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Absolutely loved it K.
I feel embarrassed that I could not read the Thread 4 updates sooner that too after blatantly demanding that you update that thread soon. A Go-live made time fly and before I realized my favorite FF has a Thread 5 *Congratulations 🤗*
Absolutely loved the updates ... the two chapter s where Khushi was waiting for Arnav and then she was lost on the street was absolutely fabulous. Her pain & her loneliness was portrayed really well. Especially when the first drops of rain trigger off the numbness and the realization that he just doesn't care... never will maybe. Very emotional.
Khushi's outburst was beautifully done K ... loved the touch of the GH scene in it. It made the chapter all the more endearing. I am glad she finally said some of it. He needed to hear it. The guilt was there but I must say Arnav's sorry surprised me K. Did not expect him to admit that somewhere he had been in the wrong.
Loved the updates. Can't wait to read the next update.
I feel embarrassed that I could not read the Thread 4 updates sooner that too after blatantly demanding that you update that thread soon. A Go-live made time fly and before I realized my favorite FF has a Thread 5 *Congratulations 🤗*
Absolutely loved the updates ... the two chapter s where Khushi was waiting for Arnav and then she was lost on the street was absolutely fabulous. Her pain & her loneliness was portrayed really well. Especially when the first drops of rain trigger off the numbness and the realization that he just doesn't care... never will maybe. Very emotional.
Khushi's outburst was beautifully done K ... loved the touch of the GH scene in it. It made the chapter all the more endearing. I am glad she finally said some of it. He needed to hear it. The guilt was there but I must say Arnav's sorry surprised me K. Did not expect him to admit that somewhere he had been in the wrong.
Loved the updates. Can't wait to read the next update.
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