushi doesnt want to leave the car, you explained her emotions and feelings so well. its a moment so many have probably experienced but never been able to put in to words, i know for i sure i have. my folks once left me at my aunts house as a teenager to stay the night and i remember just wanting to run back home with them but putting a brave face on. really i could never have described that emotion myself and you did so beautifully for me, so thank you.

reading that whole part just gave me goosebumps, arnavs car driving away from her leaving her alone brought tears to my eyes. they way you wrote it, i could completely feel her vulnerability and pain.

as always, am really looking forward to the next update and an update for Caught!

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Wow, that's an amazing vm. Cant wait for the parts now

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sizzlingstar93

@sizzlingstar93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Such a touchin vm..feel sad 4 khushi.. Hope she's ok..cant wait 4 d update..

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

I am so excited after watching (countless times) the VM for the next few updates...looks like Khushi is ready to blow 😃 and give Arnav a piece of her mind.

the VM is brilliant and intense...i could and have happily watch over and over and over again 👏👏👏