(ArHi) Arranged Marriage #4 Thread5 Link Added pg1 - Page 10

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Love reading this FF ... Looking forward to reading the next Chapter :)👏

Congratulations on new thread! 😊

Congratulations on fourth thread! Cant wait for the updates!

I saw your thread and this time i just had to comment. So i have been a very silent reader of your story from ...i don't know when. I follow it through your blog though, and well yes i am very lazy or rather it could be termed busy to comment. But you know, if i can take out time to read your story, i can surely leave a small comment to tell you how much i liked it. I won't be able to do it all the time, but when i get time i will surely write out a comment.

And well, your story, i LOVE it. I don't say this for a lot of fan fiction i read, but this story has that wonderful feel to it. Everything is coming together so gradually, its not rushed, there is time and your using it. That all together is the best part of this story. It makes it all the more realistic. It is giving the character's more scope to develop, in my opinion. And you don't only focus on Arnav and Khushi, there are other relations also which are just as important...which i just adore.

Now, i have just read till, when they arrive in the hotel room and its decorated for their honeymoon i think...leaving them feeling awkward 😆 But the plane ride was the best part, with you touching on little details - like Khushi's play with the buttons and configuring what each was for 😆😆 And Arnav's impassive aura, was not missed either. Wonderful play on words. And you write brilliantly.

I might go into hibernation again, but just know i follow your story when i get time. And i have a wonderful time reading it. You know how to touch on little details that bring together the whole feel of the moment, or a fleeting moment 😳

Well done :) Shiza.

Eagerly awaiting the next few parts. Also I'd like to add I think its a great idea to let everyone know unless they comment they wont be accepted to your blog should you move.This will definitely encourage people like me (I comment, but not often enough!) to comment more!

hey so this is my first comment on IF ... i honestly only joined this forum because i came across a story while randomly blog browsing. Your work is actually amazing and just wanted to say good job, i have been following your stuff on your blog too :) I cannot leave this story half way so here is me commenting and will try to do so regularly and again great job!

Hey, so I usually read your updates preloaded on my phone while I ride the metro to work (no internet service undergrounf 😭). Bc of that I never really get a chance to comment. Just wanted to say that your stories are amazing and I really appreciate that you continue them despite all the hullabaloo going on with the show. Keep up the good work! 😊

I'm finally ALL caught up!

Arnav is really annoying me, not because I want him to be all 'OMG! I love Khushi!' immediately but he seems very defeatist to me at least. As if he's had all the bad things happen to him in the world. If that makes any sense.

I wish Khushi would have hooked up with that cute guy from the Airport, I feel like they're get on even with the language barriers!

And just how selfish can you get Arnav? Leaving anybody (let alone your wife) alone in a foreign country and then not even answering her call? What if its an emergency? Which I'm assuming it is, since I doubt Khushi would call him otherwise.